Meri Maa...

by azad mishra on January 10, 2013, 08:33:03 AM
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After inspired from some great work recently on this topic i also want to share my feeling in remembering my mother. some spaces never be filled by anyone...

mat rook mujhe aaj sab kah jane de
tere  sare gam meri aankho se bah jane de

Nahi soya me kai barsoon se  o maa
bas ek baar mujhe teri godi me so jane de

Aaj bhi dar jata hun in  aahaton  se mein
mujhe phir se apne aanchal me chip jane de

Har deewar me basi hai teri muskurahat
phir se mujhko tujhe hasane ke wo bahane de

dundhla gayi hain waqt ki dhool me teri kaya
bas eek bar mujhe apna chehra to dikhane de

me jab ruthta tha tab tu mujhe manati thi har bar
kyu aise ruthi hai mujhse aj mujhko manane de,

yaad hai mujhe tere haantho ki wo roti
roj khilaya tune khud bhooke rah kar mujhko
aaj ke din to mujhe apne haantho se khilane de

Me nasamajh tha tere dard ko na samajh paya maa
koi ek bar mujhe mere bachpan me phir jaane de

kahte hai ki maa teri khushoo phoolon me basti hai
mat chod mujhe yun patzar me ek naya gulab to khilane de


hai afsosh yahi 'azad' nahi us desh me kadr naari ki hai
jis desh ko 'MAA' kah bulate hain

 


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«Reply #1 on: January 10, 2013, 08:58:08 AM »
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lovely creation waah
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«Reply #2 on: January 10, 2013, 12:38:20 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
beautiful creation.maa par jitna bhi likha jaaye kam hi hota hai.bahut khoob aapne likha hai. dheron daad
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut acha likha hai.
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«Reply #4 on: January 10, 2013, 12:45:36 PM »
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VERY NICE . CONGRATS .
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«Reply #5 on: January 10, 2013, 02:36:07 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Mishra ji....!!!
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