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Kuch yadain dil per jum jati hain
jinhay nah barish ka pani mita sakta haii
na hi unhay hawa ka zoor doour laiy ja
sakta haii
nah yee kisi terha hawa mai tahleel
ho sakti hain
nah mai inhe khurach ker
nikl sakti hain
aaisi hi ek yaad mery dil per hai
woh ekpal jisme humne dunya ji li
woh lamha amer ho chuka hai
lakin
aaj bhi tumhary doour hone ka sadma kam nahi hota
sunno ek baatkahni hai
laut aou... .....laut aou
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«Reply #1 on: June 10, 2006, 04:09:10 AM » |
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bahut khub Anushka............
mere dil ki pukar un tak nahi jaati
woh kahan hai yeh khabar bhi toh nahi aati
unke aane ki liye hamne mangi hai duayien
ab toh laut aao ki yeh duri ab sahi nahi jaati
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«Reply #2 on: June 10, 2006, 04:10:02 AM » |
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wah bhut khoob...
appne dil ka haal kya bataun
tujh bin abb koi pal katTa nahi hai
tasbur mein bass chuke ho tum aaise
ki koi aor chehra mujhe ko abb jachta nahi hai
Is dard-e-judai ka hai kuch aaisa alam
ki aaine mein bhi tere siwa,koi dikhta nahi hai ...!!!
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«Reply #3 on: June 10, 2006, 04:13:25 AM » |
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Bahut khub Jeet...
Neend nahee aati hay raatoon ko aaj kal
mukhtasar kion kertay ho tum baatoon ko aaj kal
Bay khaber hi chal paray muhabat kee raah pay hum
dekhtain hain is raah pay huzaaroon ko aaj kal :D
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«Reply #4 on: June 10, 2006, 04:31:38 AM » |
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jo hasrat-e-deedar yaar ki ajj poori ho jaye
toh iss bechain dil ko kuch karar aajaye
muddhat ho gayi in ankhon ko pyaas lagge
jo ajj kuch reham ho,to har arzoo poori ho jaye ...!!!
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«Reply #5 on: June 10, 2006, 04:36:10 AM » |
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bahut khub JEET ur ANUSHKA..............
woh meri jindagi se kuch aise juda hue
jaise tan se jaan juda ho jaati hai
hamne har aate jaate lamahe se pucha
ki unko bhi yaad hamari aati hai...........
ham toh apna har pal bas unki yaad mein betaate hain
raato ko chamakte sitaare hi ab hamara saath nibhate hain
laut aao ab toh yeh hawa bhi kuch keh jaati hai
kyu jab koi yaad nahi karta hame toh hame kyu unki yaad aati hai
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«Reply #6 on: June 10, 2006, 04:49:18 AM » |
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Atay sundar ranjana.... kebhi kebar.. Apne Aagaaz Se Aaj tak Zindagi Teri Hi Yaad Main Gum Rahi Phir Bhi Jaane Kyon Yeh ehsaas Hai Jaise Chaahat Meri Kam Rahi  ? |
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«Reply #7 on: June 10, 2006, 05:47:47 AM » |
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shukriya Anushka..........bahut sundar likha aapne.....
maine dil se tukho chaha
tujhko khabar na hui
mere dil mein tere liya
ehasase mohabbat kam na hui
tu dur dur mujhe hota hi gaya
mere dil ko bas tujhe hi yaad karne ki adat si rahi
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«Reply #8 on: June 11, 2006, 03:02:16 PM » |
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BAHUT KHUB AAP SABNE BAHUT ACHHA LIKHA...ANUSHKA VERY NICE.....RANJANA KA KYA KAHNA......
HAQ MERI JAAT AUR KHAAMOSHI,
KUCHH KHAYALAAT AUR KHAAMOSHI.
HI KITNA UDAAS MANZAR HAI,
CHAANDANI RAAT AUR KHAAMOSHI.
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«Reply #9 on: June 12, 2006, 09:20:14 AM » |
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shukriya ji ........aur bahut khub........
chandani raat ki khamoshi mein hui unse mulakte yaad aayi
waise toh kiya na yaad hamne apne ishqe ki rahagujar ko
par jab bhi suni unki awaz hamne, unse judi har baat bahut yaad aayi
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«Reply #10 on: June 12, 2006, 09:28:21 AM » |
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shukriya ji ........aur bahut khub........
chandani raat ki khamoshi mein hui unse mulakte yaad aayi
waise toh kiya na yaad hamne apne ishqe ki rahagujar ko
par jab bhi suni unki awaz hamne, unse judi har baat bahut yaad aayi Bahut acha ranjan... dil ki baat boldi aapnay.. Har judi hui baat sunker ... ayi tumhari yaad Yaadey to dehgeye... lekin dil hamara todgeye Kash hum tumper aseh fida na hotay.. Khuda kisi ko kis par fidaa na kare, Agar kare to Qyamat tak judaa na kare |
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«Reply #11 on: June 12, 2006, 12:21:32 PM » |
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bahut khub ANU.......
yaad ne unki mujhe diwana bana ke chora
na paa sake hum unko,yeh khel kismat ne mujhse kaisa khela
khaai thee kasme unhone jindagi ki raha per ek saath chalne ki
unki judaai ne mujhe anjaani raah ka musafir bana ke chora
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«Reply #12 on: June 12, 2006, 09:52:22 PM » |
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Wah bahut gehri baat keh dali aapnay Ranjana.... very sweet.
Chodgeye woh hamay akela... kisi anjani raah per
Jo raah hamnay saath chelnay thi saath, benker meray humsafar.
Ab to aks khushbo houn,bikharnay se na rookay koi
aur bikhar jaon tu mujh ko na sameetay koi
kamp uthti houn main yea sooch ke tanhai may
merey chahray per terah nam perh na lai koi
jis tarah khawab meray hoo gaey reezah reezaiss
iss tarah se na kabhi toot ke bikharay koi
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«Reply #13 on: June 14, 2006, 02:37:38 PM » |
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shukriya ji ........aur bahut khub........
chandani raat ki khamoshi mein hui unse mulakte yaad aayi
waise toh kiya na yaad hamne apne ishqe ki rahagujar ko
par jab bhi suni unki awaz hamne, unse judi har baat bahut yaad aayi aapka jawab nahi.......
Hum khaamosh rahe jindagi bhar,
aur unhe gumaan tha ki hume shikayat nahi unse..... |
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«Reply #14 on: June 15, 2006, 12:03:35 AM » |
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THX GUNMAN.. BAHUT ACHA LIKHA
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