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kuch ashq hi to he bah jane do....
bojh dil ka sara utar jane do..
gum ki talkhi to shamil ha rooh me meri
khushi ki ek jhalak aaj pane do...
teri raah me mera jikr na hoga kal..
aaj ki raat khud me sama jane do...
kisi bhi haal me thujh ko to pa sakungi na
apni tanhayi me mujhko bas jane do....
dur rahna gar thujhse naseeb hai mera...
yaado ki tarah hi paas aane do.....
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«Reply #1 on: December 27, 2010, 07:58:39 AM » |
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hahaha
bahut achhe aansu hai ji
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kuch askh hi to hai beh jaane do
na samjho ise peeda
kuch ashk hi to hai beh jaane do
tanhaiyon ke saathi hai khamoshi se nikal jaane do
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thanx
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«Reply #2 on: December 27, 2010, 08:22:14 AM » |
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priya ji.........bahot hi cute wali poetry he......choti si poetry me bht kuch kah jana...its really wonderfulll......muje bht aachi lagi ye poetry........lijiye kuch likha he iske jawab me
Na Aana Karib Mere Koi
Tum Sabko Bhula Dunga Me
Na Puchna Mera Haal Kabhi
Tum Sabko Rula Dunga Me
Na Sajana Koi Mahfil Mere Dar Pe
Khudko Sada Ke Liye Sula Dunga Me
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«Reply #3 on: December 27, 2010, 08:37:05 AM » |
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priya.......mastam post hai ye tumhari bht hi pyari....jaise tum.......
mg badhiya reply hai ji........
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«Reply #4 on: December 27, 2010, 09:00:57 AM » |
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waqt dene ka shukria nirala ji..
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«Reply #5 on: December 27, 2010, 09:02:17 AM » |
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ur reply is just superb mg.....
and thanx for likin my effort...
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«Reply #6 on: December 27, 2010, 09:03:22 AM » |
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thanx anu di...
mujhe or meri poem dono ko lyk karne ka...
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«Reply #7 on: December 27, 2010, 09:12:49 AM » |
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«Reply #8 on: December 27, 2010, 09:17:26 AM » |
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kuch ashq hi to he bah jane do....
bojh dil ka sara utar jane do..
gum ki talkhi to shamil ha rooh me meri
khushi ki ek jhalak aaj pane do...
teri raah me mera jikr na hoga kal..
aaj ki raat khud me sama jane do...
kisi bhi haal me thujh ko to pa sakungi na
apni tanhayi me mujhko bas jane do....
dur rahna gar thujhse naseeb hai mera...
yaado ki tarah hi paas aane do.....
bahooooooot khoob likha aapne |
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«Reply #9 on: December 27, 2010, 09:31:10 AM » |
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hmmm.... bht badi badi bate karti ho tum to....
really lyk ur reply koyal..
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«Reply #10 on: December 27, 2010, 09:31:51 AM » |
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shukria bekarar ji...
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«Reply #12 on: December 27, 2010, 10:14:22 AM » |
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tum ulta-sulta kaha likhti ho...
tum to sweet sweet bate karti ho...
or bewafa ke liye ashq baha kar bhi kya hoga koyal...
jise jana tha wo to chala gaya..
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«Reply #13 on: December 27, 2010, 11:32:30 AM » |
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kuch ashq hi to he bah jane do....
bojh dil ka sara utar jane do..
gum ki talkhi to shamil ha rooh me meri
khushi ki ek jhalak aaj pane do...
teri raah me mera jikr na hoga kal..
aaj ki raat khud me sama jane do...
kisi bhi haal me thujh ko to pa sakungi na
apni tanhayi me mujhko bas jane do....
dur rahna gar thujhse naseeb hai mera...
yaado ki tarah hi paas aane do.....
Mashaallah bahut hi khoob likha hai manzil ji...behetareen.... |
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«Reply #14 on: December 27, 2010, 12:03:40 PM » |
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hausla afjai ka shukria geet ji....
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