KYUuuuu??????? -Panna 2:Shayri for Dard -e- Judai

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«Reply #15 on: June 09, 2009, 12:53:55 PM »

BOhot Khoob Khwaish Dost...Bohot achcha reply...and very good again Pooja !!

Good work both of you ! Applause


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«Reply #16 on: June 09, 2009, 01:01:30 PM »

bahut bahut bahut shukriya......aapne pasand kiya
celmira ji


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«Reply #17 on: June 09, 2009, 01:14:29 PM »

Quote from: Rajbir on June 09, 2009, 12:42:30 PM

Bahut khoob Khwaish bro and Popat Usual Smile

bahut bahut shukriya raj ji


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«Reply #18 on: June 09, 2009, 01:39:05 PM »

Quote from: poppoetry on June 09, 2009, 12:34:24 PM

bahut bahut bahuuuuuuuuut khub Khwaish ji........gustakhi bahut pyari h
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Pyar tha tujhe jatlaya to hota
Dur reh kar bhi mujhe apna bnaya to hota

Apna bna leti teri aankho se nikle ashko ko
Itna mujhe apne karib laya to hota

Khud se hi karta rha swaal aur jwaab tu
Apni pareshaniyon ko aehsaas dilaya to hota

Gujre the dono hi raah k us mod se
Mudna h tjhe itna btaya to hota

Gar majburi thi teri yu muh pher kar jana
Jaate-jaate palko ko bhigoya to hota

Intzaar karte zindagi bhar ham tera
Laut aane ka vada nibhaya to hota

Mud jaate apni raahon se bhi ham
Apni khwaish ko dil se churaya to hota

Rehta har pal tu hi yaadon me meri
Gar is tarah se tu praya na hota

very good yaar property dear
Wakai aap or aapki shayari tabile karif hai
good wark
or aise hi likhate rahiye


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«Reply #19 on: June 09, 2009, 02:07:35 PM »

shukriyan amar ji.......aap sabki dua yu hi milti rhi to mao aise hi likhti rhugi........lkn plz aap mjhe phr se property mat likhiyenga Usual Smile


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«Reply #20 on: June 09, 2009, 03:05:44 PM »

Quote from: Rajbir on June 09, 2009, 12:42:30 PM

Bahut khoob Khwaish bro and Popat Usual Smile

Thankyou Soooooooo Much Paaji..Aapse Tareef Aa Jaaye To Chaar Chand Lag jaate hai..Thanks A Lot!!!


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«Reply #21 on: June 10, 2009, 05:07:45 AM »

Quote from: Celmira on June 09, 2009, 12:53:55 PM

BOhot Khoob Khwaish Dost...Bohot achcha reply...and very good again Pooja !!

Good work both of you ! Applause

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Mere Dost!!!


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«Reply #22 on: June 10, 2009, 05:11:32 AM »

Quote from: poppoetry on June 09, 2009, 12:34:24 PM

bahut bahut bahuuuuuuuuut khub Khwaish ji........gustakhi bahut pyari h
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Aapko Humari Yeh guztaaki pasand Aayi Jaankar Bahuuut Acha Laga..
Bahut Bahut Shukriya Pooja..

Aap Ne Likha Hi Itna Acha Tha Ke Jawaab Bhi khud Bhar khud Acha Lagne Laga..


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«Reply #23 on: June 10, 2009, 05:14:53 AM »

Quote from: poppoetry on June 09, 2009, 12:34:24 PM

Wah wah Wah Wah!!!! Bhaut Khoooooooooob Pooja..

Har Ek lafz,Mein Aapne Jaan SiPhoonk Di Hai..Itni khoobsurti Se Aapne Likha Hai Kya Kahen..Bahut Bahut Khoob Mere Dost..


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«Reply #24 on: June 10, 2009, 05:22:41 AM »

Quote from: @kaash on June 10, 2009, 05:18:14 AM

Bahot khoob likha hai PP ji aapne n nice reply Khwaish ji

Thankyou Sooooooo Much Kaashji..


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«Reply #25 on: June 10, 2009, 05:54:58 AM »

Wah wah Pooja ji and Khwaish ji,very nice and beautiful creation. Clapping Smiley


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«Reply #26 on: June 10, 2009, 05:56:37 AM »

Quote from: madhuwesh on June 10, 2009, 05:54:58 AM

Wah wah Pooja ji and Khwaish ji,very nice and beautiful creation. Clapping Smiley

Thankyou Sooooo Much Madhuweshji..


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«Reply #27 on: June 10, 2009, 07:04:13 AM »

Quote from: poppoetry on June 07, 2009, 10:31:04 AM

Kadam mod liye jin raaho se kyu dil unhi raaho se ja milta h
Tod diya jinse har rishta kyu dil unhi k kadmo par ja girta h

Meri zindagi ko ek pal me viraan kar diya jisne
Kyu uske liye koi kadwa bol mere dil se na niklta h

Na jane kaisi ye bebasi h kaisi ye lachari h
Kyu is dil par koi jor na apna chalta h

Jab b sochti hu uske baare me tanhai me
Kyu dil uske paas jane ko machalta h

Mere bure waqt me jisne sath na diya mera
Kyu uski kami ka aehsaas dil ko khlta h

Nhi ki tasleem usne kabhi bhi apni khamiya
Kyu dil uski har khami ko maaf karta h

Nhi rha wo ab meri yaadon me rehne k kaabil
Kyu din-raat dil uski yaadon me jalta h

Wah Kya Baat hai Pooja Dear..!! Lajawab Alfaaz aur Lajawab Soch Ke sath Likha Hai Dear.. Applause

Such Me Mohabbat me Aisa Hi hota hai.. Dil uski Har Galti ko Maaf kar deta hai.. Uske Kareeb Jane ko Machalta hai.. Har Lamha Uski Kami Ka Ehasaas Hota hai..!! Ek ek Lafz Such aur Khubsoorat likhai Pooja.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooooooooooooob..!!

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**~** Mann **~**


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«Reply #28 on: June 10, 2009, 07:18:33 AM »

Quote from: khwaish on June 08, 2009, 03:22:01 PM

Kuch Ki Likhne Ki gustaaki Kar raha Hoon....

Musafir the Tum Bhi,Musafir the Hum Bhi,
Naseeb mein Tha Apne Chalna,
Is Liye Sirf Chalte Gaye..

Tere Kadmon se Milaana Chaah rahe The Apne Kadam,
Par Faasle Aur Badhte Gaye....

Door Tujhse Ho Kar mehsoos Hua iss Dil-E-Nadaan Ko,
Ke Zindagi Aaj "Kyon" Aur "Kaise" Sawaalo Mein Hi Simat gayi!!!
Inn Sawaalo se Hi Bas Hum ladte Gaye....

Bure Waqt Par Mera Jisne Saath Diya Tha, Woh Tum hi Ho!!!
Ek Hum hi Hai, Jo Bas Raah Badalte Gaye...

Woh Baat Galat Hai Ke Har Ek Chirag Apne Ghar Ko Roshan Kar Jaata hai!!
Kuch Chirag Aise Bhi Hote Hai jo Khud Ke Liye Bas Jalte Gaye....

Haathon Ki Lakeeron Mein Tha Bahut Aitbaar Humein,
Par kisse Pata Tha "Khwaish"
Ke Waqt Ke Muutabik,
Haathon Se Apne Lakeerein Bhi Meeth The Gaye....

Tere Yaadon Mein Rehne Ke Bhi Naa Rahe Kaabil,
Aise mein Dil Ka dard Chehra Badal Kar,
Aankhon Mein Se Nikalte Gaye....

Bahut bahut accha reply diya hai aapne Khwaish bhaiya..

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Haathon Ki Lakeeron Mein Tha Bahut Aitbaar Humein,
Par kisse Pata Tha "Khwaish"
Ke Waqt Ke Muutabik,
Haathon Se Apne Lakeerein Bhi Meeth The Gaye....

Tere Yaadon Mein Rehne Ke Bhi Naa Rahe Kaabil,
Aise mein Dil Ka dard Chehra Badal Kar,
Aankhon Mein Se Nikalte Gaye....

Wah Wah ... superb


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«Reply #29 on: June 10, 2009, 05:40:40 PM »

Quote from: Mann on June 10, 2009, 07:04:13 AM

Wah Kya Baat hai Pooja Dear..!! Lajawab Alfaaz aur Lajawab Soch Ke sath Likha Hai Dear.. Applause

**~** Mann **~**

bahut bahut shukriya Mann ji.......bilkul sahi farmaya aapne......mohabbat me aisa hi hota h...chah kar bhi nafrat nhi kar pata insaan....tahe dil se shukriya


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