~~~Likh dun...~~~

by vitasta on May 20, 2009, 01:02:20 PM
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ek kaghaz ke purze pe zindagi ka falsafaa likh dun
main sab kuch khokar uski hone ka faislaa likh dun

mere likhne se na kabhi hua kuch na hi kuch hoga
kyun na ab akhiri anjaam-o-tamaam khalaa likh dun

jabran to aaj tak kisi ne nahi loota azaadi-e-'Viti' ko
kyun na main khud hi apni qaid ka silsilaa likh dun

jaane kabhi kisi ne itni nafrat ya pyaar kiya khud se
khwaish hai khudi se lene ki, le woh badlaa likh dun

mujh se door 'Noor'-e-mahapaara, kainaat gumsum
mere aur shab-e-shahoor ke beech, faasla likh dun
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«Reply #1 on: May 20, 2009, 01:09:43 PM »
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Quote from: vitasta on May 20, 2009, 01:02:20 PM
ek kaghaz ke purze pe zindagi ka falsafaa likh dun
main sab kuch khokar uski hone ka faislaa likh dun

mere likhne se na kabhi hua kuch na hi kuch hoga
kyun na ab akhiri anjaam-o-tamaam khalaa likh dun

jabran to aaj tak kisi ne nahi loota azaadi-e-'Viti' ko
kyun na main khud hi apni qaid ka silsilaa likh dun

jaane kabhi kisi ne itni nafrat ya pyaar kiya khud se
khwaish hai khudi se lene ki, le woh badlaa likh dun

mujh se door 'Noor'-e-mahapaara, kainaat gumsum
mere aur shab-e-shahoor ke beech, faasla likh dun

Wah wah bahut accha likhti hai aap Vitasta. Itne saal kahan gayab thi.
You are really wonderful writer. Keep up.
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«Reply #2 on: May 20, 2009, 01:15:34 PM »
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Viti Ji Viti Ji........ Jitni Tareeef ki Jaye Kam Hai.. Waqai aapke Likhne Ka Andaaz aur aapke Lafz.. Humesha Behad Khubsoorat hote Hain.. Lafzon se Khelna aap Khooob Janti hain.. Dil Khush ho gaya aapki Yeh POem Padh kar.. Bahut Bahut Khooooooooooooooob.. Applause Applause


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«Reply #3 on: May 20, 2009, 01:16:06 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on May 20, 2009, 01:09:43 PM

Wah wah bahut accha likhti hai aap Vitasta. Itne saal kahan gayab thi.
You are really wonderful writer. Keep up.
 
thank you so much roja...
bas kuch time likha nahi... phir jab dobaara start kiya to vapas aa gayi Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: May 20, 2009, 01:17:39 PM »
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Quote from: Mann on May 20, 2009, 01:15:34 PM
Viti Ji Viti Ji........ Jitni Tareeef ki Jaye Kam Hai.. Waqai aapke Likhne Ka Andaaz aur aapke Lafz.. Humesha Behad Khubsoorat hote Hain.. Lafzon se Khelna aap Khooob Janti hain.. Dil Khush ho gaya aapki Yeh POem Padh kar.. Bahut Bahut Khooooooooooooooob.. Applause Applause


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arre bas bas....zyada hi tareef kar di aapne Usual Smile 
bahut bahut shukriya aapka, aap logon ko achcha lagta hai, to aur likhti hun, sab aap sab ki, aur 'Noor' ki vajah se hai! Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: May 20, 2009, 01:19:06 PM »
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Waise Viti ji main kabhi jhoot tareef nahi karta.. jo Mehsoos hua wahi likha.. par ek baat to bataaaiye.. !!

Noor..... Kaun hain Yeh.. ? Winking icon_scratch

Zara Bataayengi aap.. tongue3


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #6 on: May 20, 2009, 01:20:25 PM »
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Quote from: Mann on May 20, 2009, 01:19:06 PM
Waise Viti ji main kabhi jhoot tareef nahi karta.. jo Mehsoos hua wahi likha.. par ek baat to bataaaiye.. !!

Noor..... Kaun hain Yeh.. ? Winking icon_scratch

Zara Bataayengi aap.. tongue3


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inspiration samajh lijiye Winking
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«Reply #7 on: May 20, 2009, 01:26:29 PM »
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Bohat Achche Vitasta Ji,.
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«Reply #8 on: May 20, 2009, 01:28:05 PM »
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Quote from: Azeem on May 20, 2009, 01:26:29 PM
Bohat Achche Vitasta Ji,.
shukriya azeem ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: May 20, 2009, 01:29:55 PM »
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Oho Ji....... Winking


Mohabbat Me Dooba, Har Qalaam Nazar aata Hai
Har Sher Me Tere, Pyaar Ka Rang Nazar aata hai....

Ab samjha Ki Khayalon Me doobi hai Tu "Noor" Ke,
Tabhi to Tera Likha har Lafz, Gazal Ban Jata Hai.....!!!


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«Reply #10 on: May 20, 2009, 01:32:29 PM »
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Quote from: Mann on May 20, 2009, 01:29:55 PM
Oho Ji....... Winking


Mohabbat Me Dooba, Har Qalaam Nazar aata Hai
Har Sher Me Tere, Pyaar Ka Rang Nazar aata hai....

Ab samjha Ki Khayalon Me doobi hai Tu "Noor" Ke,
Tabhi to Tera Likha har Lafz, Gazal Ban Jata Hai.....!!!


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aye hai, kya baat hai Usual Smile

ghazal bana ke rakh chodi zindagi usne
meri kahan aukaat thi ki kuch aisa likh sakun...
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Quote from: Mann on May 20, 2009, 01:29:55 PM
Oho Ji....... Winking


Mohabbat Me Dooba, Har Qalaam Nazar aata Hai
Har Sher Me Tere, Pyaar Ka Rang Nazar aata hai....

Ab samjha Ki Khayalon Me doobi hai Tu "Noor" Ke,
Tabhi to Tera Likha har Lafz, Gazal Ban Jata Hai.....!!!


**~** Mann **~**

Mashallah Bohat Achcha Likha Hai Vikas Bhai,
Bohat Achche,.
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«Reply #12 on: May 20, 2009, 01:35:26 PM »
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Bahut shukriya Azeem Bhai.. Usual Smile


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aye hai, kya baat hai Usual Smile

ghazal bana ke rakh chodi zindagi usne
meri kahan aukaat thi ki kuch aisa likh sakun...

wah kya baat hai Viti ji..

Shokh Gazal Kahata Hai, Tera Chaahne wala Tujhe,
Bas Yehi Soch ke Tu, Qalam se Jaadoo Kar Jati hai..!!!

Such hai na..? Hahahaha Winking


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Quote from: Mann on May 20, 2009, 01:41:38 PM
wah kya baat hai Viti ji..

Shokh Gazal Kahata Hai, Tera Chaahne wala Tujhe,
Bas Yehi Soch ke Tu, Qalam se Jaadoo Kar Jati hai..!!!

Such hai na..? Hahahaha Winking


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hahaha aisa hota to shayad isse achcha likh jaati uske liye...khair... Usual Smile

jadu to uski aankhon ka hai jo chha gaya mujh par
haal ye hai ki ab to uske bina zindagi mujhe bezaar si lagti hai...
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