Kyaa use ehsaas nahi hota?

by Mirza Nazar on March 14, 2016, 10:07:36 AM
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Kyaa use sunaai nahi deta?
Yaa wo sunna nahi chahta?
Har baar dil use pukarta hai,
Har shaam tanha guzarta hai,
Uski yaado ki saugaat ko, Har ghadi yaad se sambhalta hai,
Is gehre dard ka saaz, Kyaa use sunaai nahi deta?
Yaa wo sunna nahi chahta?

Mai chaahu yahi ke jitna chaahu utna kam ho,
Na hasi uske hotho se bichde, Na aankhe uski nam ho,
Jo barsaade ek "Nazar" muzpe,
Usi noor-e-nazar ka aalam ho,
Aankh bas jaaye muzpe uski,
Fir wahi wo kaayam ho,
Kitni dooriyaa hai darmiyaan.!
Kyaa wo dekh nahi sakta?
Yaa dekhna nahi chahta?

Chahna use aadat ki tarah hone laga,
Zikr uska ibadat ki tarah hone laga,
Hone laga kuch dard bhi is kadar,
Uski aankho ki nazakat ki tarah hone laga,
Wo ab bhi nahi bhoola humara mazak udaana!
Uska yaado me aana sharaarat ki tarah hone laga,
Aankho me, yaado me, wo hi hai basa,
Kyaa wo ye nahi jaanta?
Yaa janana nahi chahta?

Gar khata hai to bata de muze,
Mai bhatak raha hu pata de muze,
Jin khushiyo ko dhoond raha hu,
Unke ehsaaso ki ataa de muze,
Gar aas ye sahi nahi,
To is pyaas ki saza de muze,
Karta to pyaar behad hai use,
Ye soch paaye par samajh na paaye "Nazar",
Kyaa use ehsaas nahi hota?
Yaa wo mehsoos nahi karta?
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«Reply #1 on: March 14, 2016, 11:35:23 AM »
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Too long poem but over all its impressive
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«Reply #2 on: March 14, 2016, 12:45:29 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: March 14, 2016, 12:53:54 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: March 14, 2016, 01:36:21 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: March 14, 2016, 08:03:10 PM »
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bahut khoob.
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«Reply #6 on: March 15, 2016, 08:19:11 AM »
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Nice very nice
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