**Laut aao** by Rahim

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«Reply #15 on: May 17, 2010, 07:30:54 PM »
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Bahut khoob likha hai Rahim bhai....!!!

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«Reply #16 on: May 17, 2010, 07:32:18 PM »
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Lajawaab Khwaish ji... bahut hi khoobsurti se likha hai aapne ye jawab...!!!

Bahut Bahut Khoob Dost!!!

Dil Ke Jazbaaton ko lafz Dena Asaan nahi Hota, Aapki Yeh Nazm Bakhoobi
Haal-E-Dil Bayaan karti Hai..Bahut Khoobsurat Ehsaas

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Bas Halaat ke Haathon Majboor The..

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Khuda Jaanta Hai Hum Bekasoor The...

Mujhe Zaalim Naa Keh "Rahim"
Aaj Shayad Tere Saath nahi Par kabhi Hum tere Zaroor The...

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«Reply #17 on: May 17, 2010, 09:22:42 PM »
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Shukriya Kapil Dost!
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