mujhe mita dooo..

by sagar_voski22@gmail.com on July 10, 2008, 12:52:39 PM
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tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed
Meri umid ko jinda rukh ya mujhko mita de…
Aye jaane tamana meri  mohabbat ka sila de..
Mai tutt jaun ya bikhar jaun…aise koi wajah de..
Chahe tu dawa de ya mujhko jehar he pila de.
Tu soch tu chah koi rasta buna de..
Mai bhul jau tujhko aisa koi manjar toh dikha de..
Shabnum ke bol nahi apne sholo se jala de..
Meri mohabbat ko aaj tu gunah buna de…
Itni de de badua meri aakhri saans meeta de..
“Mai bhul gaya tha tu chand hai meri jaan
Jo kuthe ke bhi chu naa saku wo tu aasma hai meri jaan”
Mujhe raah ka pathar samajh bus apne thokar se huta de..
Meri umid ko jinda rukh…..yaaa mujhko mita de….
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«Reply #1 on: July 10, 2008, 08:46:31 PM »
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wah ek ek line kamal ki likkhi hui hai... Nice sharing!!   Applause  Applause  Applause
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«Reply #2 on: July 11, 2008, 05:03:16 AM »
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bohut khoob sagar ji bohut ki kamal ka likha hai

meri mohobat ko dil se mitane wale
meri rooh ko mujhse juda karne wale
hai tujhse iltaja ek karam aur kar dei
yu pal pal na tadpa mujhe fana kar dei
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«Reply #3 on: July 11, 2008, 05:14:41 AM »
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tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed
Meri umid ko jinda rukh ya mujhko mita de…
Aye jaane tamana meri  mohabbat ka sila de..
Mai tutt jaun ya bikhar jaun…aise koi wajah de..
Chahe tu dawa de ya mujhko jehar he pila de.
Tu soch tu chah koi rasta buna de..
Mai bhul jau tujhko aisa koi manjar toh dikha de..
Shabnum ke bol nahi apne sholo se jala de..
Meri mohabbat ko aaj tu gunah buna de…
Itni de de badua meri aakhri saans meeta de..
“Mai bhul gaya tha tu chand hai meri jaan
Jo kuthe ke bhi chu naa saku wo tu aasma hai meri jaan”
Mujhe raah ka pathar samajh bus apne thokar se huta de..
Meri umid ko jinda rukh…..yaaa mujhko mita de….


sagar ji,

khoob likha he janaab.wah!

Prateek
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«Reply #4 on: July 11, 2008, 05:16:15 AM »
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bohut khoob sagar ji bohut ki kamal ka likha hai

meri mohobat ko dil se mitane wale
meri rooh ko mujhse juda karne wale
hai tujhse iltaja ek karam aur kar dei
yu pal pal na tadpa mujhe fana kar dei


bhawna ji,

hamesha ki behataren likha he appne.wah!

Prateek
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«Reply #5 on: July 11, 2008, 05:23:47 AM »
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shukriya prateek ji
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