-----/// Main so jaaungaa ///----- Hriday

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abhi   baaki   hai  raat, aur  thodaa   dhal  jaane  do  main  so  jaaungaa
abhi   baaki   hai  dard, kaagaz  par  nikal  jaane  do  main  so  jaaungaa

abhi   to   pi  bhi  nahi  hai  sharaab,  magar  nashaa  saa  ho  rahaa  hai
behosh  hoon  main  abhi, thodaa  sambhal  jaane do main so jaaungaa

aansoo  aankhon  se  mere  jaane kahaan gum hain, koi bataa de mujhe
main  abhi  paththar  hoon, thodaa  pighal  jaane  do main so jaaungaa

abhi  to  meraa  ji  bhi  nahi  bharaa  mohabbat  se, kaise so jaaun main
parwaane  ko  shamaa  mein   thodaa aur jal jaane do main so jaaungaa

band  kar  lun  aankhen  to  ek  usi kaa chehraa mujhe  nazar aataa hai
mujhse thodaa duur woh  guzraa huwaa kal jaane do main so jaaungaa

bahut   bhaari   bhaari   saa   lagtaa  hai  dil  par, dard  uski  judaai  kaa
dard  ko  aaj mere, ban koi haseen  ghazal  jaane  do  main so jaaungaa

bahut  shor  hai  abhi  behti hui in hawaaon mein, jaane kab  shaant ho
abhi  toofaan  hai, mausam ko thodaa badal jaane do main so  jaaungaa


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«Reply #1 on: September 09, 2013, 04:53:28 AM »
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Bahut Khoob

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«Reply #2 on: September 09, 2013, 09:16:46 AM »
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bahut khoob aaj ka rau tumhaare naam jo ki thodi der men doonga
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«Reply #3 on: September 09, 2013, 09:45:09 AM »
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bohut khub hridhay ji
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Waah! Kya baat hai!
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«Reply #5 on: September 09, 2013, 01:01:09 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob........!!

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waah waah waah Hriday Ji....bahut khoob likha hai aapne.. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: September 09, 2013, 01:46:10 PM »
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dili daad, waaaaah waaaah
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«Reply #8 on: September 09, 2013, 02:55:40 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khooob Hriday Ji..

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waah ,...........bohat c daad,...........
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai hriday jee..

bole to ekdum jhakkas..

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«Reply #11 on: September 10, 2013, 03:37:56 PM »
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«Reply #12 on: September 10, 2013, 08:01:58 PM »
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«Reply #14 on: September 15, 2013, 01:54:14 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Ravi ji.....!!!

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