na aana kabhi mohabbat ke tum changul mein dhokhe se.. charan..

by lovely_charan on December 17, 2012, 09:38:18 AM
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ek kahaani sunati hun sabko main phir se aaj..
ek sachchai dikhati hun sabko main phir se aaj..

ek titli udha karti thi baaghon mein bekhabar..
rangon mein beshumar thi hasti mein tha hunar..

har raah-o-gulshan ki faqat mehka kiya karti thi..
wo  bekhabar titli jis raah rukhsaar kiya karti thi..

huyi mohabbat ki jang..aur dil haar gayi wo..
dekha ek gulab, toh humdam maan gayi woh..

khwaabon ke unche makaan uske banne lage..
bin seedhiyon ke raaste aasman chadhne lage..

magar haqiqat ko manzoor na tha ki aisa ho..
ki titli ko mile humraah jo gulaabon k jaisa ho..

kismat pe yaqeen titli ko kuch hadd se jyada tha..
toota phir bharosa jo khayaalon mein aadha tha..

chhuta sath unka toh phir na mil wo paaye kabhi..
hokar juda ek duje se magar reh na paaye kabhi..

har khilti kali ko ek hi salaah deta hai vo gulaab..
na karna mohabbat toot ke..aur na banna mehtaab..

haan bikhar jaoge tinka tinka tum hawa ke jhonke se..
na aana kabhi mohabbat ke tum changul mein dhokhe se..

na aana kabhi mohabbat ke tum changul mein dhokhe se..
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«Reply #1 on: December 17, 2012, 11:19:43 AM »
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heart touching very nice
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«Reply #2 on: December 17, 2012, 11:24:34 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: December 17, 2012, 03:55:50 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on December 17, 2012, 11:19:43 AM
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heart touching very nice
bahut bahut shukriya Aqsh jee... hausla afzayi ka tahe dil se shukriya..

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thank you very very much sir..
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«Reply #4 on: December 17, 2012, 05:41:12 PM »
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Jeet very nice....kya baat hai....Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: December 17, 2012, 05:46:23 PM »
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thank you soooo much bhaiya Usual Smile
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bahut hi khoob....padhte padhte aankhon k saamne ek tasveer si ban gayi mohabbat ki....bahut khoob
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«Reply #7 on: December 17, 2012, 06:28:56 PM »
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Fantastic..
behatreen naazm..jise padhke ..jaise mai bhi titli ban gaya..bhool gaya sab kuch..
keep it up.
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«Reply #8 on: December 18, 2012, 02:37:07 AM »
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welcome jeet
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«Reply #12 on: December 18, 2012, 05:50:37 PM »
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Quote from: Nikhaar on December 17, 2012, 06:07:44 PM
bahut hi khoob....padhte padhte aankhon k saamne ek tasveer si ban gayi mohabbat ki....bahut khoob
bahut bahut shukriya apne itni izzat bakhshi ... thank you ji..
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Quote from: mkv on December 17, 2012, 06:28:56 PM
Fantastic..
behatreen naazm..jise padhke ..jaise mai bhi titli ban gaya..bhool gaya sab kuch..
keep it up.
bahut bahut shukriya hausla badhane ka bahut bahut shukriya sir..
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on December 18, 2012, 02:37:07 AM
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thank you ji.. Usual Smile
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ati sundar
thanks a lot ji.,. Usual Smile
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thank you prasad jee.. Usual Smile
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