Mujhe ahsaas hai ki woh nahi hai !

by Ricky on August 11, 2007, 10:26:31 PM

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«Reply #15 on: September 20, 2007, 03:59:03 PM »

Thankyou Maham, I am glad that you liked the way of poem and you tried yourself too on same style.

Talat,

You have written real nice lines, so balanced and expressive.


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Mujhe ahsaas hai ki woh nahi hai !

«Reply #16 on: September 20, 2007, 06:22:56 PM »

Thanks a lot Ricky... Maham you also wrote very nice


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Mujhe ahsaas hai ki woh nahi hai !

«Reply #17 on: September 21, 2007, 05:59:45 PM »

Quote from: "Talat"

Woh ab nahi hai......

Raste jab chun liye, door tujhse ho gaye,
Phir kyun lag raha hai, teri ek kami hai
Guzre lamhe murjhaye phoolon se bikhre
Khushk chaman main ab bhi khusbu basi hai
Barhte rahe qadam, manzilain milti gayin
Na mili kabhi jo, wo dil ki ek khushi hai
Jab bhi socha humne kya adhoora reh gaya
Yaad aaya, aaj bhi teri ek kami hai !!

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