Meri Doli

by jochahohojayein on May 15, 2007, 04:19:02 PM
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Uth rahi hai doli meri
Kanya daan ke baad
Darasal hai arthi meri
Agni daan ke baad...
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«Reply #1 on: May 19, 2007, 04:40:01 AM »
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very emotional... nice lines..
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«Reply #2 on: May 19, 2007, 05:19:44 AM »
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uthee hai doli teree hamaree hee kandhe pe
rootee hai too, bheegee hai palke haree bhee
to chalee jaogee kuch pal ek saath to chal le
ham to rahenge yahee, tum n aa paao ge kabhee

dekh ko is jaha ko jaha fool khilaye the pyar ke
rakhenge ge sambhal ke n murjhane denge inko
ek fool hai tree dole me, rakh lena chage fek dena
hamnee to chaha hai har pal,  n murjhane denge inko


netra....
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«Reply #3 on: May 19, 2007, 05:21:20 AM »
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uthee hai doli teree hamaree hee kandhe pe
rootee hai too, bheegee hai palke haree bhee
to chalee jaogee kuch pal ek saath to chal le
ham to rahenge yahee, tum n aa paao ge kabhee

dekh lo is jaha ko jaha fool khilaye the pyar ke kabhee
rakhenge ge sambhal ke inhe n murjhane denge  kabhee
ek fool hai tree dolee me, rakh lena chage fek dena too
hamnee to chaha hai har pal,  n murjhane denge inko kabhee


netra....
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jochahohojayein
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hi
«Reply #4 on: May 19, 2007, 06:38:42 AM »
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thanx netrapalji  poojaji
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