Mera Humsafar Raha…..

by Pooja on August 20, 2007, 07:03:13 PM
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«Reply #15 on: August 22, 2009, 09:08:50 AM »
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wah wah bahut hi khoob Pooja Ji & Sam Ji

Jasbir Singh
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«Reply #16 on: August 26, 2009, 10:59:30 PM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on August 22, 2009, 09:08:50 AM
wah wah bahut hi khoob Pooja Ji & Sam Ji

Jasbir Singh

shukaria Jas ji!!
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«Reply #17 on: August 26, 2009, 11:02:43 PM »
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Quote from: smardia on August 22, 2009, 08:13:22 AM
Poojaji aap ka tou jawab nahi....kya sunder jawab likha hai aapne...Man khush ho gaya... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Waqat se bada hota nahi hai koi marham
Hakikat se saamna mita deta sab bhrram
Umra k sath smajhte hum zindagi ka marm
Sochne lagte yahi hai hamara karm v dharm



wah humare Karm v dharm... kaya baat hai smardia ji!! bahoot khoob!!  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

dharm bada hai ya bada karm kabhi meri samjh na ayya
Pucha her ek se maine, magar kabhi koi jawab na ayya
Zindagi chalti rahi, jis tarah ka bhi bas morr zindagi main ayya
pata bhi na chala jeene ka, ab lagta hai antim morr ayya
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«Reply #18 on: August 26, 2009, 11:21:42 PM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Pooja ji,Sanmoj ji,Smardia ji,mindblowing creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
excellent.
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«Reply #19 on: August 27, 2009, 05:52:13 AM »
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kaya log hain kaisi baatain karte hain
Jafa ki share aam saare bazar usne
jishm faroshti main jala dala ashiyana usne
kamal fir bhee vo anjaan bante hain
na maaloom hai unko naam wafa ka fir bhee baat karte hain
sab  kuchh fana karke bhee unko chain na aayaa
naa jaane kayon hum aaj bbee us bewafa ko itna payar karte hain
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«Reply #20 on: August 27, 2009, 11:53:45 AM »
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Danyawad..shukriya...Poojaji

Poojaji aapki panktiyen bahut achhi hain...
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
par kuchh nirasha v beparvahi ka aabhas karati hain."antim mod"  "jis tarah ka bhi bas morr zindagi main ayya"

Zindagi ne yahi samjhaya hai
Sahi karm he sahi dharm hai
Chalna dharm ki bataayi rah par
Hota shayad wahi sahi karm hai

Zindagi ko yu belagaam n aap chhodiye
Kuchh tou samaj k niyamo se aap jodiye
Abhi tou kai basant baki hain zindagi k
Nahi antim ye,abhi tou kai mod baki hain
Quote from: Pooja on August 26, 2009, 11:02:43 PM
wah humare Karm v dharm... kaya baat hai smardia ji!! bahoot khoob!!  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

dharm bada hai ya bada karm kabhi meri samjh na ayya
Pucha her ek se maine, magar kabhi koi jawab na ayya
Zindagi chalti rahi, jis tarah ka bhi bas morr zindagi main ayya
pata bhi na chala jeene ka, ab lagta hai antim morr ayya
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«Reply #21 on: August 27, 2009, 12:00:03 PM »
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Dhanywad Madhuji...smardia
Quote from: madhuwesh on August 26, 2009, 11:21:42 PM
Wah wah bahut khoob Pooja ji,Sanmoj ji,Smardia ji,mindblowing creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
excellent.
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«Reply #22 on: August 27, 2009, 04:12:07 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on August 26, 2009, 11:21:42 PM
Wah wah bahut khoob Pooja ji,Sanmoj ji,Smardia ji,mindblowing creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
excellent.

Thanks Madhu!!
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«Reply #23 on: August 27, 2009, 04:52:16 PM »
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Quote from: smardia on August 27, 2009, 11:53:45 AM
Danyawad..shukriya...Poojaji

Poojaji aapki panktiyen bahut achhi hain...
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
par kuchh nirasha v beparvahi ka aabhas karati hain."antim mod"  "jis tarah ka bhi bas morr zindagi main ayya"

Zindagi ne yahi samjhaya hai
Sahi karm he sahi dharm hai
Chalna dharm ki bataayi rah par
Hota shayad wahi sahi karm hai

Zindagi ko yu belagaam n aap chhodiye
Kuchh tou samaj k niyamo se aap jodiye
Abhi tou kai basant baki hain zindagi k
Nahi antim ye,abhi tou kai mod baki hain


 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping SmileyWah wah wah kaya baat hai…. Yakin mane shayad 5th class mai thi jab pahli baar pandit ji ko sawal kiya tha.. bacha samjh kar hans diye… uske baad bhi kai baar discussion chali magar koi jawab santushat nahi kar paya is man ko… ab umar kahe ya jeevan dekh chuke hai yah samjhe… magar apki lines man ko bahoot santosh de gai hai… shukaria!!!

Yah do line bahoot sahi kahe hai apne, lubo per hansi bhi aai aor ek achambha bhi hua ki… kin baato ki wajah se yah lines apki kalam likh gai…waise apki yah do line bahoot kuch likhneko kah rahi hai.. dekhein kalam kaya kahti hai...:

Zindagi ko yu belagaam n aap chhodiye
Kuchh tou samaj k niyamo se aap jodiye

Yakinan apne yah sahi kaha hai.. magar kai baar insaan niarasha main he marne ki nahi sochta.. kai baar usko kisi wajah se itna sakoon aa jaata hai ki sari insecurity, duvidha door ho jaati hai aor dil kah uthta hai ki ab to mout bhi aa jaaye koi parwah nahi.. shayad kuch aise bhav the jab antim Morr ka likha gaya… aor kuch wo line jayada rythem mai bhi chali gai  DOH

Zindagi to hamesha samjhati hi rahti hai
Waqat ke sath magar Arth badalati bhi rahti hai
Arth jo atta hai samjh umar 15 main insaan ko
Wo he arth umar 30 main zindagi badalti rahti hai

Sahi karam he hai sahi dharma aor dharma per chalna hai sahi karm
Yah dohari baat mujhko hamesha uljhaati rahti hai
Man chahe dekhu basant, per wo basant jaise ho agar
Basant ki patjhar magar, Kal ho na ho bas itna Pooja ko kahti rahti hai
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«Reply #24 on: August 28, 2009, 06:41:05 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Applause Applause Applause Poojaji Sach puchhiye aap ka jawab padh k dil bagh bagh ho gaya....kitna detail mai aapne  vishleshan kiya hai superb... Thumbs UP
Kavyatmak jawab bhi aapka ati sunder hai....
Meri lines aapko achhi lagi..uske liye Dhanyawad...Aapne utsahit kiya tou kalam kuchh aur lines likh gayi....pesh hain...

Zindagi hamesha sawaal karti hai
Hum ta-umra jawab dhundhte hain
Uttar bhi sahi-galat milte hain
Par sach hai
Tazurbe k saath arth badalte hain

Dharm aur karm ka chakkar bhi wahi purana hai
Pehle anda aaya ya murgi,iska hal kisne jaana hai
Man mai ho vishwaas tou basant basant he hote hain
Erade ho majboot tou,saari kaaynaat saath hoti hai
(The Alchemist by Paulo Coelho tou padhi hogi v om shanti om bhi dekhi hogi)




Quote from: Pooja on August 27, 2009, 04:52:16 PM

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping SmileyWah wah wah kaya baat hai…. Yakin mane shayad 5th class mai thi jab pahli baar pandit ji ko sawal kiya tha.. bacha samjh kar hans diye… uske baad bhi kai baar discussion chali magar koi jawab santushat nahi kar paya is man ko… ab umar kahe ya jeevan dekh chuke hai yah samjhe… magar apki lines man ko bahoot santosh de gai hai… shukaria!!!

Yah do line bahoot sahi kahe hai apne, lubo per hansi bhi aai aor ek achambha bhi hua ki… kin baato ki wajah se yah lines apki kalam likh gai…waise apki yah do line bahoot kuch likhneko kah rahi hai.. dekhein kalam kaya kahti hai...:

Zindagi ko yu belagaam n aap chhodiye
Kuchh tou samaj k niyamo se aap jodiye

Yakinan apne yah sahi kaha hai.. magar kai baar insaan niarasha main he marne ki nahi sochta.. kai baar usko kisi wajah se itna sakoon aa jaata hai ki sari insecurity, duvidha door ho jaati hai aor dil kah uthta hai ki ab to mout bhi aa jaaye koi parwah nahi.. shayad kuch aise bhav the jab antim Morr ka likha gaya… aor kuch wo line jayada rythem mai bhi chali gai  DOH

Zindagi to hamesha samjhati hi rahti hai
Waqat ke sath magar Arth badalati bhi rahti hai
Arth jo atta hai samjh umar 15 main insaan ko
Wo he arth umar 30 main zindagi badalti rahti hai

Sahi karam he hai sahi dharma aor dharma per chalna hai sahi karm
Yah dohari baat mujhko hamesha uljhaati rahti hai
Man chahe dekhu basant, per wo basant jaise ho agar
Basant ki patjhar magar, Kal ho na ho bas itna Pooja ko kahti rahti hai
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«Reply #25 on: August 29, 2009, 03:33:01 PM »
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wwah wah wah ... bahut hi khoob POOJA JI & SMARDIA JI...


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«Reply #26 on: September 05, 2009, 05:26:48 PM »
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Thank you jasbirjee....aap padh kar pratikriya vyakt karte hain tou achha lagta hai...
Quote from: jasbirsingh on August 29, 2009, 03:33:01 PM
wwah wah wah ... bahut hi khoob POOJA JI & SMARDIA JI...


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