-----/// Mera mehboob nahi aayaa /// ----- Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on April 25, 2012, 08:20:08 PM
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patjhhad ke chale jaane ke baad saawan har baar aayaa,
ek mera saawan tha jo jaake kabhi laut kar nahi aayaa,

har phool khila, fir murjhaaya, murjhaake fir se khila,
ek mera hi aangan tha jahaan laut ke bahaar nahi aayee,

kai tyohaar aaye, sangh uunke khushiyon ka rang aayaa,
ek mera jeewan tha jisme kabhi koi rang hi nahi aayaa,

garajte baadalon ke baad har baar yahaan barsaat aayee,
ek meri hi hatheli thi jahaan ek boond paani nahi aayaa,

rooth jaate hain log fir manaane se maan bhi jaate hain,
par mera saajan aisa rootha ki kabhi laut ke nahi aayaa,

aaye sab log mere ghar poochhne mere ghum ki kahaani,
ek mera mehboob hi tha jo laut ke mere ghar nahi aayaa....


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«Reply #1 on: April 26, 2012, 02:52:04 AM »
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Brother kya ho gaya h aapko.
Aaj to aapne feemale ko bhi male bnake pesh kar diya..
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Par barsat nahi aaya or aese hi lafj parkar kuch ajeeb sa laga...
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Par mere ajeeb kahne ka matlab ye nahi ki achcha nahi laga.
Achcha to bhut laga...
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«Reply #2 on: April 26, 2012, 03:39:50 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: April 26, 2012, 05:42:52 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: April 26, 2012, 06:10:35 AM »
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Koshish kareN aur achchha likh sakte haiN.....Raqeeb
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«Reply #5 on: April 26, 2012, 06:27:56 AM »
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Bahut khoob Hriday Ji, bahut badiya 
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«Reply #6 on: April 26, 2012, 07:20:32 AM »
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good 1 hriday ji
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waah waaah hridayjii......bahut khoob..bahut khoob..daad daad..Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: April 26, 2012, 06:53:05 PM »
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thanks bhaai...!!!

Brother kya ho gaya h aapko.
Aaj to aapne feemale ko bhi male bnake pesh kar diya..
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Post gajab ki h.
Par barsat nahi aaya or aese hi lafj parkar kuch ajeeb sa laga...
....
Par mere ajeeb kahne ka matlab ye nahi ki achcha nahi laga.
Achcha to bhut laga...

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«Reply #9 on: April 26, 2012, 06:53:36 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Mann ji....!!!

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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Saini ji....!!!

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«Reply #11 on: April 26, 2012, 06:55:16 PM »
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shukriya Shukla ji.... koshish kar raha hoon....!!!


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«Reply #12 on: April 26, 2012, 06:55:52 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Amit ji....!!!

Bahut khoob Hriday Ji, bahut badiya 
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thanks Heer ji....!!!

good 1 hriday ji
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«Reply #14 on: April 26, 2012, 06:56:59 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Dolly ji...!!!

waah waaah hridayjii......bahut khoob..bahut khoob..daad daad..Usual Smile
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