Mera saayaa lauta laayega

by KOYAL46 on May 01, 2010, 10:29:36 AM
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Tum chale jaaoge,
Parchhaiyen rehjayengi
Kuchh na kuchh mohbbat ki
Nishaniyen rehjayengi

Tum mile they mujhko
Inhi raassto k chourahey pe
Jab bhi mud k dekhungi
Ye raahein nazar aayengi

N yaadein mit sakti hain,
Na he manzil mil sakti hai
Duur jakar bhi tum apneko,
Phir Chourahey pe paoge

Mera saayaa nazar aayega
Tumhe inhi raaston pe lauta laayega
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«Reply #1 on: May 01, 2010, 05:30:11 PM »
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Kamaal ki poem likhi hai Koyal didi. Bahot munfarid qism ke khayalaat ke izhaar aapne kiya hai. Kam likhti ho magar sabse juda likhti ho aur bahot khoob likhti ho. Likhte raha keejiye. Daad qubool farmayen. Marhaba.
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«Reply #2 on: May 01, 2010, 09:58:26 PM »
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Bahut khoob Koyal Ji
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«Reply #3 on: May 02, 2010, 06:41:21 AM »
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padh kar dil khush hua aur dil se hi dad bhi de rahi hoon.
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«Reply #4 on: May 02, 2010, 05:57:14 PM »
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Aapka bahoot bahut shukriya Riyaz-bhai......
Aapne saraha kavita safal hui.....


Quote from: riyaz106 on May 01, 2010, 05:30:11 PM
Kamaal ki poem likhi hai Koyal didi. Bahot munfarid qism ke khayalaat ke izhaar aapne kiya hai. Kam likhti ho magar sabse juda likhti ho aur bahot khoob likhti ho. Likhte raha keejiye. Daad qubool farmayen. Marhaba.
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«Reply #5 on: May 02, 2010, 06:04:38 PM »
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Thanks Rajesh-ji.....

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on May 01, 2010, 09:58:26 PM
Bahut khoob Koyal Ji
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«Reply #6 on: May 02, 2010, 06:16:04 PM »
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Aapka dil se dhanywaad...Mumta-di....

Quote from: mamta bajpai on May 02, 2010, 06:41:21 AM
padh kar dil khush hua aur dil se hi dad bhi de rahi hoon.
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«Reply #7 on: May 06, 2010, 02:30:46 PM »
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bohat khoob likha hai koyal ji.......nice one
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«Reply #8 on: May 06, 2010, 02:33:36 PM »
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bahut pyari kavita hai ye... jaane kaise pehle hamaari nazar nahi padi.... bahut khoob likha hai aapne Koyal ji...!!!
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«Reply #9 on: May 07, 2010, 06:53:33 AM »
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Thank you Saurabh-ji.....


Quote from: Tanha(Saurabh) on May 06, 2010, 02:30:46 PM
bohat khoob likha hai koyal ji.......nice one
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«Reply #10 on: May 07, 2010, 11:12:32 AM »
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Shukriya.....Kapil-ji....

Quote from: klaskar on May 06, 2010, 02:33:36 PM
bahut pyari kavita hai ye... jaane kaise pehle hamaari nazar nahi padi.... bahut khoob likha hai aapne Koyal ji...!!!
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«Reply #11 on: May 07, 2010, 11:45:48 AM »
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Buhat khoob... Saahir yaad aa gayay hamen...
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«Reply #12 on: May 07, 2010, 11:57:58 AM »
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Thanks VB-ji  meri kavita padh koi tou yaad aaya aapko....

Quote from: vb on May 07, 2010, 11:45:48 AM
Buhat khoob... Saahir yaad aa gayay hamen...
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