Main tujhse bichad kar.....(Ghayel)

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Aa dekh le kya ban gaya, main tujhse bichad kar
Bikhra pada hu har jagah, main tujhse bichad kar

Na neend hain na chain na jeene ki aarzoo
Zinda hu magar mar gaya, main tujhse bichad kar

Deen gaya duniya gayee, sabkuch to lut chuka hain
Kitna gareeb ho gaya, main tujhse bichad kar

Itni shiddat se tujhe pooja, ab chehre pe noor hain
Wali aashiqo ka ban chuka hu, main tujhse bichad kar

Meri aah par sab kare wah, dard aur bade hain
Shayed shayer ban gaya hu, main tujhse bichad kar  

Aa dekh le kya ban gaya, main tujhse bichad kar
Bikhra pada hu har jagah, main tujhse bichad kar

-Sajid Ghayel-
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«Reply #1 on: April 07, 2009, 06:54:01 AM »
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 Applause Applause bahoot khoob kaha ghayel
itni shiddat se tujhe pooja ab chehre pe noor hai,
Wali aashiqon ka ban chuka hun tujhse bichad kar..
bahoot sunder...
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«Reply #2 on: April 07, 2009, 09:59:02 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause ApplauseWah Wah Ghayel saheb wah...
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Ati sunder.....bohot khoob Sajid Ji
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«Reply #4 on: April 07, 2009, 11:50:11 AM »
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Mashallah, Bohat Hi Achcha Likha Hai, Aapne, Sjaid Bhai,./
Nice One,.
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«Reply #5 on: April 08, 2009, 09:36:42 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on April 07, 2009, 06:54:01 AM
Applause Applause bahoot khoob kaha ghayel
itni shiddat se tujhe pooja ab chehre pe noor hai,
Wali aashiqon ka ban chuka hun tujhse bichad kar..
bahoot sunder...

Bohat shukriyaan Sanjeev.....aur yeh sher mera bhi pasandida hain.
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«Reply #6 on: April 08, 2009, 12:29:10 PM »
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Quote from: dead heart on April 07, 2009, 09:59:02 AM
Applause Applause Applause ApplauseWah Wah Ghayel saheb wah...

Thank You DH....
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«Reply #7 on: April 08, 2009, 12:55:23 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on April 07, 2009, 06:42:40 AM
Aa dekh le kya ban gaya, main tujhse bichad kar
Bikhra pada hu har jagah, main tujhse bichad kar

Na neend hain na chain na jeene ki aarzoo
Zinda hu magar mar gaya, main tujhse bichad kar

Deen gaya duniya gayee, sabkuch to lut chuka hain
Kitna gareeb ho gaya, main tujhse bichad kar

Itni shiddat se tujhe pooja, ab chehre pe noor hain
Wali aashiqo ka ban chuka hu, main tujhse bichad kar

Meri aah par sab kare wah, dard aur bade hain
Shayed shayer ban gaya hu, main tujhse bichad kar  

Aa dekh le kya ban gaya, main tujhse bichad kar
Bikhra pada hu har jagah, main tujhse bichad kar

-Sajid Ghayel-

wah aaj ek se badkar ek aapka likha gazal padne ko mila. Thumbs UP Bahut accha likha hai aapne. Dad hazir hai ji
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«Reply #8 on: April 08, 2009, 03:47:24 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on April 07, 2009, 11:32:13 AM
Ati sunder.....bohot khoob Sajid Ji

Tumahara Ati sundar kehna bohat achcha laga.....Bohat bohat shukriyaan Talat.
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on April 07, 2009, 11:50:11 AM
Mashallah, Bohat Hi Achcha Likha Hai, Aapne, Sjaid Bhai,./
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Nawazish karam Chote....
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Quote from: Roja on April 08, 2009, 12:55:23 PM
wah aaj ek se badkar ek aapka likha gazal padne ko mila. Thumbs UP Bahut accha likha hai aapne. Dad hazir hai ji

Bas yuhi sath deti rehna, main choti moti koshish karta rahuga....
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«Reply #11 on: January 02, 2012, 10:44:18 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on April 07, 2009, 06:42:40 AM
Aa dekh le kya ban gaya, main tujhse bichad kar
Bikhra pada hu har jagah, main tujhse bichad kar

Na neend hain na chain na jeene ki aarzoo
Zinda hu magar mar gaya, main tujhse bichad kar

Deen gaya duniya gayee, sabkuch to lut chuka hain
Kitna gareeb ho gaya, main tujhse bichad kar

Itni shiddat se tujhe pooja, ab chehre pe noor hain
Wali aashiqo ka ban chuka hu, main tujhse bichad kar

Meri aah par sab kare wah, dard aur bade hain
Shayed shayer ban gaya hu, main tujhse bichad kar 

Aa dekh le kya ban gaya, main tujhse bichad kar
Bikhra pada hu har jagah, main tujhse bichad kar

-Sajid Ghayel-

good Applause Applause Applause
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