NeEnD......:Shayri for Dard -e- Judai

nice_off_me

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dosto iss nazm mein buhut gehraii hai agar aap iss gehraii ko samjh sake tu buhut acha lagega mujhe.......ye ek ladke ki zubani likh rahi hoon.......acha lage yaa na lage bata dijiyega.....thank you
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NeEnD unko aa rahi hai palke jhapak rahe hai
lo band hu raha hai mera sharab khana,

gajab khuda ka abhi daasta ka aagaaz
aur veh kehte hai hume neend aayi jati hai,

ab bas angraiiya le le ke kyu aankhon ko malte hu
bhala yeh bhi tu ghar hai soo jaoo ju neend aayi hai,

suraj na dubta hai naa aati hai mujhe neend
julfein bikher dijiye aur raat kijiye,

ek ek kar ke bhuj chuke hai chirag
neend ab dekhiye kab aati hai,

neend aati hai khuli aankh se darr jati hai
sehmi-sehmi huee chup chaap nikal jati hai,

neend bhi kabhi naaznin se kam nahi
aate aat sehar tak aayegi,

meri laash ke sirhane veh khade yu keh rahe hai
isse neend yu naa ati agar intezar hota,

neend uski hai,din uska hai,raat uski hai
jiske shaane par julfein pareshaa hu gayii.......


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Tosha

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NeEnD......

«Reply #1 on: June 19, 2005, 05:05:00 PM »

hmmm
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baat to khoob kahi hai aap ne Simran!!
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hamme bhi aapne sharab khane le chalo
isse pahele vo band ho jaye
hamme bhi char jam pila do
haare hue hai zindgi main hum bhi
hamme bhi hamesh ke nind sula do


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NeEnD......

«Reply #2 on: June 19, 2005, 05:13:00 PM »

very nice simran sis,interesting and right,gr8 work......!!!!!!!!


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nice_off_me

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NeEnD......

«Reply #3 on: June 20, 2005, 12:22:54 PM »

thank you tosha,and nidhi sis for liking it
tosha likha tu acha hai lakin last ki line kuch achi nahi lagi.......mere samne aaj ke baad aisi baat ki naa tu bas mein baat nahi karogi smajhi...take care


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Re: NeEnD......

«Reply #4 on: June 20, 2005, 03:38:27 PM »

Quote from: "nice_off_me"

wah wah simmi...............superbsssssssss ...........bahot accha likha.......very nice wordings.......bahot deep ghazal hai very nice tosha................good reply.............

na need aayee na sab-e-intizaar gujri
unke intizaar mein meri saari umar gujari.......................


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fakharenaveed

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NeEnD......

«Reply #5 on: June 20, 2005, 10:29:39 PM »

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meri laash ke sirhane veh khade yu keh rahe hai
isse neend yu naa ati agar intezar hota,

neend uski hai,din uska hai,raat uski hai
jiske shaane par julfein pareshaa hu gayii.......

Nice


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