"Kuch aur baat hoti"

by Sunita Virender Singh on May 28, 2007, 04:05:19 AM
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Namaskaar dosto
mai.n jaha aapki mahfil mei.n naye hoon, par jaha ke bahut se dost mujhe jantey hai.n, unhi ki vajhe se aaj mai.n jaha aaye hoon, umeed hai aap sab dosto ka sath bhi mujhe mileya....aap sab ki nazar meri yeh gazal.....!


"Kuch aur baat hoti"

har kadam gar saath tera hota to kuch aur baat hoti,
bahho.n mei.n teri gar mera wajood hota to kuch aur baat hoti...

gario.n ko de eahe thy wo bhar bhar ke jaam firaq dili se,
humey naro.n se hii pilatey to kuch aur baat hoti...

gir gir ke sambhal rahi hoon main raahe-ishq mei.n,
wo thaam lete gar mera haath to kuch aur baat hoti...

janey kyu uske saath mera rishta be-naam hi raha,
gar de dete wo be-naami ko koi naam to kuch aur baat hoti...

zamane ka har sitam hans hans ke shate hum,
gar es se mil jati unhe zaraa sii kushi to kuch aur baat hoti...

gar na hota koi be-waffa kuda teri kudhai mei.n,
sab hote ba-waffa to kuch aur baat hoti...

"Sunita" mausam-e-bahaar hota har taraf,
gar na hota ehsaas-e-judai to kuch aur baat hoti....

25.05.07

aapki dost

Sunita Virender Singh
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«Reply #1 on: May 28, 2007, 05:32:17 AM »
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SUNITA My Dear Friend Subse Pahale to Aapka Yoindia par swagat hai.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

Aate Hi Dhamaka Kar Diya Aapne To Sunita.. Behad Khubsoorat Kalaam Pesh Kiya hai.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

Mohabbat Aur Judaai Ko aapne Aapne Is Rachna me Behad Khubsoorati se Sajaaya hai.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

Daad Kubool karen...!!
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«Reply #2 on: May 28, 2007, 06:02:30 AM »
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Sunita..

Very lovely feelings, and very well expressed...
Bahut hi khoobsurat rachna lagi aapki... Yun hi likhti rahiye... Usual Smile
That's a Great Job... =D> =D>

We are really delighted to have such good writers to join our hands here on Yoindia also...

And... You are most Welcome to our Beautiful World of Yoindia.... :flower: :flower: :flower:

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«Reply #3 on: May 29, 2007, 02:50:29 AM »
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hi sunita!  great work! and welcome to yoindia! Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: May 29, 2007, 03:37:51 AM »
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SUNITA My Dear Friend Subse Pahale to Aapka Yoindia par swagat hai.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

Aate Hi Dhamaka Kar Diya Aapne To Sunita.. Behad Khubsoorat Kalaam Pesh Kiya hai.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

Mohabbat Aur Judaai Ko aapne Aapne Is Rachna me Behad Khubsoorati se Sajaaya hai.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

Daad Kubool karen...!!


hello vicky.....aapne humey jaha accept kiya...bahut bahut shukriya.
aapne humey padda, saraha aur daad di....aapka tahe-dil se shukriya adda karti hoon....!

aapki dost

Sunita Virender Singh
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«Reply #5 on: May 29, 2007, 03:40:23 AM »
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Sunita..

Very lovely feelings, and very well expressed...
Bahut hi khoobsurat rachna lagi aapki... Yun hi likhti rahiye... Usual Smile
That's a Great Job... =D> =D>

We are really delighted to have such good writers to join our hands here on Yoindia also...

And... You are most Welcome to our Beautiful World of Yoindia.... :flower: :flower: :flower:



shikha ji aapne etne pyarey pyarey lafaz hamarey liye ahe hai.n bahut bahut shulriya......!

shayri pasand karne ke liye dhanywaad.

aapki dost

Sunita Virender Singh
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«Reply #6 on: May 29, 2007, 03:42:06 AM »
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hi sunita!  great work! and welcome to yoindia! Usual Smile


Vitasta ji namaskaar

shukriya aapne humey padda aur pasand kiya....!

aapki dost

Sunita Virender Singh
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«Reply #7 on: May 29, 2007, 04:16:56 AM »
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Namaskaar dosto
mai.n jaha aapki mahfil mei.n naye hoon, par jaha ke bahut se dost mujhe jantey hai.n, unhi ki vajhe se aaj mai.n jaha aaye hoon, umeed hai aap sab dosto ka sath bhi mujhe mileya....aap sab ki nazar meri yeh gazal.....!


"Kuch aur baat hoti"

har kadam gar saath tera hota to kuch aur baat hoti,
bahho.n mei.n teri gar mera wajood hota to kuch aur baat hoti...

gario.n ko de eahe thy wo bhar bhar ke jaam firaq dili se,
humey naro.n se hii pilatey to kuch aur baat hoti...

gir gir ke sambhal rahi hoon main raahe-ishq mei.n,
wo thaam lete gar mera haath to kuch aur baat hoti...

janey kyu uske saath mera rishta be-naam hi raha,
gar de dete wo be-naami ko koi naam to kuch aur baat hoti...

zamane ka har sitam hans hans ke shate hum,
gar es se mil jati unhe zaraa sii kushi to kuch aur baat hoti...

gar na hota koi be-waffa kuda teri kudhai mei.n,
sab hote ba-waffa to kuch aur baat hoti...

"Sunita" mausam-e-bahaar hota har taraf,
gar na hota ehsaas-e-judai to kuch aur baat hoti....

25.05.07

aapki dost

Sunita Virender Singh


bhoot khoob likha hai aapne

gar panv rakhe hote rah me dekh kar to tokhar n kate
jo n muskarte itrakar ishak me 'jigar to ansoo n bahate

wakat hota nahi hai sikandar har kisi ka ishak me yaro
jo ham bhee kabool karte aashki kisi ki to aaj begane n hote

netra.....

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«Reply #8 on: May 29, 2007, 04:26:59 AM »
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Namaskaar dosto
mai.n jaha aapki mahfil mei.n naye hoon, par jaha ke bahut se dost mujhe jantey hai.n, unhi ki vajhe se aaj mai.n jaha aaye hoon, umeed hai aap sab dosto ka sath bhi mujhe mileya....aap sab ki nazar meri yeh gazal.....!


"Kuch aur baat hoti"

har kadam gar saath tera hota to kuch aur baat hoti,
bahho.n mei.n teri gar mera wajood hota to kuch aur baat hoti...

gario.n ko de eahe thy wo bhar bhar ke jaam firaq dili se,
humey naro.n se hii pilatey to kuch aur baat hoti...

gir gir ke sambhal rahi hoon main raahe-ishq mei.n,
wo thaam lete gar mera haath to kuch aur baat hoti...

janey kyu uske saath mera rishta be-naam hi raha,
gar de dete wo be-naami ko koi naam to kuch aur baat hoti...

zamane ka har sitam hans hans ke shate hum,
gar es se mil jati unhe zaraa sii kushi to kuch aur baat hoti...

gar na hota koi be-waffa kuda teri kudhai mei.n,
sab hote ba-waffa to kuch aur baat hoti...

"Sunita" mausam-e-bahaar hota har taraf,
gar na hota ehsaas-e-judai to kuch aur baat hoti....

25.05.07

aapki dost

Sunita Virender Singh


Sunita.. it's really kuch aur baat hai.... So touchy . keep it up
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