**Nisaar hasi tujhpe kar ke ham meri jaan chale...

by sakhi1909 on February 21, 2007, 09:56:13 AM
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hi dostoin aaj is forum mein pahli baar post ka rahi hun apni nazm.


 sakhi

Tere khayaalo.n se ubar kar ham aaj chaley
Chali hai jaan meri ham bhi meri jaan chaley

Teri har baat pe jo ham has diya kartey they
Nisaar hasi tujhpe kar ke ham meri jaan chale

Jidhar bhi dekhtey hai tum hi tum dikhai diye
Nazar se door kar ke tumko meri jaan chaley

Jo waada todaa tha har meine koi baat to thi
Dooba ke aanshuo mein khud ko meri jaan chaley

Hazaar baar hum tujhe dekhtey rahe mud mud
Hazaaroin deke duayen tujhe meri jaan chaley

‘Sakhi’ ye kaisi anshuo ki aaj barish hai
chhipake inko sabse door kahin meri jaan chaley
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«Reply #1 on: February 21, 2007, 12:51:13 PM »
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That's really very Good Sakhi... Usual Smile
Bahut achha likha hai aapne...

You are most Welcome in the Beautiful World of Yoindia..  :flower:  :flower:  :flower:
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«Reply #2 on: February 21, 2007, 01:51:19 PM »
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Sakhi

Bahut khoob !

Aap ka Yoindia par swaagat hai :D
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«Reply #3 on: February 22, 2007, 08:23:27 AM »
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hi dostoin aaj is forum mein pahli baar post ka rahi hun apni nazm.


 sakhi

Tere khayaalo.n se ubar kar ham aaj chaley
Chali hai jaan meri ham bhi meri jaan chaley

Teri har baat pe jo ham has diya kartey they
Nisaar hasi tujhpe kar ke ham meri jaan chale

Jidhar bhi dekhtey hai tum hi tum dikhai diye
Nazar se door kar ke tumko meri jaan chaley

Jo waada todaa tha har meine koi baat to thi
Dooba ke aanshuo mein khud ko meri jaan chaley

Hazaar baar hum tujhe dekhtey rahe mud mud
Hazaaroin deke duayen tujhe meri jaan chaley

‘Sakhi’ ye kaisi anshuo ki aaj barish hai
chhipake inko sabse door kahin meri jaan chaley



very nice one Sakhi.... bahooot aacha likha hai.....
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«Reply #4 on: February 22, 2007, 11:10:55 AM »
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That's really very Good Sakhi... Usual Smile
Bahut achha likha hai aapne...

You are most Welcome in the Beautiful World of Yoindia..  :flower:  :flower:  :flower:


dil se shukriya shikha ji aoka.

shkriya welcome karne ke liye.
hoshla dene ke liye aapka sath mila acha laga.
sakhi
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«Reply #5 on: February 22, 2007, 11:14:52 AM »
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Sakhi

Bahut khoob !

Aap ka Yoindia par swaagat hai :D


hi rajbir ji

shkriya pasand karne ke liye .
apne yahan aake mera swagat kiya acha laga sath pakar
sakhi
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«Reply #6 on: February 22, 2007, 11:16:51 AM »
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Quote from: "sakhi1909"
hi dostoin aaj is forum mein pahli baar post ka rahi hun apni nazm.


 sakhi

Tere khayaalo.n se ubar kar ham aaj chaley
Chali hai jaan meri ham bhi meri jaan chaley

Teri har baat pe jo ham has diya kartey they
Nisaar hasi tujhpe kar ke ham meri jaan chale

Jidhar bhi dekhtey hai tum hi tum dikhai diye
Nazar se door kar ke tumko meri jaan chaley

Jo waada todaa tha har meine koi baat to thi
Dooba ke aanshuo mein khud ko meri jaan chaley

Hazaar baar hum tujhe dekhtey rahe mud mud
Hazaaroin deke duayen tujhe meri jaan chaley

‘Sakhi’ ye kaisi anshuo ki aaj barish hai
chhipake inko sabse door kahin meri jaan chaley



very nice one Sakhi.... bahooot aacha likha hai.....


alone ji

shukriya aap yahan aai aur mera sath diya.
sakhi
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«Reply #7 on: April 14, 2007, 07:47:50 PM »
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hi dostoin aaj is forum mein pahli baar post ka rahi hun apni nazm.


 sakhi

Tere khayaalo.n se ubar kar ham aaj chaley
Chali hai jaan meri ham bhi meri jaan chaley

Teri har baat pe jo ham has diya kartey they
Nisaar hasi tujhpe kar ke ham meri jaan chale

Jidhar bhi dekhtey hai tum hi tum dikhai diye
Nazar se door kar ke tumko meri jaan chaley

Jo waada todaa tha har meine koi baat to thi
Dooba ke aanshuo mein khud ko meri jaan chaley

Hazaar baar hum tujhe dekhtey rahe mud mud
Hazaaroin deke duayen tujhe meri jaan chaley

‘Sakhi’ ye kaisi anshuo ki aaj barish hai
chhipake inko sabse door kahin meri jaan chaley


Bahut Khoob Sakhi....Welcome to YOINDIA....!!!!!!!
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«Reply #8 on: April 14, 2007, 08:19:32 PM »
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bahoot hi acha likha hai sakhi. apka Yoindia mai sawagat hai....


nisaar tujh per kuch bhi kar jaau
tu kahe to tere liye mar jaau
Judai na dena mujhko kabhi bhi tu
tere liye koi bhi had mai paar kar jaau
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«Reply #9 on: April 23, 2007, 08:10:36 AM »
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hi dostoin aaj is forum mein pahli baar post ka rahi hun apni nazm.


 sakhi

Tere khayaalo.n se ubar kar ham aaj chaley
Chali hai jaan meri ham bhi meri jaan chaley

Teri har baat pe jo ham has diya kartey they
Nisaar hasi tujhpe kar ke ham meri jaan chale

Jidhar bhi dekhtey hai tum hi tum dikhai diye
Nazar se door kar ke tumko meri jaan chaley

Jo waada todaa tha har meine koi baat to thi
Dooba ke aanshuo mein khud ko meri jaan chaley

Hazaar baar hum tujhe dekhtey rahe mud mud
Hazaaroin deke duayen tujhe meri jaan chaley

‘Sakhi’ ye kaisi anshuo ki aaj barish hai
chhipake inko sabse door kahin meri jaan chaley


Bahut Khoob Sakhi....Welcome to YOINDIA....!!!!!!!


shukriya dil se apka

har baat ke liye

sakhi
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«Reply #10 on: April 23, 2007, 08:23:31 AM »
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bahoot hi acha likha hai sakhi. apka Yoindia mai sawagat hai....


nisaar tujh per kuch bhi kar jaau
tu kahe to tere liye mar jaau
Judai na dena mujhko kabhi bhi tu
tere liye koi bhi had mai paar kar jaau


pooja ji shukriya pasand kiya apne mera likha...

shukriya swagat kane ke liye...

judaai dene ki chahat to nahi ki hamne
woh to kuch majbooriya kabhi ban jati hai
warna kya marke bhi dil mar sakta hai
ek awaz hawaa mein bhi rah jaati hai

sakhi
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