Lout aaye hain abra: tum bhi sanam aa jaaou!

by abdbundeli on June 28, 2009, 12:46:35 PM
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Lout aaye hain abra: tum bhi balam aa jaaou!
Phir sey chhaaye hain abra, ab to sanam aa jaaou!!
Hijra mein yuun bhi, 'abd', intizaar rahtaa hai;
Gharhgharhaaye hain abra, chashm hain nam aa jaaou!!

                            - abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: June 28, 2009, 04:17:27 PM »
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Bahoot Khoob ABD Ji.. bahoot Hi Khoob!
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«Reply #2 on: June 28, 2009, 04:33:48 PM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Abd Ji
Achchha likha hai
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #3 on: June 28, 2009, 04:48:40 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on June 28, 2009, 04:17:27 PM
Bahoot Khoob ABD Ji.. bahoot Hi Khoob!
Shukriyah Sophi ji!
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«Reply #4 on: June 28, 2009, 04:49:46 PM »
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on June 28, 2009, 04:33:48 PM
Wah wah bahut khoob Abd Ji
Achchha likha hai
SARVESH RASTOGI
Shukriyah SARVESH RASTOGI ji!
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«Reply #5 on: June 28, 2009, 10:51:15 PM »
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Bahut Bahut khoob, Abd Ji! Applause
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«Reply #6 on: June 29, 2009, 06:16:53 AM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Abd ji. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: June 29, 2009, 06:27:18 AM »
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Quote from: Deepati on June 28, 2009, 10:51:15 PM
Bahut Bahut khoob, Abd Ji! Applause
Quote from: madhuwesh on June 29, 2009, 06:16:53 AM
Wah wah bahut khoob Abd ji. Applause Applause Applause
Thanks a lot, Deepati ji/ Madhu ji!
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«Reply #8 on: October 02, 2009, 03:06:27 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on June 28, 2009, 12:46:35 PM

Lout aaye hain abra: tum bhi balam aa jaaou!
Phir sey chhaaye hain abra, ab to sanam aa jaaou!!
Hijra mein yuun bhi, 'abd', intizaar rahtaa hai;
Gharhgharhaaye hain abra, chashm hain nam aa jaaou!!

                            - abd bundeli

Ho jaye berson ki aankhon ki khatak, jaati nahi,
Jab koyi tinka uda, ghar apna yaad aaya mujhe..
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«Reply #9 on: October 04, 2009, 08:58:13 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on October 02, 2009, 03:06:27 AM

Ho jaye berson ki aankhon ki khatak, jaati nahi,
Jab koyi tinka uda, ghar apna yaad aaya mujhe..

Aashiyaan bantaa hai, tinkoun mein bikhartaa bhee hai!
Fir nayaa aashiyaan bantaa hai, bikharney key liye!
Yeh bikhar jaanaa zarooree hai, nou-rawaanee ko;
Gunchah-e-husn paayedaar hai, jharney key liye!!

                            - abd bundeli
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«Reply #10 on: October 18, 2009, 01:10:18 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on October 04, 2009, 08:58:13 AM

Aashiyaan bantaa hai, tinkoun mein bikhartaa bhee hai!
Fir nayaa aashiyaan bantaa hai, bikharney key liye!
Yeh bikhar jaanaa zarooree hai, nou-rawaanee ko;
Gunchah-e-husn paayedaar hai, jharney key liye!!

                            - abd bundeli

Kisi se kahu ki nahi kahu
Yeh jo dil ki baat hai
Kehne ko saat apne ek dunia chalti hai
Per chupke is dil mein tanhayi palti hai
Bas yaad saath hai, teri yaad saat hai

Mai jahan rahu, mai kahi bhi rahu
Teri yaad saat hai, tera pyar saat hai sad7
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«Reply #11 on: October 19, 2009, 09:31:07 AM »
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Beautiful lines Roja ji.marvelous creation.excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: October 24, 2009, 04:37:19 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on October 18, 2009, 01:10:18 PM
Kisi se kahu ki nahi kahu
Yeh jo dil ki baat hai
Kehne ko saat apne ek dunia chalti hai
Per chupke is dil mein tanhayi palti hai
Bas yaad saath hai, teri yaad saat hai

Mai jahan rahu, mai kahi bhi rahu
Teri yaad saat hai, tera pyar saat hai sad7


Waah! Kyaa hee khoob, Roja!
This is, I feel, an inborn vibration of a kind of true love! Such vibrations often reach too deep and cover very long distances to be truly felt by the saperated counterpart!

Megh baney ghumrhey-ghirey
Wirahin key uchchhwaas!
Wirahee key praantar chaley
Sokh pawan unchaas!!

            - 'Ramwatiya'
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«Reply #13 on: November 16, 2009, 11:59:19 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on October 24, 2009, 04:37:19 PM

Waah! Kyaa hee khoob, Roja!
This is, I feel, an inborn vibration of a kind of true love! Such vibrations often reach too deep and cover very long distances to be truly felt by the saperated counterpart!

Megh baney ghumrhey-ghirey
Wirahin key uchchhwaas!
Wirahee key praantar chaley
Sokh pawan unchaas!!

            - 'Ramwatiya'

Very true and well said Uncle ji... I dont want to get myself separated from YOINDIA. But I am being separated.... with or without consent of the ADMIN.
Anyway, I am not concerned about this. As a guest, I can follow your creation Uncle ji...


Nahi ruk sakte kadam
Ishq mein dil lagane ke baad
Mai apni jaan de dungi
Tumse juda ho jaane ke baad...
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«Reply #14 on: August 06, 2010, 11:22:30 AM »
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Quote from: Roja_malar on November 16, 2009, 11:59:19 PM
Very true and well said Uncle ji... I dont want to get myself separated from YOINDIA. But I am being separated.... with or without consent of the ADMIN.
Anyway, I am not concerned about this. As a guest, I can follow your creation Uncle ji...


Nahi ruk sakte kadam
Ishq mein dil lagane ke baad
Mai apni jaan de dungi
Tumse juda ho jaane ke baad...

Thanks Dear Roja!

I,m sorry! But why it's so?

Muskaaye kis key liye,
Ab, shashi baarambaar?
Wilag huaa hai neerh sey,
Unsey unkaa pyaar!

Aisaa kyaa kah, gaye wo:
Tan-man huaa udaas?
Lagtaa hai, ravi-shashi binaa,
Soonaa hai aakaash!

             - abd bundeli
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