Kuch iss tarhe hum jee rahe hain....(nazar ghouri)

by nazar ghouri on May 30, 2010, 02:59:41 AM
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Ahl-e-mefil,salaam-o-adaab,,aaj meine apne mizaj se kuch alag likhne ki koshish ki hai..meri koshish kahan tak kaamyab hoi hai iss se zaror agah karein.take care..



Kuch iss tarhe hum jee rahe hain, zamaane main...!
Lage rehte hain chaaro'n paher dil behlaane main..!

Kii thi taakheer zubaan pe harf-e-mohabbat laane main..!
Magar dair na ki ussne,humse door jaane main.........!

Itna aasaan bhi nahien hai, usko bhool jaana...........!
Waqt to lage ga sarkaar ,usko bhoolaane main...........!

Zikr mera na aae teri kahaani main to kya..............!
Tera naam to aaega zaroor, mere fasaane main...........!

Ajeeb kashmakash main hai,mareez-e-ishq tera...........!
Ilaaj-e-marz na chhupane main hai, na dikhaane main....!

Abhi banjarr padi hai, dil ki zameen dosto.............!
Kuch waqt to lage ga, naya pauda lagaane main..........!

Chalo "Nazar" haqeeqat se aagah ho bhi jaao.........!
Ab koi haasil nahien ,yun rooth jaane main..........!


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«Reply #1 on: May 30, 2010, 03:48:43 AM »
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bohat hi umda aur Haqeeqat bi hai badi Acchi lagi mujhe to salaam
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«Reply #2 on: May 30, 2010, 04:13:14 AM »
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  Kya kahein Nazar ji tareef me jo bhi likheng kam hoga,behad khoobsurat likha hai aapne, khaas kar 5th or 6th sher to bahut hi pasand aaya hume. Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: May 30, 2010, 05:42:36 AM »
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wah nazar saheb 4th 5th 6th bahut hi behtreen hai ,haan aapka yeh andaaz bhi masha Allah bahot khoob laga ,mai to pabandi se taqriban post padhta hoon,,lekin kabhi kisi to daad nahi di.aaj aise hi kisi user ne hame interfier hone ka mauqa diya..any ways xcellent work.woh andaaz apka iss andaaz se behetar please don't mind.
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«Reply #4 on: May 30, 2010, 03:22:40 PM »
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Subhan_allah mere bhai ek ajeeb sukoon deti hai aapki ghazlein.........matla bohat bohat kareeb raha dil ke

Kuch iss tarhe hum jee rahe hain, zamaane main...!
Lage rehte hain chaaro'n paher dil behlaane main..!


Ek choti si gustakhi....

Do kadam ka faasla kam na janiyo
Ek umr guzari hai dilo ke aane jaane mein..

SG
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«Reply #5 on: May 30, 2010, 05:03:31 PM »
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bhai nazar saheb walekum aadab ,,

yaar taqir ke liye mazrath khaw hon , Makkah shareef aya howa hon ,, zara job ko lekar ke piche khuch dino se parehsaan tha ,, aaj fariq hon to yoindia pe tashreef farma hon ,, bhai apke kya kahene yaar hamesha la jawab kahete ho .. har ashar dil pe acer chudta hai ,, hazaro dad apki is taqleeq pe qubool karen .. allah apko hamesha khush rakhe ..


apka bhai

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«Reply #6 on: May 30, 2010, 11:23:30 PM »
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Arif bhai bahot bahot shukriya aapki hausla afzai ka,apki hausla afzai ne mere hauslaon main jaan bhar di hai.
Quote from: arifuddin on May 30, 2010, 03:48:43 AM
bohat hi umda aur Haqeeqat bi hai badi Acchi lagi mujhe to salaam
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«Reply #7 on: May 30, 2010, 11:25:48 PM »
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tamanna ji bahut khushi horahi hai ke meri is koshish ko apne pasand kiya . mei aap ka teh dil se shukr guzaar hoon
Quote from: tamanna.pt on May 30, 2010, 04:13:14 AM
  Kya kahein Nazar ji tareef me jo bhi likheng kam hoga,behad khoobsurat likha hai aapne, khaas kar 5th or 6th sher to bahut hi pasand aaya hume. Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: May 30, 2010, 11:28:30 PM »
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khamosh gawah ,aapke iss kholoos ka main shukr guzaar hoon aapki raae aur izhaar sar aankhaon par,koshish karta rahonga ke kuch behetar likhon.
Quote from: khamosh gawah on May 30, 2010, 05:42:36 AM
wah nazar saheb 4th 5th 6th bahut hi behtreen hai ,haan aapka yeh andaaz bhi masha Allah bahot khoob laga ,mai to pabandi se taqriban post padhta hoon,,lekin kabhi kisi to daad nahi di.aaj aise hi kisi user ne hame interfier hone ka mauqa diya..any ways xcellent work.woh andaaz apka iss andaaz se behetar please don't mind.
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«Reply #9 on: May 30, 2010, 11:39:32 PM »
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sajid bhai kya likhen samajh main nahi aaraha hai..aap ne itni tareef kardi ke dil khush hogaya,,aap jaise shayer ki taraf se daad ek tohfa hai.bahot bahot shukriy dil ki gheraiyaon se
Quote from: Sajid_Ghayel on May 30, 2010, 03:22:40 PM
Subhan_allah mere bhai ek ajeeb sukoon deti hai aapki ghazlein.........matla bohat bohat kareeb raha dil ke

Kuch iss tarhe hum jee rahe hain, zamaane main...!
Lage rehte hain chaaro'n paher dil behlaane main..!


Ek choti si gustakhi....

Do kadam ka faasla kam na janiyo
Ek umr guzari hai dilo ke aane jaane mein..

SG
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«Reply #10 on: May 30, 2010, 11:44:35 PM »
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A.Qadeer bhai shikayat to hai aap se lekin aap ne wajeh batadi hai.Allah aap ko har mushkil se bachae.bahot bahot shukriya aap ne hamari is koshish ko pasand kiya..insha Allah bahot jald baat hogi aap se . Allah hafiz
Quote from: qadeer_junaid on May 30, 2010, 05:03:31 PM
bhai nazar saheb walekum aadab ,,

yaar taqir ke liye mazrath khaw hon , Makkah shareef aya howa hon ,, zara job ko lekar ke piche khuch dino se parehsaan tha ,, aaj fariq hon to yoindia pe tashreef farma hon ,, bhai apke kya kahene yaar hamesha la jawab kahete ho .. har ashar dil pe acer chudta hai ,, hazaro dad apki is taqleeq pe qubool karen .. allah apko hamesha khush rakhe ..


apka bhai

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«Reply #11 on: May 31, 2010, 10:02:05 PM »
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Wah Nazar Ji Kya Kehne Aake
Behad Khoobsurat Peshkash Ki Hai
Bahut Hi Umda Janaab...

Dad Hazir Hai.....
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«Reply #12 on: May 31, 2010, 10:11:33 PM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Nazar ji,heart touching poem.mindblowing creation.Sajid ji aapne bhi kamaal ke lines likha.excellent Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: June 06, 2010, 02:15:57 AM »
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hum dum saheb aapki hausla afzai mere shouq-shayeri ko jila bakhashti hai..aapka behad mamnoon hoon.
Quote from: HUM_DUM on May 31, 2010, 10:02:05 PM
Wah Nazar Ji Kya Kehne Aake
Behad Khoobsurat Peshkash Ki Hai
Bahut Hi Umda Janaab...

Dad Hazir Hai.....
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«Reply #14 on: June 06, 2010, 02:17:41 AM »
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shihab saheb aapki nawazish ka bahot bahot shukriya aap ne waqt nikaala aur iss haqeer ki ghazal padhi ..aur daad se nawaza
Quote from: Shihab on June 04, 2010, 07:04:38 PM
Wah Wah Nazar Sahab Kya Khoobsurat Ghazal Bazm Ko Ata Ki Hai
Bade Hi Khoobsurat Andaaz Ke Saath Saaf Saaf Lafzon  Mein Ek
Bahut Hi Pyaari Ghazal Likhi Hai Aapne Bahut Umda Peshkash
Bahut Khub Janaab....

Dad Hazir Hai Kabul Karen...!


Khush Rahiye...


~Shihab~
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