Meri Barbadi........Rishi

by Rishi Agarwal on November 15, 2009, 02:12:29 PM
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Meri barbadi ki daastan sunane se pehle,
Mujhe itna bata jaate chhod jaane se pehle,

Agar koi shikwa tumne mujhse kiya hota,
Main tumko mana leta rooth jaane se pehle,

Tum khush naseeb ho humne chaha hai tumhain,
Warna bahut the humko chahne wale tumse pehle,

Hum To Chahte hai bahut Ye Janlo Tum mere Sanam,
Is Tarah chor kar jana tha to hume bata dete pehle

Kya maloom tha itna tarpayegi judai teri,
Dekho tum laut aana yeh jaan jaane se pehle
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«Reply #1 on: November 17, 2009, 06:05:07 AM »
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Bahut khoob Rishi ji,very touching n lovely creation.excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: November 17, 2009, 06:26:12 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on November 17, 2009, 06:05:07 AM
Bahut khoob Rishi ji,very touching n lovely creation.excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause

Thnx Madhu JI
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«Reply #3 on: November 17, 2009, 07:45:35 AM »
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bahut accha likha hai aapne rishi ji
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«Reply #4 on: November 17, 2009, 07:46:33 AM »
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Quote from: Nikhaar on November 17, 2009, 07:45:35 AM
bahut accha likha hai aapne rishi ji


Bahut Bahut Shukriya NIkhar JI
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«Reply #5 on: November 17, 2009, 08:22:53 AM »
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Bahoot Khoob Likha Rishi Bhai
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«Reply #6 on: November 17, 2009, 08:24:20 AM »
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Quote from: pankshivam on November 17, 2009, 08:22:53 AM
Bahoot Khoob Likha Rishi Bhai


Bahut Bahut Shukriya Pank JI
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«Reply #7 on: November 17, 2009, 11:20:32 PM »
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wow... that was really nice nd really deep!
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«Reply #8 on: November 18, 2009, 04:36:14 AM »
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«Reply #9 on: November 29, 2009, 10:51:00 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Rishiji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: November 29, 2009, 11:09:30 AM »
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Quote from: palkhi on November 17, 2009, 11:20:32 PM
wow... that was really nice nd really deep!

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Palkhi JI
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«Reply #11 on: November 29, 2009, 11:09:55 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on November 18, 2009, 04:36:14 AM
Bahut khoob Rishi Ji

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Rajesh JI
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«Reply #12 on: November 29, 2009, 11:10:29 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on November 29, 2009, 10:51:00 AM
Bahut Khoob Rishiji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Khwaish JI
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«Reply #13 on: July 01, 2011, 08:09:16 AM »
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bahut khub rishi ji Applause Applause Applause
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Quote from: kamal aggarwal on July 01, 2011, 08:09:16 AM
bahut khub rishi ji Applause Applause Applause

Shukriya Kamal Ji
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