Miss U

by JHEEL on November 08, 2009, 06:55:24 PM
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main ab khayalo mein teri tasweer banau magar kaise
tu hi bata haal-e-dil tujhe sunau magar kaise
jo mahel banaye the khuwabon mein humne
in mahlo mein wafa ke deep jalau magar kaise
mohabbat wafa chahat sab toot chuke hai
ab main khud ko kisi khilone se behlau magar kaise
kitne chiraag jalaye tere intezaar ki aas mein
is dil pe main aur sitam dhau magar kaise
apne aas paas jo tanhaiyon ke mele dekhe to khayaal aaya
tumhari tarah main bhi bewafa banjau magar kaise.
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #1 on: November 08, 2009, 09:12:03 PM »
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Wow Jheel ji bahut bahut khoob.lovely creation.mujhe bahut achi lagi aapke kavita.excellent.keep it up. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Roja
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«Reply #2 on: November 08, 2009, 11:22:24 PM »
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main ab khayalo mein teri tasweer banau magar kaise
tu hi bata haal-e-dil tujhe sunau magar kaise
jo mahel banaye the khuwabon mein humne
in mahlo mein wafa ke deep jalau magar kaise
mohabbat wafa chahat sab toot chuke hai
ab main khud ko kisi khilone se behlau magar kaise
kitne chiraag jalaye tere intezaar ki aas mein
is dil pe main aur sitam dhau magar kaise
apne aas paas jo tanhaiyon ke mele dekhe to khayaal aaya
tumhari tarah main bhi bewafa banjau magar kaise.

Wonderful Sharing Jheel  Applause
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #3 on: November 09, 2009, 04:55:58 AM »
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Nice Sharing Jheel JI Applause Applause
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Pooja
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«Reply #4 on: November 19, 2009, 05:42:36 PM »
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Jheel apki lines bahoot achi hai.. magar Khumar Ishaq ki nahi hai... khumar-e- dard ya khumar-e-judai mai jayada lagti hai...

Moving your thread in dard -e- Judai..

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samir_bc
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«Reply #5 on: November 21, 2009, 09:07:01 AM »
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main ab khayalo mein teri tasweer banau magar kaise
tu hi bata haal-e-dil tujhe sunau magar kaise
jo mahel banaye the khuwabon mein humne
in mahlo mein wafa ke deep jalau magar kaise
mohabbat wafa chahat sab toot chuke hai
ab main khud ko kisi khilone se behlau magar kaise
kitne chiraag jalaye tere intezaar ki aas mein
is dil pe main aur sitam dhau magar kaise
apne aas paas jo tanhaiyon ke mele dekhe to khayaal aaya
tumhari tarah main bhi bewafa banjau magar kaise.

nice creation jheel ji............
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