'Kyaa kartey ho aap?'

by abdbundeli on July 16, 2009, 09:33:07 AM
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Wo aaye, thaharey, gaye:
Mein thaharee chupchaap!
Yah bhee kah paayee naheen,  
'Kyaa kartey ho aap?'

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«Reply #1 on: July 16, 2009, 09:53:00 AM »
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Wah Abd ji bahut khoob,wonderful creation icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: July 16, 2009, 10:29:45 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on July 16, 2009, 09:53:00 AM
Wah Abd ji bahut khoob,wonderful creation icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
Thanks a lot Madhu ji!
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«Reply #3 on: July 16, 2009, 03:00:56 PM »
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Woh aaye unke aane ka intezaar to tha

Main karti rahi inkaar

Dil me magar iqraar to tha...
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«Reply #4 on: July 16, 2009, 03:13:13 PM »
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Quote from: Dastbardaar on July 16, 2009, 03:00:56 PM
Woh aaye unke aane ka intezaar to tha

Main karti rahi inkaar

Dil me magar iqraar to tha...

Naheen kar sakee mein kabhee,
Koyee bhee inkaar!
Mein unkee hoon; aur wo,
Hain meyrey bhartaar!!

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«Reply #5 on: July 16, 2009, 04:49:44 PM »
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Wah Bundeli Saheb
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on July 16, 2009, 04:49:44 PM
Wah Bundeli Saheb
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«Reply #7 on: July 17, 2009, 02:45:21 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on July 16, 2009, 09:33:07 AM

Wo aaye, thaharey, gaye:
Mein thaharee chupchaap!
Yah bhee kah paayee naheen,  
'Kyaa kartey ho aap?'

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Wah simple and lovely lines..

Kabhi bhoole se aajao dil ke pass bhi
Hai shayeek deed ke deewaro-der bhi
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«Reply #8 on: July 17, 2009, 03:20:24 AM »
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kya baat hai   abd ji.....

badi judaai ke bad woh aaye toh sayi,
thahere bhi,aur jat se chal bhi diye.
na kuch baat kar paye,
nahi rok paye unhe.
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«Reply #9 on: July 17, 2009, 06:43:27 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on July 17, 2009, 02:45:21 AM
Wah simple and lovely lines..


Kabhi bhoole se aajao dil ke pass bhi
Hai shayeek deed ke deewaro-der bhi

Thanks Roja!

Wo din bhi zaroor aayegaa, jab saath hongey ham!
Wo din bhi aayegaa, ki, door hongey ranj-o-gam!
Pahloo mein yaar hogaa, 'naa-nukar' naheen kaheen!
Muttahdah anaasir hain: kahaan hai, 'abd', waham?

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«Reply #10 on: July 17, 2009, 06:56:26 AM »
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Quote from: cara on July 17, 2009, 03:20:24 AM
kya baat hai   abd ji.....

badi judaai ke bad woh aaye toh sayi,
thahere bhi,aur jat se chal bhi diye.
na kuch baat kar paye,
nahi rok paye unhe.

Thanks cara!

Jaatey-jaatey kah gaye,
'Aayengey ham roz!'
Dahar gaye, aaye naheen;
Kahaan karoon mein khoj?

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«Reply #11 on: July 17, 2009, 07:08:39 AM »
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Badi achchhi mehfil jamai hai aap logon ne
Ati sundar
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on July 17, 2009, 07:08:39 AM
Badi achchhi mehfil jamai hai aap logon ne
Ati sundar
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«Reply #13 on: July 17, 2009, 12:33:41 PM »
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NiceLines Abd Bhai,.
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«Reply #14 on: July 17, 2009, 01:12:20 PM »
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Quote from: Azeem on July 17, 2009, 12:33:41 PM
NiceLines Abd Bhai,.
Thanks bhai Azeem!
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