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Sapno se jhankti ek hakikat ho tum
Mere dil me basi pyaar ki tasveer ho tum
Jo kabhi na mila mujhe milkar bhi
Wo hi meri anmol jaageer ho tum
Kahin kho na dun tumhe apni uljhanon me ulajhkar
Wo meri raaton ki sukun bhari nind ho tum
Kahin se bhi aajao lekin aake mil jao aaj
Mere dil ka chain meri ruuh ka sukun ho tum...!!!
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«Reply #3 on: July 14, 2010, 07:21:27 AM » |
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shukriya Rahi ji and klaskar ji k aapko meri ye koshish pasand aai...
rahi ji aapka jawab....
main to roz tere dil ki choakhat pe aati hun
roz tere dar ko dekh seham k palat jati hun
kahin tu thokar na lagade mere pyar bhare dil ko
yehi sochkar apne pyaar ka izhaar nahin kar pati hun
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«Reply #4 on: July 14, 2010, 07:25:03 AM » |
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nice
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«Reply #5 on: July 14, 2010, 10:08:00 AM » |
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kasak ji aap hamse bhi badi shayra hain kyon hamen sharminda karti hai  ye hamara salam kabhi na khat.khatana mere dil ke darwaje ko kabhi meri galiyon me nahi ghomne aanaaaaaa dar khula rehta hai har waqt mera bhi dard ki aawaj aati hai kyon ki mai hnu diwaaaaanaaaaaaaaaaaa |
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«Reply #7 on: July 14, 2010, 10:52:03 AM » |
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thnx thinkhuttk ji.........
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«Reply #8 on: July 14, 2010, 11:21:52 PM » |
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Sapno se jhankti hakikat ho tum
Mere dil me basi pyaar ki tasveer ho tum
Jo na mila mujhe milkar bhi
Wo mere anmol jaageer ho tum
Kahin kho na dun tumhe apni uljhanon me ulajhkar
Wo meri raaton ki nind ho tum
Kahin se bhi aajao lekin aake mil jao aaj
Mere dil ka chain meri ruuh ka sukun ho tum
[/b] Very Nice Poetry .....Kasak Ji ! very touching ! nice creation...dil se daad ! |
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«Reply #9 on: July 15, 2010, 02:47:36 AM » |
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aapka tahe dil se shukriya Anshumali ji aur Shihab ji k aapne mere likhe ko saraaha....
thnx ji
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«Reply #11 on: July 15, 2010, 05:21:12 AM » |
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bahoot khoob likha hai Kdk ji
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«Reply #12 on: July 15, 2010, 05:26:28 AM » |
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tamanna ji and bekaraar ji bht bht shukriya k aapne mere likhe ko pasand kiya.....yunhi hausla badhate rahiye....
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«Reply #13 on: July 15, 2010, 06:49:45 AM » |
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Wah Anaamika-di kya baat hai.... Khulke romaance ka izhaar hai....   Na uljho ab apne khayalon mai tum
Sapno ko sakaar karne ka waqt hai
Sakhee aawaaj dee hai tumne kisko aaj
Kaun hai sukun dil ka tere kholo ye raaj
Sapno se jhankti hakikat ho tum
Mere dil me basi pyaar ki tasveer ho tum
Jo na mila mujhe milkar bhi
Wo mere anmol jaageer ho tum
Kahin kho na dun tumhe apni uljhanon me ulajhkar
Wo meri raaton ki nind ho tum
Kahin se bhi aajao lekin aake mil jao aaj
Mere dil ka chain meri ruuh ka sukun ho tum
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«Reply #14 on: July 15, 2010, 06:54:21 AM » |
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na keh payenge lub se hum
na naam puch sakhi mere unka
wo naam to basa hai rom rom me mere
ho gaya hai mera har sapna ab unka.....
koyal tumhari badmashi pasand aai hume....
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