lagta hai ab (nam)

by poonamA on July 27, 2013, 12:43:13 PM
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lagta hai ab  begana vo
jane kuch anjana sa vo

dil ko khub jalata hai vo
marham kabhi  lagata tha jo

dil me uske rahte they hum
ghar bhi nahi bulaata ab vo

khawab thy jinki aankho ke hum
aankhe ab churata hai vo

pyar  nahi tha jo humse
kyo jhoota pyar jatata tha vo
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«Reply #1 on: July 27, 2013, 12:46:21 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: July 27, 2013, 02:38:14 PM »
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bahut khoob poonam ji..
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«Reply #6 on: July 27, 2013, 03:30:00 PM »
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dil ko khub jalata hai vo
marham kabhi  lagata tha jo

khawab thy jinki aankho ke hum
aankhe ab churata hai vo

bohut achha likha hai poonam .
but maqta is missing
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bahut khoob poonam jee..happy9
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«Reply #8 on: July 27, 2013, 04:12:28 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: July 27, 2013, 04:48:42 PM »
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Waah Waah Bahut Khoob.
Quote from: poonamA on July 27, 2013, 12:43:13 PM
lagta hai ab  begana vo
jane kuch anjana sa vo

dil ko khub jalata hai vo
marham kabhi  lagata tha jo

dil me uske rahte they hum
ghar bhi nahi bulaata ab vo

khawab thy jinki aankho ke hum
aankhe ab churata hai vo

pyar  nahi tha jo humse
kyo jhoota pyar jatata tha vo
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bahut khoob
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thx siddiquijee
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nice
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kittoo, jennifer, touhidjee thx
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angel11 very nice
Quote from: jennifer555 on July 27, 2013, 01:40:58 PM
Lovely lines....
Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on July 27, 2013, 02:38:14 PM
bahut khoob poonam ji..
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sahal, nashwani, hriday ravindrajee shukriya
Quote from: sahal on July 27, 2013, 03:30:00 PM
dil ko khub jalata hai vo
marham kabhi  lagata tha jo

khawab thy jinki aankho ke hum
aankhe ab churata hai vo

bohut achha likha hai poonam .
but maqta is missing
ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
Quote from: nashwani on July 27, 2013, 04:11:05 PM
bahut khoob poonam jee..happy9
Quote from: ~Hriday~ on July 27, 2013, 04:12:28 PM
Applause Applause Applause
Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on July 27, 2013, 04:48:42 PM
Waah Waah Bahut Khoob.
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«Reply #14 on: July 28, 2013, 12:24:39 AM »
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Quote from: poonamA on July 28, 2013, 12:21:54 AM
sahal, nashwani, hriday ravindrajee shukriya
Ur Welcome Poonamji.
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