mann mera jalta reha

by hafza on October 16, 2004, 01:56:37 PM
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Mann mera jalta raha,
Aankhon say paani tapakta raha,
Samjhaya dil ko , bhula day sub ghum,
Kambhakth dil uski yaadon par marta raha


(guyz i'm a begginer..lol..only 15 yrz old)
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«Reply #1 on: October 16, 2004, 08:03:25 PM »
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good hafza...
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«Reply #2 on: October 16, 2004, 10:35:52 PM »
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wah hafza bahoot acha likha hai.....
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«Reply #3 on: October 17, 2004, 12:13:11 AM »
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hey thanx pooja and yassir !! u guyz just made my day Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: November 28, 2004, 05:09:59 PM »
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wah!!!!! hafza...........very nice...........
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«Reply #5 on: November 28, 2004, 05:16:20 PM »
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hafza thats too good for a 15 yr old tongue3 Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: November 29, 2004, 06:00:34 PM »
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shukryaa dhanay waad thank u :D
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«Reply #7 on: November 29, 2004, 06:11:20 PM »
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Good one Hafza !!
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«Reply #8 on: November 30, 2004, 06:25:34 AM »
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bahot khooob  hafza Usual Smile
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