!!!..Main bhi patthar sa hone laga..!!!

by nashwani on September 11, 2013, 01:17:32 AM
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Khud se main khafa hone laga,,
Jo tujhse main judaa hone laga..

Wafaa ke sile mile kuchh tujhse aise ki,
Nazaro me teri, main bewafa hone laga..

Khwabo me chhaayaa rehta tha,,
Ankho me tu samaaya rehta tha,,
Ankho se ab tu chhalak aata hai,,  
Beh ke tu saabit kya karna chahta hai,,
Ki naam-o-nisha main apna khone laga..

Galat faimiyaa.N paal rakhi hai tumne,,
Fanaa tha ab tak, ab main zinda hone laga..

Nafrato.N me apne, shiddat paayi hai,,
Magar usse zayada chaahat nibhai hai,,
Ab kaise haraa dun tujhe khud jeet kar,,
Ishq kiya tujhse, naa ki maine koi ladai hai,,
Tu muskurate rahe, isliye main tha rone laga..

Khushi to hui hogi, zameen pe ek sathi pa ke,,
Khuda dekh le, main bhi patthar sa hone laga..!!! Ñ  
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«Reply #1 on: September 11, 2013, 01:36:17 AM »
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Waah .... Achchha likha Nashwani ji
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«Reply #2 on: September 11, 2013, 01:46:22 AM »
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खुद से मैं खफा होने लगा,,
जो तुझसे मैं जुदा होने लगा..
Waah waah bhai Nshwaniji Kamaal ka Kalaam Pesh kiya hai Aapne.
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«Reply #3 on: September 11, 2013, 02:02:09 AM »
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Quote from: zarraa on September 11, 2013, 01:36:17 AM
Waah .... Achchha likha Nashwani ji

Bahut shukriya zarra sahab..happy9
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«Reply #4 on: September 11, 2013, 02:02:57 AM »
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on September 11, 2013, 01:46:22 AM
खुद से मैं खफा होने लगा,,
जो तुझसे मैं जुदा होने लगा..
Waah waah bhai Nshwaniji Kamaal ka Kalaam Pesh kiya hai Aapne.

Pasand karne ka Bahut shukriya ravi jee..happy9

Btw pic mast lagai hai aapne..Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: September 11, 2013, 02:04:30 AM »
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You'er Welcome Nshwaniji.
Quote from: nashwani on September 11, 2013, 02:02:57 AM
Pasand karne ka Bahut shukriya ravi jee..happy9

Btw pic mast lagai hai aapne..Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: September 11, 2013, 08:33:55 AM »
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bahut khoob ashwani
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«Reply #7 on: September 11, 2013, 08:48:43 AM »
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wah Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: September 11, 2013, 09:35:11 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob..............
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«Reply #9 on: September 11, 2013, 01:35:22 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut bahut sundar likhaa hai aapne Ashwani ji....!!!
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«Reply #10 on: September 11, 2013, 02:07:42 PM »
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Kya baat hai .. bhot acha  Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: September 11, 2013, 03:09:25 PM »
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bahot achey, dheron daaad waaaaah aur waaah Applause Clapping Smiley Applause
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«Reply #12 on: September 11, 2013, 03:38:20 PM »
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bahut badhiya nashwani jee
dil khol kar likha hai aapne..
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«Reply #13 on: September 11, 2013, 08:05:37 PM »
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Bohot achchha likha hai aap ne. Yaqeenan jab insaan ko us ki moHabbat ka Sila na mile to us meN bhi badlaao aane lagta hai. Aap ke jaz'baat qaabil e qadr haiN. Meri dili daad qabool farmayeN.
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«Reply #14 on: September 11, 2013, 08:50:56 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Ashwani as usual bahut bahut bahut achchi peshkash.. hazaron dili daaaaaaaad...
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