-----/// Naa main rahungaa, naa tum rahogi ///----- Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on October 13, 2012, 12:12:37 PM
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kuch log gunaah kar ke
muskuraake aage chale jaate hain
aur kuch log mujhe jaise
tadapte reh jaate hain
haan main hi thaa wo shaqs
jisne tumhe tabaah kiyaa
jisne tumhe barbaad kiyaa
karke waadaa saath nibhaane ka ta_umra
main hi thaa jisne tumhe tanhaa kiyaa

haan wo waqt hi aisa thaa
ki kuch samajh main payaa nahi
jisne mujhpe khud se bhi zyaadaa bharosaaa kiyaa
maine usi ko bewafaa karaar diyaaa
sun ke baatein gairon ki
main hi thaa jisne tumhe chhod diyaa

naa socha ek pal bhi
ki tum par kyaa beetegi
naa aayaa khayaal ek baar bhi
ki tum gunehgaar nahi
na hosh rahaa kuch bhi mujhe
aur tanhaaa tumhe chhod diyaaa

haan main aane waala thaa milne tumhe
saare gunaahon ki apne maafi maaangne
par waqt, baraa bereham niklaaa
jo ghaaw maine tumhaare dil pe kiyaa
wo har dard, har peedaa usne mujhe diyaa
December ki lambi shaamo me maine tumhe yaad kiyaa
yaad rahaa chehraa tumhaaraa
aur kuch naa mujhe yaad rahaa

thaa nahi is haal me main
ki milne tumhe aa bhi sakun
ek saal, fir kai saal guzre
December bhi aake har baar guzraa
chhod ke aayaa tumhe thaa
par fir tumhe main paa naa sakaa

bistar pe main letaa rahaa hoon
bimaar main rehtaa rahaa hoon
khaa naa sakaa, pee naa sakaa
thik se jee bhi naa sakaaa

maut pe yakeen hai mujhe
is saal aayegi milne
tumse to milan ho naa sakaa
par usse meraa milan hogaa

Fir December ki har shaam hogi...
naa main rahunga, naa tum rahogi.....

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«Reply #1 on: October 13, 2012, 12:53:46 PM »
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veru good hriday ji, bohut umda
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«Reply #2 on: October 13, 2012, 01:32:14 PM »
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Very very nice..hriday jee
bahut bahut badhiya likha hai..
kya baat hai.
yun hi likhte rahiye
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«Reply #3 on: October 13, 2012, 02:17:23 PM »
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Hariday ji kya bat hai.....atti sunder....waah ...
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«Reply #4 on: October 13, 2012, 02:57:53 PM »
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WAAH ...bohat khoob.........bohat c daad......
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«Reply #5 on: October 13, 2012, 04:28:22 PM »
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LAAJAWAAB
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«Reply #6 on: October 13, 2012, 04:36:08 PM »
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bahut lambi par bahut hi umda qalaam..... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: October 13, 2012, 06:10:20 PM »
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«Reply #8 on: October 13, 2012, 07:34:57 PM »
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Kapil BHai Aadaab!


Aik apne hi dard ki kahaani aapki zubaani padhi humne...
PalkeN bheeg gayi, tamaam umar bhar ke Manzar nigaahoN meiN
aa gaye...

Aisa lagaa jaise kisi ne humari umar bayaaN kar dii ho ..
bahut khoob janab... Aapki is kalaam par humne woH de diyaa
jo normaly kisi ki bhi kalaam par shayad hi koi deN...  Crying

Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: October 14, 2012, 04:31:30 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Aarish ji....!!!

Quote from: Aarish on October 13, 2012, 12:53:46 PM
veru good hriday ji, bohut umda
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«Reply #10 on: October 15, 2012, 11:13:22 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Mukesh ji....!!!

Quote from: mkv on October 13, 2012, 01:32:14 PM
Very very nice..hriday jee
bahut bahut badhiya likha hai..
kya baat hai.
yun hi likhte rahiye
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«Reply #11 on: October 15, 2012, 05:50:15 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Gaytri ji....!!!

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Hariday ji kya bat hai.....atti sunder....waah ...
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«Reply #12 on: October 16, 2012, 06:42:52 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Laaiba ji....!!!

Quote from: laaiba on October 13, 2012, 02:57:53 PM
WAAH ...bohat khoob.........bohat c daad......
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Bahut bahut shukriyaa Saini ji...!!!

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«Reply #14 on: October 17, 2012, 08:13:17 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Karan ji... kya karun .. emotions ke flow ko rok nahi paayaa....!!! tongue3

Quote from: soudagar on October 13, 2012, 04:36:08 PM
bahut lambi par bahut hi umda qalaam..... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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