Mujhe tum yad aati ho

by soudagar on June 15, 2012, 07:18:27 AM
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Kisi ki churiyon ki khanak sunta hu to mujhe tum yaad aati ho
kisi ka aanchal lehrate dekhta hu to mujhe tum yaad aati ho

tera barish mein mere sang chalna, bijli ke chamkne par mujhse liptna
barsat ki bundo ko chhuta hu to mujhe tum yaad aati ho

phulo ko pyar se sehlana,unki mehak ko apni sanso mein mehkana
phulo ko khilte dekhta hoon to mujhe tum yaad aati ho

tmhre khule balon ka kamr tak aana,balon ki ghata ko mere chehre pr failana
kisi ki khuli zulfein dekhta hu to mujhe tum yaad aati ho

tumhra wo chanchalpan, bacho ki tarah zidd aur shararat karna
kisi ki bache ki sharart dekhta hu to mujhe tum yaad aati ho

tumhara wo palkein uthana,apni muskrahat se sabko deewana banana
kisi deewane ko dekhta hu to mujhe tum yaad  aati ho

tumhara samundr kinare gharonde banana, banakr use hamara aashiyana batana
samudr kinare tute gharonde dekhta hu to mujhe tum yaaad aati ho

tumhara yu mujhe apna banana, meri aakhon mein khud ko basana
aaine mein apna aks dekhta hu to mujhe tum yaad aati ho

tumhara "soudagar"ko chhodkar jana, phir kabhi lout kar na aana
jahan mein jalte kafan dekhta hoon to mujhe tum bahut yaad aati ho
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«Reply #1 on: June 15, 2012, 07:33:08 AM »
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waah janab boht khub ek rau apka hua
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«Reply #2 on: June 15, 2012, 09:02:56 AM »
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bahut khoob dheron daad aur ek rau
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«Reply #3 on: June 15, 2012, 10:20:08 AM »
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bahut hi khoob Soudagar Ji, bahut khoob, bahut bahut badhai aur ek rau bhi
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«Reply #4 on: June 15, 2012, 10:42:59 AM »
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Soudagar Jee Aadaab!

Janab kia khoob aur pur asar ahsaas O khayaal kahe hai...
WaaH jee waaH dil shaad ho gaya aapke ahsaas O khayaal se
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Behad khoob aur umdaa khayaal bayaaN kiye hai janab...
humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Tecnicaly aapki kalaam behad kamzor rahi... uspar thoda
dhyaan dijiye... baki aapke khayaalaat aur lafz bahut
kamaal hai... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   
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«Reply #5 on: June 15, 2012, 02:22:13 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause   Soudagar ji aapke is rachna ki jitni taarif karun kam hogi... bahut khoobsurat ehsaason ke saath aapne yaadon ko jodke is khoobsurat rachna ko banaayaa... bahut bahut khoob...!!!

saagar ki har ek lahar ke saath mujhe tum yaad aati ho,
mere saanson ki har ek jwaar ke saath tum yaad aati ho,
yun to kehne ko keh leta hoon ki mujhe tum yaad nahi,
par mujhe meri har dhadkan ke saath tum yaad aati ho...
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«Reply #6 on: June 15, 2012, 06:49:07 PM »
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Quote from: soudagar on June 15, 2012, 07:18:27 AM
Kisi ki churiyon ki khanak sunta hu to mujhe tum yaad aati ho
kisi ka aanchal lehrate dekhta hu to mujhe tum yaad aati ho

tera barish mein mere sang chalna, bijli ke chamkne par mujhse liptna
barsat ki bundo ko chhuta hu to mujhe tum yaad aati ho

phulo ko pyar se sehlana,unki mehak ko apni sanso mein mehkana
phulo ko khilte dekhta hoon to mujhe tum yaad aati ho

tmhre khule balon ka kamr tak aana,balon ki ghata ko mere chehre pr failana
kisi ki khuli zulfein dekhta hu to mujhe tum yaad aati ho

tumhra wo chanchalpan, bacho ki tarah zidd aur shararat karna
kisi ki bache ki sharart dekhta hu to mujhe tum yaad aati ho

tumhara wo palkein uthana,apni muskrahat se sabko deewana banana
kisi deewane ko dekhta hu to mujhe tum yaad  aati ho

tumhara samundr kinare gharonde banana, banakr use hamara aashiyana batana
samudr kinare tute gharonde dekhta hu to mujhe tum yaaad aati ho

tumhara yu mujhe apna banana, meri aakhon mein khud ko basana
aaine mein apna aks dekhta hu to mujhe tum yaad aati ho

tumhara "soudagar"ko chhodkar jana, phir kabhi lout kar na aana
jahan mein jalte kafan dekhta hoon to mujhe tum bahut yaad aati ho
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«Reply #7 on: June 17, 2012, 03:02:46 AM »
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bahut bahut shukiriya sahil ji.
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bahut bahut shukirya saini sir.
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«Reply #9 on: June 23, 2012, 07:05:09 AM »
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bahut  bahut shukriya amit ji
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bahut bahut shukriya  parwaq ji housla afzai aur suggestion ke liye ..... notworthy notworthy notworthy
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bahut bahut shukriya hriday ji..... icon_flower icon_flower
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shukriya khamosh aawaj ji
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aap sabka bahut bahut shukriya....
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bahut khoob soudagar ji
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