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<>* Meri raatein*<>

Meri raatein sirf tera hi naam leti hai
Pawan sang tujhko pukara karti hai
Aake mil ja mujhe mere sanam yahan
Meri har manzil tujhe hi ishara karti hai

Lehrein jo dil k kinare se takrati hain
Ankhon se na jane kaise sailaab aate hain
Dard to hota nahin mujhe kyunki pathar hun
Lekin ruuh ko jaise ye tod jatI hain......


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Re: <>* Meri raatein*<>

«Reply #1 on: October 01, 2010, 05:55:37 AM »

hmmm... itna dard.. kal se chaar post kiye aur chaaron dard pe... itna na tadpao khud ko .... waise likha bahut achcha hai aapne...

dil ki tere dhadkan banke main tere dil me hoon,
hawa me main khusboo banke tere saanson me hoon,

tanha teri raaton me khwaab ban main aata hoon,
tere kamre me aake tere paas main so jaata hoon,

dur tujhse hoon nahi main tere hi main paas hoon,
mehsus jise karti hai tu main har wo ehsaas hoon...


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Re: <>* Meri raatein*<>

«Reply #2 on: October 01, 2010, 06:27:54 AM »

hmm anu jiii dekho kahin meri tarah apko bhi log saddy na kehene lage...

bahut badhiya likha he bas dard ko dil se nikal kar shabdo me dal dijiye ...kyuki dil bechara bahut nasamajh hota he~


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Re: <>* Meri raatein*<>

«Reply #3 on: October 01, 2010, 06:33:55 AM »

koi baat nahin abhi ji...simply abhi ki tarah saddy anamika bhi mast naam hai....


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Re: <>* Meri raatein*<>

«Reply #4 on: October 01, 2010, 06:40:25 AM »

Quote from: ~Hriday~ on October 01, 2010, 05:55:37 AM

hmmm... itna dard.. kal se chaar post kiye aur chaaron dard pe... itna na tadpao khud ko .... waise likha bahut achcha hai aapne...

bht hi pyari baat kahi hai aapne kapil.....

sorry re par saddy hi post ho rahe hain..
kuch achcha ban hi nahin raha....
try karungi next post thodi halki fulki ho......

Sach hai ye k pas nahin dur bht tum mujhse ho
Lekin teri duri ka kyun mujhko fir ehsaas nahin

Har pal har lamha yun lagta hai jaise tu mere sath hai
Hai juda mujhse magar uss judai ka mujhe ehsas nahin

Har gum har taklif me tu mere pas dauda aata hai
Main rahungi kabhi akeli iska mujhe ehsaas nahin

Tere bin main nahin hun janu na hi mera wajood hai
Tu mujhse kabhi alag bhi tha iska mujhe ehsaas nahin…!!!


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Re: <>* Meri raatein*<>

«Reply #5 on: October 01, 2010, 07:08:45 AM »

hmmm... mujhe waiting room rahega aapke halke post ka .. par saddy ban raha hai jab tak tab tak post karte rahiye... isi bahaane hum ek dusre se baaatein kar lenge.. kuch main kahunga kuch aap aur bas yunhi mahaul halka ho jaayega.. bahut achcha likha hai aapne.....

tumhaara hi lahoon banke main tumhaare ragon me hoon,
mehsoos kar ke dekho to main tumhaare saanson me hoon,

jaane ye kaise rishta hai tumse jaane ye kaisa nata hai,
duur tumse hoon main itna par tab bhi lagta kareeb hoon,

jismon ki ye doori hai, par aatma se hum ek hain,
aankhen band karke dekho tumhaara hi sharir hoon,

tumhaari ek hasi ke khaatir kai gunaaah mai karta hoon,
dekh aansoo aankhon me tumhaare ghut ghut k main marta hoon,

tumko hi chaaha hai maine, tumko hi to pooja hai,
apni har duwa me ab to main tumko maanga karta hoon....


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«Reply #6 on: October 01, 2010, 10:01:25 AM »

Bahot khoob Kasak ji. Achhi poem likhi hai aapne.


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