Mere jaane k baad.....koyal

by KOYAL46 on July 15, 2010, 05:34:31 AM

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KOYAL46

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Mere jaane k baad........

Sanam Mere jaane ke baad
N hona kabhee tum uudaas
N houngi mein tere aas-paas
Kar-na tum mujhe dilse yaad

Jab-jab hogi suhaanee bhour
Usha kee sunehri lalima dekh
Udte pakshiyo ka kalrav sunn
Tum kar-na har-roj mujhe yaad

Jab karo saier bageeche me
Gulab kee pankhuriyon par
Nannhi oos ki bundein dekh
Mujhko tum kar-lena yaad

Tab koi nahi hoga tumhaare aas-paas
Koyal key koohakne ki aawaaj sunna
Mitt jaayega mere n hone ka aehsaas
Paaoge tum mujhe apne dil key paas

--------koyal----------------


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tamanna.pt

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Re: Mere jaane k baad.....koyal

«Reply #1 on: July 15, 2010, 05:42:04 AM »

Nice creation Koyal dear, Realy Nice thought. Yun hi likhti raho.


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thinkhattk

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Re: Mere jaane k baad.....koyal

«Reply #2 on: July 15, 2010, 05:44:58 AM »

minblowing n awesome creation koyal........

jab na hoge ham tumhare aap-pas tab yaad karna SANAM,
wo sath bitaya hua har pal or hamari pehli-aakhri mulaqat......


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KOYAL46

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Re: Mere jaane k baad.....koyal

«Reply #3 on: July 15, 2010, 07:21:34 AM »

Thanks a lot Tamanna-di....aapko pasand aayee tou likhna safal.... icon_flower

Quote from: tamanna.pt on July 15, 2010, 05:42:04 AM

Nice creation Koyal dear, Realy Nice thought. Yun hi likhti raho.


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Re: Mere jaane k baad.....koyal

«Reply #4 on: July 15, 2010, 07:47:19 AM »

Waah...!!! Kya baat hai Koyal ji.. bahut khoob likha hai aapne... bahut sundar...!!!


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Re: Mere jaane k baad.....koyal

«Reply #5 on: July 15, 2010, 08:00:14 AM »

very very nice komal ji

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KOYAL46

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Re: Mere jaane k baad.....koyal

«Reply #6 on: July 15, 2010, 08:05:15 AM »

Taro bahuj aabhaar baku.... icon_flower

taare jode-jode hu pan lakhtee jaaun chhu... Winking

Aaj intezaar karte hain hum unka sakhee
Jaane k baad bahut yaad hum unko aayenge

Quote from: thinkhattk on July 15, 2010, 05:44:58 AM

minblowing n awesome creation koyal........

jab na hoge ham tumhare aap-pas tab yaad karna SANAM,
wo sath bitaya hua har pal or hamari pehli-aakhri mulaqat......