Likha Na Jayega

by manjot on June 06, 2012, 08:08:49 PM
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yaro ne kaha aap maikhane mein aate nahi
Humne kaha Bin saki humse piya na jayega..
dosto ne kaha aapne mahefil sazayi nahi
Humne kaha bin unke humse sunaya na jayega
mazboor hai "Aasiir" mahobat ke aage..
unki zudai mein humse kuch likha na jayega..
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«Reply #1 on: June 07, 2012, 01:39:07 AM »
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waah janab boht khub agar space dalte to aur acha lagta parhne mein
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«Reply #2 on: June 07, 2012, 04:05:58 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: June 07, 2012, 09:55:39 AM »
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Quote from: saahill on June 07, 2012, 01:39:07 AM
waah janab boht khub agar space dalte to aur acha lagta parhne mein
Thanks ! But can't understand where can I put the spaces.
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«Reply #4 on: June 07, 2012, 09:57:54 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on June 07, 2012, 04:05:58 AM
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«Reply #5 on: June 09, 2012, 06:42:42 PM »
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Applause
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«Reply #7 on: June 10, 2012, 10:11:36 AM »
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Aacha Bana Hai...Applause Applause Applause
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