NAZM - FUSOON ... ZARRAA

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DostoN ... Aadaab .... Ek mukhtasar si nazm pesh hai ...

fasurda* shaam aur us par fusooN* ye teri yaadoN ka
kaha tha waqt-e-rukhsat tu ne kya dhuNdhla gaya hai ab
zara sa bhi n baaki hai khumaar ab teri baatoN ka
ye tera lams* baagh-e-dil meiN tha jo phool sa khilta
khizaaN meiN hijr ki wo kis tarah murjha gaya hai ab
koyee bhoola fasaana hai naheeN jis ka nishaaN milta
magar kamzor hoti yaad aur bhi dil dukhaati hai
haqeeqat se guzar aaye fusooN meiN jaan jaati hai

- zarraa

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fusooN = magic / magical spell
lams = touch
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«Reply #1 on: July 05, 2014, 07:02:03 PM »
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bahut khooooob. ........!!!!!
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«Reply #2 on: July 05, 2014, 10:26:55 PM »
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 Applause bahut khoob Zarra saheb
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«Reply #3 on: July 05, 2014, 10:32:10 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: July 05, 2014, 10:45:49 PM »
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DostoN ... Aadaab .... Ek mukhtasar si nazm pesh hai ...

fasurda* shaam aur us par fusooN* ye teri yaadoN ka
kaha tha waqt-e-rukhsat tu ne kya dhuNdhla gaya hai ab
zara sa bhi n baaki hai khumaar ab teri baatoN ka
ye tera lams* baagh-e-dil meiN tha jo phool sa khilta
khizaaN meiN hijr ki wo kis tarah murjha gaya hai ab
koyee bhoola fasaana hai naheeN jis ka nishaaN milta
magar kamzor hoti yaad aur bhi dil dukhaati hai
haqeeqat se guzar aaye fusooN meiN jaan jaati hai

- zarraa

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fasurda = depressed
fusooN = magic / magical spell
lams = touch

nice,sir
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«Reply #5 on: July 06, 2014, 04:55:03 AM »
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Zarra Sahab Aadaab....!

Bahut khoob janab bahut khoob ... badi hi dil fareb nazm ko khoob lafzoN meiN anjaam diya hai aapne ...
Fasurda shaam aur us par fusooN yeH teri yaadoN ka "
Wallaah janab behad khoob ..

Is dilfareb purasar aur pursoz nazm par humari hazaaroN dili daad kabul kijiye ...
Likhte rahiye ... bazm meiN aate rahiye ...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye ...

Khuda Hafez ....

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«Reply #6 on: July 06, 2014, 07:22:08 PM »
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bahut khoob
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waah waah
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«Reply #8 on: July 08, 2014, 09:15:59 PM »
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bahut khooooob. ........!!!!!


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DostoN ... Aadaab .... Ek mukhtasar si nazm pesh hai ...

fasurda* shaam aur us par fusooN* ye teri yaadoN ka
kaha tha waqt-e-rukhsat tu ne kya dhuNdhla gaya hai ab
zara sa bhi n baaki hai khumaar ab teri baatoN ka
ye tera lams* baagh-e-dil meiN tha jo phool sa khilta
khizaaN meiN hijr ki wo kis tarah murjha gaya hai ab
koyee bhoola fasaana hai naheeN jis ka nishaaN milta
magar kamzor hoti yaad aur bhi dil dukhaati hai
haqeeqat se guzar aaye fusooN meiN jaan jaati hai

- zarraa

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fasurda = depressed
fusooN = magic / magical spell
lams = touch

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: July 10, 2014, 02:23:21 AM »
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Applause bahut khoob Zarra saheb

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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah behad khoob Zarra saheb.
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behatreen zarraa saheb

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«Reply #13 on: July 12, 2014, 12:36:57 AM »
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nice,sir

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बहुत खूब...ज़र्रा साहब......
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