lafzon ki tasveer

by maninder.jeet.singh on September 23, 2010, 07:22:30 PM
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lafzon ki tasveer banayi , dil ko apne samjhaa liya
khwabon ka ek mahal banaya, yaadon ko mehkaa liya.

baithe rahe akele ghanton, sochte rahe yun hi tumhe
kuch sher likhe, kuch geet gaye,kuch zakhmo ko sehlaa liya

poocha kisi ne to chup rahe, naam tumhara nahin liya
zara sa soche, zara sa sambhlay ,ek hasi ka mukhota sajaa liya

chale wahan se ,fir rah se bhatke, toota jo sabr to ro diye
baadlon ne diya saath fir aisa, aansuon ko humare chhupa liya

chali hava fir thaam ke ungli, kadam kadam se mila liye
fir samjhaya, fir se manaya, fir meri mohobat ko bachaa liya !!!
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«Reply #1 on: September 23, 2010, 08:26:08 PM »
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chali hava fir thaam ke ungli, kadam kadam se mila liye
fir samjhaya, fir se manaya, fir meri mohobat ko bachaa liya !!!

Bohat khoob Maninder Jee........Bohat Khoob.
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«Reply #2 on: September 23, 2010, 08:33:09 PM »
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Manider jeet singh ji .......... Sat shri akal....

Bhut hi ache se byan kiya ........ mind blowing hai ji

i can relate to dis very easily lagta hai jaise kisi ne mera haal bhut ache se byan kiya hai ........"kamal" likha hai ji
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«Reply #3 on: September 24, 2010, 04:53:25 AM »
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Wah wah M jeet ji.very touching and marvelous creation.excellent.hats off. icon_salut icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: September 24, 2010, 07:06:41 PM »
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Quote from: maninder.jeet.singh on September 23, 2010, 07:22:30 PM
lafzon ki tasveer banayi , dil ko apne samjhaa liya
khwabon ka ek mahal banaya, yaadon ko mehkaa liya.

baithe rahe akele ghanton, sochte rahe yun hi tumhe
kuch sher likhe, kuch geet gaye,kuch zakhmo ko sehlaa liya

poocha kisi ne to chup rahe, naam tumhara nahin liya
zara sa soche, zara sa sambhlay ,ek hasi ka mukhota sajaa liya

chale wahan se ,fir rah se bhatke, toota jo sabr to ro diye
baadlon ne diya saath fir aisa, aansuon ko humare chhupa liya

chali hava fir thaam ke ungli, kadam kadam se mila liye
fir samjhaya, fir se manaya, fir meri mohobat ko bachaa liya !!!
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«Reply #5 on: September 24, 2010, 07:11:42 PM »
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Quote from: maninder.jeet.singh on September 23, 2010, 07:22:30 PM
lafzon ki tasveer banayi , dil ko apne samjhaa liya
khwabon ka ek mahal banaya, yaadon ko mehkaa liya.

baithe rahe akele ghanton, sochte rahe yun hi tumhe
kuch sher likhe, kuch geet gaye,kuch zakhmo ko sehlaa liya

poocha kisi ne to chup rahe, naam tumhara nahin liya
zara sa soche, zara sa sambhlay ,ek hasi ka mukhota sajaa liya

chale wahan se ,fir rah se bhatke, toota jo sabr to ro diye
baadlon ne diya saath fir aisa, aansuon ko humare chhupa liya

chali hava fir thaam ke ungli, kadam kadam se mila liye
fir samjhaya, fir se manaya, fir meri mohobat ko bachaa liya !!!

karke baate  bewafa ki,apna daman tumne bhiga liya
apni is gazel se tumne  jaane kitno ka dil chura liya
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«Reply #6 on: September 24, 2010, 07:37:41 PM »
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NICE POEM MANjeet ji........MENU JEET LIYA JEEEEEEEEEE.....

Mehkti yaadon ki bagiyaa me chehak rahe they hum
Khwabon ki bhul-bhulayeeya me behak rahe they hum

Samay ki aandhi ko theek waqt pe pehchaan gaye hum
Mohabbat ko apnee russwaah hone se bachaa gaye hum



Quote from: maninder.jeet.singh on September 23, 2010, 07:22:30 PM
lafzon ki tasveer banayi , dil ko apne samjhaa liya
khwabon ka ek mahal banaya, yaadon ko mehkaa liya.

baithe rahe akele ghanton, sochte rahe yun hi tumhe
kuch sher likhe, kuch geet gaye,kuch zakhmo ko sehlaa liya

poocha kisi ne to chup rahe, naam tumhara nahin liya
zara sa soche, zara sa sambhlay ,ek hasi ka mukhota sajaa liya

chale wahan se ,fir rah se bhatke, toota jo sabr to ro diye
baadlon ne diya saath fir aisa, aansuon ko humare chhupa liya

chali hava fir thaam ke ungli, kadam kadam se mila liye
fir samjhaya, fir se manaya, fir meri mohobat ko bachaa liya !!!
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«Reply #7 on: September 25, 2010, 03:09:49 AM »
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Bohat Achhey Janaab...
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«Reply #8 on: December 31, 2010, 06:29:58 PM »
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aap sab ka shukriya
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«Reply #9 on: December 31, 2010, 06:58:58 PM »
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wah bahut khubb
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