KUCH BADLI HUYI TAKDEER NAZAR AATI HAI ... (Jasbir Singh)

by jasbirsingh on July 11, 2009, 07:09:54 PM
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KUCH BADLI HUYI TAKDEER NAZAR AATI HAI
YADOH KI BUSS EK ZANJEER NAZAR AATI HAI
GILA KAREY BHI TOH KAISEY AAP SEY
ROOH MEH MERE, TERI TASVIR NAZAR AATI HAI



JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #1 on: July 11, 2009, 07:46:37 PM »
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very nice and beautiful creation Jasbir ji.excellent. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: July 11, 2009, 07:48:32 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on July 11, 2009, 07:46:37 PM
very nice and beautiful creation Jasbir ji.excellent. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause

THANKS MADHU JIII


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«Reply #3 on: July 11, 2009, 09:47:58 PM »
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Beautiful Lines Jasbir Ji
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«Reply #4 on: July 11, 2009, 09:59:49 PM »
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Tadabeer se badlee huee taqadeer sudhaar le
Yado.n ki is zanjeer se apne ko tu ubhaar le
Gila karne ko yaraa tujhe koee zaroorat nahi hai
Tera rooh to hamesha se mujh mein hi basaa hai
                                     RH
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«Reply #5 on: July 12, 2009, 03:23:14 AM »
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kya baat hai  jasbirsingh ji.....

kuch badli si taqdeer nazar aati hai,
dekh te hi mujhe ,patli gali nikal jaati hai.
gila karen bhi to kaese unse,
lagta hai,aajkal kisi aur ko chahti hai.
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«Reply #6 on: July 12, 2009, 05:13:13 PM »
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Wah wah jas ji, Rajesh Harsh ji, & cara sabne bahut accha likha hai  Applause
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«Reply #7 on: July 13, 2009, 12:14:14 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on July 11, 2009, 09:47:58 PM
Beautiful Lines Jasbir Ji

Thanks Rajesh Ji

Jasbir Singh
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«Reply #8 on: July 13, 2009, 12:15:10 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on July 11, 2009, 09:59:49 PM
Tadabeer se badlee huee taqadeer sudhaar le
Yado.n ki is zanjeer se apne ko tu ubhaar le
Gila karne ko yaraa tujhe koee zaroorat nahi hai
Tera rooh to hamesha se mujh mein hi basaa hai
                                     RH

wah wah, bahut hi khoob Rajesh Ji, wah

Jasbir Singh
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«Reply #9 on: July 13, 2009, 12:16:13 AM »
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Quote from: cara on July 12, 2009, 03:23:14 AM
kya baat hai  jasbirsingh ji.....

kuch badli si taqdeer nazar aati hai,
dekh te hi mujhe ,patli gali nikal jaati hai.
gila karen bhi to kaese unse,
lagta hai,aajkal kisi aur ko chahti hai.

Thanks Cara Ji and wah, kya baat keh di aap ney... bahut hi khoob

Jasbir Singh
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«Reply #10 on: July 13, 2009, 12:16:46 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on July 12, 2009, 05:13:13 PM
Wah wah jas ji, Rajesh Harsh ji, & cara sabne bahut accha likha hai  Applause

Thanks Roja Ji

Jasbir Singh
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