mumkin nahi....

by Manav Mehra on July 29, 2007, 12:58:48 PM
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kuch toh karo humse koi baat
dil kahin aor lag jaye,mumkin nahi

karo phir humse ek toh mulakaat
dard-e-judai ab sehna mumkin nahi

tadapte huye nikalata hai yeh din
lamha lamha aaise jeena ab mumkin nahi

chandi raatein,tere bagair, dhoka sa lagti hain
tanha reh kar, tanhai se ladna abb mumkin

kuch toh karo reham hum par "Zalim Manasi"
"Deewane Manav" ko samjhana abb toh bilkul bhi mumkin nahi....!!!
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«Reply #1 on: July 29, 2007, 06:35:44 PM »
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manav ji
apne accha likha hai aur apke dard ko mein hum samajh sakte hain
Insha Allah apka pyar jald hi sanvar jayega
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«Reply #2 on: July 30, 2007, 07:39:36 AM »
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Quote from: "Sahiba Zehra"
manav ji
apne accha likha hai aur apke dard ko mein hum samajh sakte hain
Insha Allah apka pyar jald hi sanvar jayega


aap jaise nek insaano ki duaoN ki bohaat jaroorat padegi sahiba ji... thanks for writiing nice comments and understanding my feelings !!!
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«Reply #3 on: July 30, 2007, 05:23:24 PM »
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shurkiya manav ji

ap yuhi likhte rahiye kyunki use kya pata usne kya khoya hai.
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«Reply #4 on: July 31, 2007, 02:46:23 AM »
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Manav sir bahut khhob yaar kaya kahu aapki tareef ke liye mere alfaaz kam pad jayenge aap itna achcha likhe hain na ki mainkah nahi sakta

Waqat har jakham ko bhar deta hai dosht aapko jaldi hi ek aur bahut cute hi manshi milne wali hai
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«Reply #5 on: August 01, 2007, 07:08:32 AM »
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Honsla afzai ka sukhriya Sahiba


Sameer dost, tum mujhe sirf manav hi keh sakte ho.. sir sath lagane se mera ser dukhta hai tongue3 tongue3.. aur aapne mere liye itna accha comment kiya uske liye bohaat bohaat sukhriya aor han dost.. mujhe ek aur cute manasi chahiye toh jaroor hai lekin woh meri manasi ka ansh hogi .. hope u got it :wink:

chaliye aap bhi kuch likhiye iss post mein ...


tadapta tadapta gujare hai har lamha tere bagair
bekrar sa hua mausam bhi hai tere bagair

umeed milan ki phad-phada rahi hai "Manasi"
katra katra jale hai "Manav", tere bagair...!!!
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«Reply #6 on: August 01, 2007, 10:40:48 AM »
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Chalo ji aap kaho aur hum na likhe yesa ho hi nahi sakta

Judai main kyoun khoon ke aanshu tum piye jaa rahe ho
Dil main patthar rakh kar "Manav" kyoun  tum jiye jaa rahe ho
Tumhara pyar be-wafa nahi amar hai dosht
Kyoun ki har ghari har pal tum "Manasi" ka naam liye jaa rahe ho

Ek gujarish hain aap se ab aap rona dhona band kijiye
Ek achchi si poem funny section main post kijiye  :wink:

Taaki aapke face main thori si smile aa jaaye  :D
take care
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«Reply #7 on: August 03, 2007, 04:18:38 AM »
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jism-o-rooh mein ab toh woh samai hai
woh khud kehti hai woh mere liye aayi hai
mere dil ko pathar na kaho,ussmein "Manasi" hai
meri har saans mein usski khushi mehkai  hai

likhta hu iss dard mein, majboor ho kar
kayunki paayar mein mujhe bhi mili judai hai
koshish toh hai hasne ki,lekin waqt kuch aaisa hai
chah kar bhi "Manav", na mitte yeh tanhai hai ...!!!
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«Reply #8 on: August 18, 2007, 09:49:20 AM »
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kaise soch liya tumne
tum keh dogi aor main chala jaunga

apni zindagi ka har lamha
tere bagair kissi aor ke sath beetaunga

mumkin nahi,yeh jaan lo
abb toh sarri zindagi,sirf tumhein hi chahunga

ho sake toh pard lo jajzbaat
iske agge "Manasi",main aur kuch na keh paunga
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«Reply #9 on: August 18, 2007, 09:59:33 AM »
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too gud manav ji........behtarin tareeke se apne dil ke ahsaaso ko lafzo mai dhala  hai aapne,  .......exellent combination of rythm & feelings!!
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«Reply #10 on: August 18, 2007, 10:04:15 AM »
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Bahut achche ! Very sincere thoughts ! =D>
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«Reply #11 on: August 18, 2007, 07:06:22 PM »
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Very nice Manav....but I liked the first one most =D>
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«Reply #12 on: August 20, 2007, 04:27:39 AM »
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Thanks purani_jeans_aur_guitar, Rajbir and Talat


waiting for ur contribution also
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«Reply #13 on: August 20, 2007, 10:43:51 AM »
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Manav ji bahut hi acha likh rahe ho
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«Reply #14 on: August 26, 2007, 10:45:18 AM »
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Thanks Samnoj... jo mann mein aata hai likh deta hu... khushi hai ki aap sabko pasand aa raha hai
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