laut auo...

by Anushka on June 10, 2006, 03:19:13 AM
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ranjana
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«Reply #15 on: June 15, 2006, 09:32:51 AM »
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shikva kar lete jo aap hamse toh yeh bharm na rehta
ki tera pyaar tha saccha nahi thaa koi dhoka..
na kaha tumne kuch ,na hamko rok ke awaz lagai
jab mud ke dekha hamne tuhjko ,toh haath aayi sirf teri ruswaai
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HANNU
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«Reply #16 on: June 16, 2006, 06:42:33 PM »
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Bhot khoob likha hai RANJANA ji apne.........last ki line
"Jab mud ke dekha humne tujhko,haath aayi sirf teri ruswaai"ye to bhot hi sunder likhi hai bhot khoob....................
                   =D>  =D>
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«Reply #17 on: June 16, 2006, 07:01:13 PM »
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Wah bahut gehri baat keh dali aapnay Ranjana.... very sweet.

Chodgeye woh hamay akela... kisi anjani raah per
Jo raah hamnay saath chelnay thi saath, benker meray humsafar.
 Ab to aks khushbo houn,bikharnay se na rookay koi
aur bikhar jaon tu mujh ko na sameetay koi

kamp uthti houn main yea sooch ke tanhai may
merey chahray per terah nam perh na lai koi
jis tarah khawab meray hoo gaey reezah reezaiss
iss tarah se na kabhi toot ke bikharay koi


bhot acha likha hai..............ANSHU............kuch hum bhi arg kartehai..


Yoon to koi bhi tanha nahi hota.................
Chake bhi apne pyaar se juda nahi hota............

Pyaar ko majburiya he le dupati hai.............
Vaarna koi kushi se bewafa nahi hota............

Kon si majburi ne ghera unko........
Jo humse jooda hona pada unko.............

Majburiyo ka ehsaas dilya hota haumko..........
Sayed aaj joodan na hona padta hamko!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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gumnam
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«Reply #18 on: June 17, 2006, 02:42:09 PM »
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shukriya ji ........aur bahut khub........


chandani raat ki khamoshi mein hui unse mulakte yaad aayi
waise toh kiya na yaad hamne apne ishqe ki rahagujar ko
par jab bhi suni unki awaz  hamne, unse judi har baat bahut yaad aayi
BAHUT HI ACHHA LIKHA AAPNE......

CHANDANI RAAT KE AMBAR TAL KE TAARO,PAL BHAR KO PALAK GIRANA,
MAIN RAHU NA RAHU JAGAT MEIN,MAT MERI BAAT CHALANA....
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«Reply #19 on: June 17, 2006, 02:45:09 PM »
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shikva kar lete jo aap hamse toh yeh bharm na rehta
ki tera pyaar tha saccha nahi thaa koi dhoka..
na kaha tumne kuch ,na hamko rok ke awaz lagai
jab mud ke dekha hamne tuhjko ,toh haath aayi sirf teri ruswaai
BAHUT KHUB......

MERE DIL PE PADI JAB SE TERI BEWAFA PARCHHAI,
JAKHMO KE PHOOL MILE,AUR MILI RUSWAI...
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Anushka
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«Reply #20 on: June 18, 2006, 12:53:45 AM »
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Wah bahut gehri baat keh dali aapnay Ranjana.... very sweet.

Chodgeye woh hamay akela... kisi anjani raah per
Jo raah hamnay saath chelnay thi saath, benker meray humsafar.
 Ab to aks khushbo houn,bikharnay se na rookay koi
aur bikhar jaon tu mujh ko na sameetay koi

kamp uthti houn main yea sooch ke tanhai may
merey chahray per terah nam perh na lai koi
jis tarah khawab meray hoo gaey reezah reezaiss
iss tarah se na kabhi toot ke bikharay koi


bhot acha likha hai..............ANSHU............kuch hum bhi arg kartehai..


Yoon to koi bhi tanha nahi hota.................
Chake bhi apne pyaar se juda nahi hota............

Pyaar ko majburiya he le dupati hai.............
Vaarna koi kushi se bewafa nahi hota............

Kon si majburi ne ghera unko........
Jo humse jooda hona pada unko.............

Majburiyo ka ehsaas dilya hota haumko..........
Sayed aaj joodan na hona padta hamko!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Thank you Hannu...

judaaii ho ke milan har adaa hamaarii hai
tumhaaraa shahar hai lekin fizaa hamaarii hai

shikaayaten bhii karen ham to kis zabaan se karen
Khudaa banaayaa ham ne ye Khataa hamaarii hai (NM)
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«Reply #21 on: June 18, 2006, 01:03:29 AM »
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Ishq aisa karo ki dhadkan mein utar jaye, Saans bhi lo to khushboo usiki aaye. Pyar ka nasha aankhon pe aise chhaye, Baat koi bhi ho par naam usi ka aaye. ...


Bahut khub Majid ..

khushbu ki tarah apke pas bikhar jayenge
sukun bankar dil me utar jayenge
mehsus karne ki koshis karna
dur hote hove bhi pas nazar aaynge
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«Reply #22 on: June 18, 2006, 01:08:06 AM »
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khushbu ki tarah apke pas bikhar jayenge
sukun bankar dil me utar jayenge
mehsus karne ki koshis karna
dur hote hove bhi pas nazar aaynge


Really  Puzzled !

 :D  :D  :D
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«Reply #23 on: June 18, 2006, 02:17:20 AM »
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Ishq aisa karo ki dhadkan mein utar jaye, Saans bhi lo to khushboo usiki aaye. Pyar ka nasha aankhon pe aise chhaye, Baat koi bhi ho par naam usi ka aaye. ...


very nice............

bahut mudat baad koi jindagi mein aaya hai
har shaye mein akas uska hi paya hai
chhaaya  hai woh jeevan mein vasant ki tarah
uske aane se mera jeevan muskaraya hai......
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«Reply #24 on: June 23, 2006, 02:34:28 PM »
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THX GUNMAN.. BAHUT ACHA LIKHA
...ANUSHKA JI AAPKI PHOTO HUME ACHHI LAGI.....GUDIYA JAISI...
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«Reply #25 on: June 26, 2006, 04:58:12 AM »
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Gumnam thx n plz just Anushka....
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«Reply #26 on: June 26, 2006, 07:51:32 AM »
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Gumnam thx n plz just Anushka....
ok Anushka.........

Aapke liye........

Arzoo hai door se dekhne ki,
Kareeb aana bhi chahte hai.
Tamanna nahi tumhe paane ki,
Magar khona bhi nahi chahte hai.
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«Reply #27 on: June 26, 2006, 10:41:17 AM »
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Gumnam thx n plz just Anushka....
ok Anushka.........

Aapke liye........

Arzoo hai door se dekhne ki,
Kareeb aana bhi chahte hai.
Tamanna nahi tumhe paane ki,
Magar khona bhi nahi chahte hai.


Bahut hi khubsurat likha Gumnam... sweet
yaad karte hai tumhe tanhai mein
dil dooba hai ghamo ki gehrai mein,
hamein mat dhoondo duniya ki bhid mein,
hum millenge tumhe tumhari parchai mein
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«Reply #28 on: June 29, 2006, 11:45:03 AM »
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Gumnam thx n plz just Anushka....
ok Anushka.........

Aapke liye........

Arzoo hai door se dekhne ki,
Kareeb aana bhi chahte hai.
Tamanna nahi tumhe paane ki,
Magar khona bhi nahi chahte hai.


Bahut hi khubsurat likha Gumnam... sweet
yaad karte hai tumhe tanhai mein
dil dooba hai ghamo ki gehrai mein,
hamein mat dhoondo duniya ki bhid mein,
hum millenge tumhe tumhari parchai mein



SUBHAN ALLAH! BHAYUT ACCHA!!!!

Kitna bhi chaho na bhula paoge hamein,
Jitna door jaoge nazdik paoge hamein,
Mita sakte ho to mita do yaadein hamari,
Magar kya sapno se judaa kar paoge hamein


Excellent Gum....

Chaaha bhi na bhul payeh hum tumhay
Jeevan ki yeh tanha shamein kaise guzrein bina tumhare
saath bitaye swarnim pal to chura le gaye tum saare
Dur rehker bhi nazdeek patay hai tumhay

Mitanay sey na mitay gi yaadeh tumhari
dil to dukhta hoga tera bhi yaad meri bhi aati hogi
Judaa na ker pai hum sapno sa tumhay...
par dekh tujhe masroof jahan mein
tadpa bhi na paati hogi
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