Ma Challie Jaou Gi

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Ma Challie Jaou Gi

Fir Kabhi Bhi Laout Kr Na Aoue Gi

Har Manzil Ka Kinnara Chor Jaou Gi

Fir Kabhi Bhi Sahil Pr Na Aoue Gi  

Dhood Na paye Gi Dunniya Mujhe

Ma Assie Dunniya May Ab Challie Jaoue Gi

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«Reply #1 on: September 11, 2013, 12:39:09 AM »
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 Applause nice...aare yaar jana mat.fir apki kavitaein kaisi pad paenge hum sab
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Mind Blowing Creation.
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«Reply #3 on: September 11, 2013, 08:35:46 AM »
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beautiful par sach men chalee n jaanaa
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«Reply #4 on: September 11, 2013, 08:49:53 AM »
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bahut khoob, par jane ki jid karo na
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«Reply #5 on: September 11, 2013, 01:32:41 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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bahot achey Applause Clapping Smiley Applause - jaane ki baat mat kijiye, hamare saath rahiye Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: September 11, 2013, 02:13:25 PM »
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NICE LINES BUT JAANA MAT
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«Reply #8 on: September 11, 2013, 08:54:59 PM »
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Bahut khoob...
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Quote from: ambalika sharma on September 11, 2013, 12:39:09 AM
Applause nice...aare yaar jana mat.fir apki kavitaein kaisi pad paenge hum sab

hmmmm bhut shukriya appa ji
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on September 11, 2013, 12:48:13 AM
Mind Blowing Creation.

bhut shukriya ji
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Quote from: sksaini4 on September 11, 2013, 08:35:46 AM
beautiful par sach men chalee n jaanaa

bhut shukriya ji
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Quote from: nandbahu on September 11, 2013, 08:49:53 AM
bahut khoob, par jane ki jid karo na

bhut shukriya ji
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on September 11, 2013, 01:32:41 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

bhut shukriya ji
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Quote from: Iqtedar on September 11, 2013, 02:05:41 PM
bahot achey Applause Clapping Smiley Applause - jaane ki baat mat kijiye, hamare saath rahiye Usual Smile

bhut shukriya ji
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