likh de (nam)

by poonamA on August 02, 2013, 01:13:01 PM
Pages: [1]
ReplyPrint
Author  (Read 914 times)
poonamA
Guest
Reply with quote


baithe hai udaas tere intezaar mein
ik pyaar bhara paigaam to like de
thak gayee hai naina bin nidiyaa ke
naam na likh chahe gumnaam he likh de

qismat me meri faily tanhayee hai
zindgi na sahi ek sham he likh de
mile chahe sakoon kabhi na mujhe
tere kuch khawab he mere naam likh de

chale jaienge dur ik din mar jaienge
pal do pal ghadi do ghadi he likh de
mana tu khafa to bahot hai humse
enaam na sahi koyee ilzaam he likh de
Logged
Similar Poetry and Posts (Note: Find replies to above post after the related posts and poetry)
Likh bheja.. by Anushka in Shayri-E-Dard
likh de sahra'ao ki rait par meri kahani likh de by jianrangrej in Shayeri for Dard -e- Bewafai
~~~Likh dun...~~~ by vitasta in Shayri for Dard -e- Judai « 1 2  All »
ki likh likh.............. Bhupinder DHILLON by BhupinderDHILLON in Shayari-ae-bewafai in Punjabi
Naam Likh Likh Kar Mera Mitaya Na Kar, by Rajnish.raaj in Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq
saahill
Mashhur Shayar
***

Rau: 86
Offline Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
147 days, 17 hours and 51 minutes.
Posts: 18610
Member Since: Jun 2009


View Profile
«Reply #1 on: August 02, 2013, 01:15:10 PM »
Reply with quote
waaah waah waah waah waah waah waah waah

likhne ko paas uske kuch na reh gaya hoga
        parh kar yeh paighaam thoda bechain hua hoga
tarhp kar baahon mein tumhari aa jaane ko
        dil se apne itna bekraar to zaruur hua hoga
Logged
kittoo
Guest
«Reply #2 on: August 02, 2013, 01:41:16 PM »
Reply with quote
Nice creation.  and lovely photo
Logged
nishi gahlaut
Guest
«Reply #3 on: August 02, 2013, 02:42:23 PM »
Reply with quote
superlike... Applause Applause Applause
Logged
nandbahu
Mashhur Shayar
***

Rau: 122
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
20 days, 4 hours and 11 minutes.
Posts: 14553
Member Since: Sep 2011


View Profile
«Reply #4 on: August 02, 2013, 03:36:44 PM »
Reply with quote
wah wah
Logged
soudagar
Guest
«Reply #5 on: August 02, 2013, 04:03:12 PM »
Reply with quote
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Logged
aqsh
Guest
«Reply #6 on: August 02, 2013, 04:05:32 PM »
Reply with quote
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah waah waah. bahut bahut bahut khoooooooob... dheron daaad....
Logged
Miru;;;;
Guest
«Reply #7 on: August 02, 2013, 05:01:46 PM »
Reply with quote
waah waah.....super..
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Logged
laaiba
Guest
«Reply #8 on: August 02, 2013, 05:04:19 PM »
Reply with quote
just beautiful,............daad,.............
Logged
Mohammad Touhid
Umda Shayar
*

Rau: 35
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
38 days, 12 hours and 35 minutes.

'I' 'Luv' d Way 'U' 'Forget' Me..!.!

Posts: 7160
Member Since: Aug 2009


View Profile
«Reply #9 on: August 02, 2013, 06:40:46 PM »
Reply with quote
waah waah poonam ji.. bahut bahut aur bahut khoob jajbaat hai..

dhero mubarakbaad.. Usual Smile

Applause Applause Applause Applause
Applause Applause Applause Applause
Logged
~Hriday~
Poetic Patrol
Mashhur Shayar
***

Rau: 115
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
101 days, 3 hours and 51 minutes.

kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.

Posts: 16243
Member Since: Feb 2010


View Profile WWW
«Reply #10 on: August 02, 2013, 10:12:03 PM »
Reply with quote
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne....!!!
Logged
sksaini4
Ustaad ae Shayari
*****

Rau: 853
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
112 days, 8 hours and 51 minutes.
Posts: 36414
Member Since: Apr 2011


View Profile
«Reply #11 on: August 02, 2013, 10:58:50 PM »
Reply with quote
so nice
Logged
@Kaash
Guest
«Reply #12 on: August 03, 2013, 03:24:04 AM »
Reply with quote
khoob likha hai!
Logged
poonamA
Guest
«Reply #13 on: August 04, 2013, 01:22:00 AM »
Reply with quote
thanx to all
Logged
MANOJ6568
Khaas Shayar
**

Rau: 31
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
42 days, 19 hours and 59 minutes.

Astrologer & Shayer

Posts: 12017
Member Since: Feb 2010


View Profile
«Reply #14 on: August 04, 2013, 05:42:32 AM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: saahill on August 02, 2013, 01:15:10 PM
waaah waah waah waah waah waah waah waah

likhne ko paas uske kuch na reh gaya hoga
        parh kar yeh paighaam thoda bechain hua hoga
tarhp kar baahon mein tumhari aa jaane ko
        dil se apne itna bekraar to zaruur hua hoga
GD

LIkha meine jobhi, use tum janab kabhi samjh nahi paate ho
pyaar ke naam pe bus aap vasana tak simat ke rah jaate ho
Logged
Pages: [1]
ReplyPrint
Yoindia ShayariAdab > Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari > Shayri for Dard -e- Judai > Topic: likh de (nam)
Jump to:  

+ Quick Reply
With a Quick-Reply you can use bulletin board code and smileys as you would in a normal post, but much more conveniently.


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
User
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
November 24, 2024, 05:11:29 AM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
mulaqaat nhi ho rahi,,,, ...
by saahill
[November 21, 2024, 09:01:29 AM]
KITNA BECHAIN ,,,, SAAHIL...
by saahill
[November 16, 2024, 11:44:41 AM]
HUME KAHAN ,,,,, SAAHILL
by Michaelraw
[November 13, 2024, 12:59:11 PM]
woh muj se mere khamoshi ...
by saahill
[November 08, 2024, 09:59:54 AM]
savaaloN ke hal kya javaa...
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:56:50 PM]
Kal halki halki barish th...
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:55:03 PM]
कवि और कविता
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:52:40 PM]
parhezz ,,,, saahill
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:51:59 PM]
mere lafzh kabhi,,,, saah...
by saahill
[October 30, 2024, 05:13:27 AM]
Geraft - (Sequel to "Beda...
by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:57:46 AM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.109 seconds with 25 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8506 Real Poets and poetry admirer