MUJH PAR JO BEETI....SOUDAGAR

by soudagar on March 17, 2015, 05:59:20 PM
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mujh par jo beeti wo dastan sunaoun kaise
zkham dil mein huye hain tumhe dikhaon kaise

gar gair hota wo to bhulaa detaa main usko
apno se bhi apna tha usko main bhulaoun kaise

dekhta hoon uski tasveer ashk behne lagte hain
aakhon mein in ashkon ko ab chhupaoun kaise

yaad uski tanha hone ka ehsas dilati hai mujhko
is tanhai se piccha ab main chhudaoun kaise

jee raha hai wo mere bin nai dunia basaake
meri dunia thi wo uske bin zindgi bitaun kaise

itna kamjor ho gaya khud ko mita bhi nahi sakta
dil me basi tasveer uski khnjar chalaoun  kaise
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«Reply #1 on: March 17, 2015, 06:59:24 PM »
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mujh par jo beeti wo dastan sunaoun kaise
zkham dil mein huye hain tumhe dikhaon kaise

gar gair hota wo to bhulaa detaa main usko
apno se bhi apna tha usko main bhulaoun kaise

dekhta hoon uski tasveer ashk behne lagte hain
aakhon mein in ashkon ko ab chhupaoun kaise

yaad uski tanha hone ka ehsas dilati hai mujhko
is tanhai se piccha ab main chhudaoun kaise

jee raha hai wo mere bin nai dunia basaake
meri dunia thi wo uske bin zindgi bitaun kaise

itna kamjor ho gaya khud ko mita bhi nahi sakta
dil me basi tasveer uski khnjar chalaoun  kaise
kyaa baat hai  Saudagar Sahib bahut hee umdah peshkash hai, dheroooN dheroooooooN  daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad Rau ke saath.
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«Reply #2 on: March 17, 2015, 07:27:03 PM »
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be had khubsurat peshkash waaahhh
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«Reply #3 on: March 17, 2015, 08:32:48 PM »
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mujh par jo beeti wo dastan sunaoun kaise
zkham dil mein huye hain tumhe dikhaon kaise

gar gair hota wo to bhulaa detaa main usko
apno se bhi apna tha usko main bhulaoun kaise

dekhta hoon uski tasveer ashk behne lagte hain
aakhon mein in ashkon ko ab chhupaoun kaise

yaad uski tanha hone ka ehsas dilati hai mujhko
is tanhai se piccha ab main chhudaoun kaise

jee raha hai wo mere bin nai dunia basaake
meri dunia thi wo uske bin zindgi bitaun kaise

itna kamjor ho gaya khud ko mita bhi nahi sakta
dil me basi tasveer uski khnjar chalaoun  kaise
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waah , beautiful . Bahut dinon baad aap ka kalaam dekhne ko mila . Bahut achhi ghazal hai
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Bahut umda peshkash. ek rau to banti hai
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behatreen pesh kash karan daad hazir hai
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