***mat pucho mujhse mere gamo ki hadd***

by kaushikbhawna008 on November 24, 2008, 05:55:14 AM
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mat pucho mujhse mere gamo ki hadd kya hogi
jitni bhi hai zindgi bas isi tarah basar hogi

wo aaye ya naa aaye ab iska bhi koi gam nahi
ta-umra bas yaad uski mere saath hi hogi

mila hai jo mujhe ye mera naseeb tha doston
wo dard bankar hi sahi saath to hai isse badhkar aur kya saugaat hogi

gujar gaya wo lamha pyaar ka mere wo ab ateet ka hissa hai jo
gar nibha na saki thi mohobbat mein to judai se badhkar aur kya ab saja hogi

mile gar doston wo tumse gar kabhi to keh dena unhein
meri rooh bhi baad marne k raasta unhi ka takegi
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«Reply #1 on: November 24, 2008, 08:41:08 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: November 24, 2008, 08:55:45 AM »
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Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on November 24, 2008, 05:55:14 AM
mat pucho mujhse mere gamo ki hadd kya hogi
jitni bhi hai zindgi bas isi tarah basar hogi

wo aaye ya naa aaye ab iska bhi koi gam nahi
ta-umra bas yaad uski mere saath hi hogi

mila hai jo mujhe ye mera naseeb tha doston
wo dard bankar hi sahi saath to hai isse badhkar aur kya saugaat hogi

gujar gaya wo lamha pyaar ka mere wo ab ateet ka hissa hai jo
gar nibha na saki thi mohobbat mein to judai se badhkar aur kya ab saja hogi

mile gar doston wo tumse gar kabhi to keh dena unhein
meri rooh bhi baad marne k raasta unhi ka takegi

bhawna ji bahut khoob.
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«Reply #3 on: November 25, 2008, 05:01:47 AM »
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shukriya sajid ji
shukriya prateek ji 
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«Reply #4 on: November 25, 2008, 06:23:53 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause
Bahoot Khoob Bhvanaji
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«Reply #5 on: November 25, 2008, 06:25:27 AM »
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wah kaya baat hai... hamesha ki tarah bahoot khoob likha hai Bhawna.. good work
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«Reply #6 on: November 25, 2008, 01:57:20 PM »
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Nice One,.
Bhawna Ji,.


Na Puchoonga Ke Tere Gham Kitne Hain,.
Dekh Mere Seene Mein Bhi, Zakham Kitne Hain,.

Mere Ghar Ki Roshni Dekh Kar Jalta Hai Shehar Saara,.
Kabhi Tu Aake Dekh, Yahaan Maatam Kitne Hain,.

Jeete Jee Kisi Ka Bann Na Saka Main, Sab Kho Diya,.
Aa Dekh Mere Dost, Mujhpar Zindagi Ke Sitam Kitne Hain,.

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«Reply #7 on: November 26, 2008, 09:21:14 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on November 25, 2008, 06:25:27 AM
wah kaya baat hai... hamesha ki tarah bahoot khoob likha hai Bhawna.. good work

thnk u pooja ji
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«Reply #8 on: November 26, 2008, 09:22:15 AM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on November 25, 2008, 01:57:20 PM
Nice One,.
Bhawna Ji,.


Na Puchoonga Ke Tere Gham Kitne Hain,.
Dekh Mere Seene Mein Bhi, Zakham Kitne Hain,.

Mere Ghar Ki Roshni Dekh Kar Jalta Hai Shehar Saara,.
Kabhi Tu Aake Dekh, Yahaan Maatam Kitne Hain,.

Jeete Jee Kisi Ka Bann Na Saka Main, Sab Kho Diya,.
Aa Dekh Mere Dost, Mujhpar Zindagi Ke Sitam Kitne Hain,.

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thnk u janasheen ji
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«Reply #9 on: November 26, 2008, 09:44:37 AM »
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teri tarah ek sitam mujhpar bhi zamane ne kiya
mujhse mera pyaar umrabhar k liye juda kar diya

mein tadpi thi bohut aur royi thi beshumaar bhi
par bedard zamane ne ye ghaav mujhpar baar baar kiya
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«Reply #10 on: November 26, 2008, 09:52:28 AM »
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Kya hai ye sama jo aankho se chalak raha hai...
In labzo ka asar hai ya dil ki halat hi aaisi hai
,jo har labz aankho me jhalak raha hai ...

Kuch log likhte hai to dil pe utar jata hai,
Dil pe asar hota hai aur ek katra chhalak jata hai...

Bahoot khub bhavna ji  Applause Applause Applause
Bahoot khub Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: November 26, 2008, 10:07:35 AM »
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thnk u pank ji


sach hi hai dard ki apni ek zubaan hai
koi ise sun le to rota sang aasman hai

mein kuch likhti nahi pank bas sabd khud kagaz par utar jaate hain
aur log kehte hain ki meri shayri mein dard beshumar hai
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«Reply #12 on: November 26, 2008, 10:29:52 AM »
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u r always welcome Bhavna ji
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«Reply #13 on: November 26, 2008, 01:03:04 PM »
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Nice One Pank And Bhawna Ji,.
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«Reply #14 on: November 27, 2008, 04:45:52 AM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on November 26, 2008, 01:03:04 PM
Nice One Pank And Bhawna Ji,.

shukriya janasheen ji notworthy

dard jab hadd se gujar jaaye to kya karein
koi milkar bichad jaaye to kya karein
hamne to bhulakar bhi dekh liya unhe
par wo aur bhi yaad aayein to kya karein

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