Mein, hawaaoun mein ghulee khushboo ko

by abdbundeli on June 05, 2009, 06:54:28 AM
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Mein, hawaaoun mein ghulee khushboo ko,
Roz shab zeyhn mein sajaataa hoon;
Taa ki, gar, us mein tumhaaree khushboo,
Ho nihaan, to waheen rahey thhahree!!

Un nidaaoun ko, sadaaoun ko bhi,
Baarhaa roz gungunaataa hoon:
Taa ki, gar un mein tumhaaree dharhkan,
Ho nihaan, to waheen rahey lahree!!

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«Reply #1 on: June 05, 2009, 07:14:21 AM »
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wah wah wah wah sach me kya khoob likhte hai aap Abd Ji, har baar kuch lines se hi dil aur mehfil jeet lete hai aap.. Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

umda aur lajawab work.. notworthy  notworthy  notworthy

Shally.
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«Reply #2 on: June 05, 2009, 07:53:41 AM »
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Quote from: k.shael on June 05, 2009, 07:14:21 AM
wah wah wah wah sach me kya khoob likhte hai aap Abd Ji, har baar kuch lines se hi dil aur mehfil jeet lete hai aap.. Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

umda aur lajawab work.. notworthy  notworthy  notworthy

Shally.

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Shally!
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«Reply #3 on: June 05, 2009, 10:34:12 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob veer ji..... Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: June 05, 2009, 02:05:52 PM »
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Quote from: poppoetry on June 05, 2009, 10:34:12 AM
bahut bahut khoob veer ji..... Applause Applause
poppoetry ji!
Bahut-bahut shukriyah! 'veer ji' kaa 'sambodhan' bahut hee pyaaraa lagaa! Punjab key kis ilaaqey kee hain aap?
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«Reply #5 on: June 05, 2009, 02:08:13 PM »
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Quote from: @kaash on June 05, 2009, 01:40:34 PM
bahot hi khoob likha hai aapne Abd ji  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

very nice ashaars
Bahut-bahut shukriyah, @kaash ji!
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«Reply #6 on: June 05, 2009, 09:10:34 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on June 05, 2009, 06:54:28 AM

Mein, hawaaoun mein ghulee khushboo ko,
Roz shab zeyhn mein sajaataa hoon;
Taa ki, gar, us mein tumhaaree khushboo,
Ho nihaan, to waheen rahey thhahree!!

Un nidaaoun ko, sadaaoun ko bhi,
Baarhaa roz gungunaataa hoon:
Taa ki, gar un mein tumhaaree dharhkan,
Ho nihaan, to waheen rahey lahree!!

                 - abd bundeli


Very beautiful verses Babu Ji....In se ek gehri mohabbat ka ehsaas hota hai !!
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«Reply #7 on: June 06, 2009, 06:01:45 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on June 05, 2009, 09:10:34 PM
Very beautiful verses Babu Ji....In se ek gehri mohabbat ka ehsaas hota hai !!
Shukriyah Celmira bitia!
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«Reply #8 on: June 06, 2009, 06:52:17 AM »
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Bahut achha likha hai Ramprakash sahib...
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«Reply #9 on: June 06, 2009, 01:05:24 PM »
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Quote from: syednaami on June 06, 2009, 06:52:17 AM
Bahut achha likha hai Ramprakash sahib...
syednaami ji! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!

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«Reply #10 on: June 06, 2009, 01:19:42 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Saheb Ji..

Bahut Acha Likha Hai Aapne. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: June 06, 2009, 02:02:57 PM »
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Mashallah, Ek Aur Ghazal Ki Nazm Hai Ye,.
Bohat Achche Abd Bhai,.
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«Reply #12 on: June 06, 2009, 03:18:17 PM »
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Beautiful Written ABD Ji... Bahoot Bahoot Khoob...Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: June 07, 2009, 05:59:45 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on June 06, 2009, 01:19:42 PM
Bahut Bahut Khoob Saheb Ji..

Bahut Acha Likha Hai Aapne. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
khwaish ji! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!

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«Reply #14 on: June 07, 2009, 06:01:53 AM »
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Quote from: Azeem on June 06, 2009, 02:02:57 PM
Mashallah, Ek Aur Ghazal Ki Nazm Hai Ye,.
Bohat Achche Abd Bhai,.
Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Azeem bhai!

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