Lautoge Kab........( Ghayel )

by Sajid_Ghayel on May 04, 2010, 09:07:16 PM
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Dosto rozi roti ki talash me salo se dar badar bhatak raha hu laghbhagh aadhi duniya to ghoom hi chuka hu........par fir bhi apne ghar jaisa apni mitti jaisi baat kahi nahi..........aur kuch to badbaseeb aise bhi hai jinse apni mitti ka sath hamesha hamesha ke liye chuut gaya.........bas inhi jazbato ke sath ek geet likha hai...........waise to mujhe geet likhne ki itni samjah nahi chend haqeeqato ko lafzo me pirone ki koshish ki hai........apni mitti apna gaav unse jo pardesi ho gaye unse kya kehta hai aap sab ki nazar hai.....



Kach_che makano ki tooti khid_kiyaa.N
Kach_che raasto ki veeraniyaa.N
Poochti hai humse lautoge kab
Gaav se purkho ki nishaniyaa.N

Yeh zamee.N kya zamee.N ab tumhari nahi
Zindagi gaav ki kya tumko pyaari nahi
Mere damen q bhar gaye mehroomiyaa.N
Poochti hai humse lautoge kab
Gaav se purkho ki nishaniyaa.N

Maa bankar nadiyo me nehlaya tujhe
Chaav me peepal ki sualaya tujhe
Geet lori sa chidiyo ne sunaya tujhe
Kya wajah gaav phir bhi na bhaya tujhe
Mujhse behtar hai shehro me kya khoobiyaa.N
Poochti hai humse lautoge kab
Gaav se purkho ki nishaniyaa.N

Bhooli tujhko nahi kya mujhko bhoola hai tu
Bichad kar apni mitti se kitna akayla hai tu
Aa abhi laut aa mai bhi MAA hu teri
Tu saga hai mera na sautela koi
Gaav tera le raha aakhri hichkiyaa.N
Poochti hai humse lautoge kab
Gaav se purkho ki nishaniyaa.N

Sajid Ghayel
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«Reply #1 on: May 04, 2010, 09:21:08 PM »
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Wah bahut khoob Sajid ji.apne ehsaaso ko bahut khoobsurti se pesh kiya.great and touching song.marvelous creation. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #2 on: May 04, 2010, 10:00:28 PM »
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Vry Vry nyc ...........

BHut kuch yaad dila diya app ne .........

Thnx
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«Reply #3 on: May 04, 2010, 10:08:43 PM »
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Panch Waqt Namaz Ke Paband Ban Jaaiye
Phir Aapko Rozi Ke Liye Yahan Wahan Bhatakna Nahi Parehga.
Kyun Ki ALLAH Ka Wada Hai..Namaz Ke Paband Banoge To Main
Tumpe Rozi Roti Aasan Kardunda.....
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«Reply #4 on: May 04, 2010, 10:33:32 PM »
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wah bhai wah ,, kya kahene sajid sahab ,, bahoth qoob mere bhai .. dad hazir hai qubool karen ..har bandh khubsurath hai ..allah tumhe hamesha khush rakhe ..



duwa go

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«Reply #5 on: May 05, 2010, 06:08:31 AM »
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apne gaon ki judai ka bahut umda khayal diya hai aapne...
ashk le aaye jo aankho me wo alfaz diya hai aapne..
aapki jitni tareef ki jaye kam hai sajid sahab.,
duriyo ke jazbato ko ish andaz me pesh kiya hai aapne..,


bahut khoob... hello2 icon_salut
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«Reply #6 on: May 05, 2010, 06:53:18 AM »
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Wah kya baat hai           Sajid_Ghayel ji........


Lautoge kab- puchhte hai sab..

raha dekhti hai tere abbu ki thaki aankhen
har aahat pe teri ammi bhahar jaanke
fiki par gayi hai tere munne ki muskan
be-sabar hoti jaa rahi hai tere liye teri jaan
veeran sa hogaya hai tere bin ye ghar
do waqt ki roti bangaya hai iski jhad
shyad door se bejhi hui do waqt ki roti
bin tere saath khaye mazaa nahi deti 
issey baheter toh yahan teri kamayi hui ik waqt ki roti thi
tere saath baithkar sabko khaane ka aanand toh deti thi
ke aaja.... "Lautoge kab"-puchhte hai sab..
 
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«Reply #7 on: May 05, 2010, 09:16:40 AM »
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Wah Cara ji bahut khoob,very touching lines.great creation.bahut achi lagi aapke lines Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #8 on: May 05, 2010, 10:18:24 AM »
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Quote from: Sajid_Ghayel on May 04, 2010, 09:07:16 PM
Dosto rozi roti ki talash me salo se dar badar bhatak raha hu laghbhagh aadhi duniya to ghoom hi chuka hu........par fir bhi apne ghar jaisa apni mitti jaisi baat kahi nahi..........aur kuch to badbaseeb aise bhi hai jinse apni mitti ka sath hamesha hamesha ke liye chuut gaya.........bas inhi jazbato ke sath ek geet likha hai...........waise to mujhe geet likhne ki itni samjah nahi chend haqeeqato ko lafzo me pirone ki koshish ki hai........apni mitti apna gaav unse jo pardesi ho gaye unse kya kehta hai aap sab ki nazar hai.....



Kach_che makano ki tooti khid_kiyaa.N
Kach_che raasto ki veeraniyaa.N
Poochti hai humse lautoge kab
Gaav se purkho ki nishaniyaa.N

Yeh zamee.N kya zamee.N ab tumhari nahi
Zindagi gaav ki kya tumko pyaari nahi
Mere damen q bhar gaye mehroomiyaa.N
Poochti hai humse lautoge kab
Gaav se purkho ki nishaniyaa.N

Maa bankar nadiyo me nehlaya tujhe
Chaav me peepal ki sualaya tujhe
Geet lori sa chidiyo ne sunaya tujhe
Kya wajah gaav phir bhi na bhaya tujhe
Mujhse behtar hai shehro me kya khoobiyaa.N
Poochti hai humse lautoge kab
Gaav se purkho ki nishaniyaa.N

Bhooli tujhko nahi kya mujhko bhoola hai tu
Bichad kar apni mitti se kitna akayla hai tu
Aa abhi laut aa mai bhi MAA hu teri
Tu saga hai mera na sautela koi
Gaav tera le raha aakhri hichkiyaa.N
Poochti hai humse lautoge kab
Gaav se purkho ki nishaniyaa.N

Sajid Ghayel

Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khoob Sajid Bhai..

Bahut Hi khoobsurat Ehsaaso Ko Aapne Kalam-Band kiya hai iss Nazm Mein..

Bahut Si baatein Zindagi Ki Haqeeqat Ko Bayaan karti hai..Aise Na Jaane Kitne Log honge is duniya mein jo apne Ghar,APne watan se Koso Door rehkar Do Roti kamaane mein apni Zindagi beeta dete hai..

Bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: May 05, 2010, 04:12:36 PM »
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bohat bohat khoob Sajid bhai. har baar ki tarah bohat khoob likha hai aapne ....
bohat achchhe bhai kya kahein ab taareef mein.. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: May 05, 2010, 08:42:55 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on May 04, 2010, 09:21:08 PM
Wah bahut khoob Sajid ji.apne ehsaaso ko bahut khoobsurti se pesh kiya.great and touching song.marvelous creation. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft

Thanks for your time and comment Madhu.........
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«Reply #11 on: May 08, 2010, 07:14:37 AM »
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mere bhai rula diya aaj aapne mujhe........kasam se ghar kii yaad aa gayi pad kar


main akela hoon nahin meri maa kii duayein saath hain
main agar bhoola oose uski hichkiyaan mere saath hain
yaadon main hai woh mere aise jaise e bhanwar
jisme mein dooba jab toh phir na koi paas hain
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«Reply #12 on: May 08, 2010, 06:40:37 PM »
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Quote from: neelgold on May 04, 2010, 10:00:28 PM
Vry Vry nyc ...........

BHut kuch yaad dila diya app ne .........

Thnx


Badi meharbani Neelgold Jee jo aapne apna waqt diya...
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«Reply #13 on: May 14, 2010, 02:04:18 PM »
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Quote from: HUM_DUM on May 04, 2010, 10:08:43 PM
Panch Waqt Namaz Ke Paband Ban Jaaiye
Phir Aapko Rozi Ke Liye Yahan Wahan Bhatakna Nahi Parehga.
Kyun Ki ALLAH Ka Wada Hai..Namaz Ke Paband Banoge To Main
Tumpe Rozi Roti Aasan Kardunda.....

Thanks for your time and comment.........
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«Reply #14 on: June 01, 2010, 08:43:11 AM »
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Quote from: qadeer_junaid on May 04, 2010, 10:33:32 PM
wah bhai wah ,, kya kahene sajid sahab ,, bahoth qoob mere bhai .. dad hazir hai qubool karen ..har bandh khubsurath hai ..allah tumhe hamesha khush rakhe ..



duwa go

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Badi meharbani mere bhai jab aapke jaisa Bada shayer tareef karta hai to sach me aisa lagta hai ke mehnat zaya nahi gayee....
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