Mujhe Ashk Peena Hai

by Saba_Saba on July 01, 2005, 10:45:55 AM
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Mujhe ashk peena hai
Tere saath jeena hai

Tere pyar me aye Sanam
saare zakhm seena hai

yeh jo karti hai madhosh
tere lab ki hi meena hai

Na mile koi aasra to kya
mere liye to tera seena hai

Kabhi doobne na paaye SABA
Tere pyar ka jo safeena hai

ashk - aansu
meena - sharab
safeena - boat
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«Reply #1 on: July 01, 2005, 10:54:57 AM »
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jina tere saath bas tere hi saath jina hai
zindagi hasin hai mujhe isko jina hai

karti hun mahobaat tujhse main
ye yahi hai sachai yahi mera ashiaana hai

piti rahi abh tak main meykhanao main ja jakar
abh tu pila mujhe mujhko teri ankhon se pina hai
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«Reply #2 on: July 01, 2005, 10:59:30 AM »
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Mujhe ashk peena hai
Tere saath jeena hai

Tere pyar me aye Sanam
saare zakhm seena hai

yeh jo karti hai madhosh
tere lab ki hi meena hai

Na mile koi aasra to kya
mere liye to tera seena hai

Kabhi doobne na paaye SABA
Tere pyar ka jo safeena hai

ashk - aansu
meena - sharab
safeena - boat


well jasmine bahut khoob likha hai...

ashk mai kya rakha hai
main to kehta hun khoon peeyo...
insaan bannkar to dukh milte hai..
isse accha to vampaire bano....
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«Reply #3 on: July 01, 2005, 10:59:45 AM »
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Mujhe ashk peena hai
Tere saath jeena hai

Tere pyar me aye Sanam
saare zakhm seena hai

yeh jo karti hai madhosh
tere lab ki hi meena hai

Na mile koi aasra to kya
mere liye to tera seena hai

Kabhi doobne na paaye SABA
Tere pyar ka jo safeena hai

ashk - aansu
meena - sharab
safeena - boat


well jasmine bahut khoob likha hai...

ashk mai kya rakha hai
main to kehta hun khoon peeyo...
insaan bannkar to dukh milte hai..
isse accha to vampaire bano.... :twisted:
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«Reply #4 on: July 01, 2005, 10:59:49 AM »
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jina tere saath bas tere hi saath jina hai
zindagi hasin hai mujhe isko jina hai

karti hun mahobaat tujhse main
ye yahi hai sachai yahi mera ashiaana hai

piti rahi abh tak main meykhanao main ja jakar
abh tu pila mujhe mujhko teri ankhon se pina hai


Sandhya.... this is very nice........

mere lafzo me woh jaadu nahi jo aap me hai :lol:
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«Reply #5 on: July 01, 2005, 11:05:20 AM »
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jina tere saath bas tere hi saath jina hai
zindagi hasin hai mujhe isko jina hai

karti hun mahobaat tujhse main
ye yahi hai sachai yahi mera ashiaana hai

piti rahi abh tak main meykhanao main ja jakar
abh tu pila mujhe mujhko teri ankhon se pina hai


Sandhya.... this is very nice........

mere lafzo me woh jaadu nahi jo aap me hai :lol:
sukhriya saba ji ..........aap bhi bahut acha likhti hai ........main tuh bas try kar rahi thi....

saba kahin tum mere likhne se hurt tuh nahi hui na .....agar aisa hai tuh plz tell me .ok
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«Reply #6 on: July 01, 2005, 12:50:42 PM »
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jina tere saath bas tere hi saath jina hai
zindagi hasin hai mujhe isko jina hai

karti hun mahobaat tujhse main
ye yahi hai sachai yahi mera ashiaana hai

piti rahi abh tak main meykhanao main ja jakar
abh tu pila mujhe mujhko teri ankhon se pina hai


Sandhya.... this is very nice........

mere lafzo me woh jaadu nahi jo aap me hai :lol:
sukhriya saba ji ..........aap bhi bahut acha likhti hai ........main tuh bas try kar rahi thi....

saba kahin tum mere likhne se hurt tuh nahi hui na .....agar aisa hai tuh plz tell me .ok


No yaar .... i like it......
aur Jo sach hai na maine wohi kaha  tongue3
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«Reply #7 on: July 01, 2005, 02:48:32 PM »
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Wah! Bohat khoob Saba & Sandhaya.............
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«Reply #8 on: July 01, 2005, 02:54:11 PM »
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Mujhe ashk peena hai
Tere saath jeena hai

Tere pyar me aye Sanam
saare zakhm seena hai

yeh jo karti hai madhosh
tere lab ki hi meena hai

Na mile koi aasra to kya
mere liye to tera seena hai

Kabhi doobne na paaye SABA
Tere pyar ka jo safeena hai

ashk - aansu
meena - sharab
safeena - boat



wowwwwww...thats nice.... mera bih nam ata hai isme  :D
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«Reply #9 on: July 01, 2005, 05:02:30 PM »
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Mujhe ashk peena hai
Tere saath jeena hai

Tere pyar me aye Sanam
saare zakhm seena hai

yeh jo karti hai madhosh
tere lab ki hi meena hai

Na mile koi aasra to kya
mere liye to tera seena hai

Kabhi doobne na paaye SABA
Tere pyar ka jo safeena hai

ashk - aansu
meena - sharab
safeena - boat


arey wah saba,kya khoob likha hai.Very nice sandeep and sandhaya too...

meena ka matlab sharab hota hai tongue3 pata nahi thha lol.
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«Reply #10 on: July 01, 2005, 05:07:15 PM »
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Mujhe ashk peena hai
Tere saath jeena hai

Tere pyar me aye Sanam
saare zakhm seena hai

yeh jo karti hai madhosh
tere lab ki hi meena hai

Na mile koi aasra to kya
mere liye to tera seena hai

Kabhi doobne na paaye SABA
Tere pyar ka jo safeena hai

ashk - aansu
meena - sharab
safeena - boat


nice one ...saba..aaj humein Meena sis ke naam ka matlab pata chal gaya...abb samajh mein aya kyun unki shayari se madhosh ho jaate hain..lolzzz
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«Reply #11 on: July 01, 2005, 05:10:14 PM »
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lolllllllllllll nidhi and nikki.......... arre menu bhi abhi pata chala tha na  :D
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«Reply #12 on: July 01, 2005, 05:14:14 PM »
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oh really sis...........................u have got a nice name anyway.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: July 01, 2005, 05:52:18 PM »
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Badi muddat se doond raha tha use..jo mere pyaasi ruh mein kutchh bhar de...lage hai khuraak mil gayee aaj is ashiaan mein


her garhi jahaan khud bayaan kerta gaya
khud wahi jikr-e-wafa hota gaya.

ham na the kisi bajm mein shaamil hue,
jane phir kyuin faasla hota gaya.

jab doorian thi beech mein aisi badi
ki kaasidon ka daakhila hota gaya

dil se muflis our the woh be-rukhey,
ki herkaton se jaayza hota gaya.

rooth ker bhi dil pe unka raaj tha,
ye dekh 'harsh' shaayda hota gaya.


saba-saba wrote...

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Mujhe ashk peena hai
Tere saath jeena hai

Tere pyar me aye Sanam
saare zakhm seena hai

yeh jo karti hai madhosh
tere lab ki hi meena hai

Na mile koi aasra to kya
mere liye to tera seena hai

Kabhi doobne na paaye SABA
Tere pyar ka jo safeena hai

ashk - aansu
meena - sharab
safeena - boat
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«Reply #14 on: July 02, 2005, 08:58:43 AM »
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Mujhe ashk peena hai
Tere saath jeena hai

Tere pyar me aye Sanam
saare zakhm seena hai

yeh jo karti hai madhosh
tere lab ki hi meena hai

Na mile koi aasra to kya
mere liye to tera seena hai

Kabhi doobne na paaye SABA
Tere pyar ka jo safeena hai

ashk - aansu
meena - sharab
safeena - boat


well jasmine bahut khoob likha hai...

ashk mai kya rakha hai
main to kehta hun khoon peeyo...
insaan bannkar to dukh milte hai..
isse accha to vampaire bano....


Sandeep ji nice idea......... :lol:
keep it up
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