KYA BATAYEN

by ali_nadan on February 11, 2013, 07:24:56 PM
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Aadab,
Ek arse baad kuchh pesh kar raha hun. Ummeed hai pasand aaye gi..  Usual Smile

Kaise guzar gaye ye din ab kya batayen
Adhoore se jo reh gaye armaan, kya bataen

hain to theek hi thaak se lekin
andaroon jo hai khokhla-pan kya batyen

kirdar kisi or ka likha jaise nibhate chale aaye
daastan-ishq hai jo dil main,tumhe kya batayen

Kitna tadpen, kitna use yaad karen
Uske loutne ki na hai koi ummeed kya batayen

Jis ke dil ki har ik baat thi pata hame
Uski koi na khabar aaj, kya batayen

zamane ka taqaza hai, apnana parega kisi ko
Waisi chahat na hogi phir se lekin, ab kya batayen

Aadat si ho chuki hai haarne ki is zamaane se
Bade shareef-o-Nadaan jo thahre ham,ab rehne do kya batayen
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«Reply #1 on: February 11, 2013, 10:36:44 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Ali ji....!!!!
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«Reply #2 on: February 12, 2013, 04:29:02 AM »
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Aadab,
Ek arse baad kuchh pesh kar raha hun. Ummeed hai pasand aaye gi..  Usual Smile

Kaise guzar gaye ye din ab kya batayen
Adhoore se jo reh gaye armaan, kya bataen

hain to theek hi thaak se lekin
andaroon jo hai khokhla-pan kya batyen

kirdar kisi or ka likha jaise nibhate chale aaye
daastan-ishq hai jo dil main,tumhe kya batayen

Kitna tadpen, kitna use yaad karen
Uske loutne ki na hai koi ummeed kya batayen

Jis ke dil ki har ik baat thi pata hame
Uski koi na khabar aaj, kya batayen

zamane ka taqaza hai, apnana parega kisi ko
Waisi chahat na hogi phir se lekin, ab kya batayen

Aadat si ho chuki hai haarne ki is zamaane se
Bade shareef-o-Nadaan jo thahre ham,ab rehne do kya batayen

waah waah waah Ali sahab
bht bht khoob kalaam laae hain aap, kya bataen
iss purkashis kalaam par dil dil se daad hazir hai

welcome back ji Usual Smile

aate rahie
khus rahie
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«Reply #3 on: February 12, 2013, 04:48:28 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: February 12, 2013, 05:04:37 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: February 12, 2013, 06:00:42 AM »
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Very beautifully written. dheron daad
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bahut achhe
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«Reply #7 on: February 13, 2013, 05:50:48 AM »
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bohut khub likha hai aapne daad kabool karien
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