~~~Palkon per tere khwab rakh kar~~~ -Panna 2:Shayri for Dard -e- Judai

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«Reply #15 on: May 10, 2009, 07:43:55 AM »

Quote from: jannatjahan on May 04, 2009, 10:17:38 AM

Palkon par tere khwab rakh kar sochti rahi
mai raat bhar yun hi karwate badalti rahi
na neend thi aankhon me na dil ko sukun tha
takiye me sar chupa kar yun hi sisakati rahi
wo makhmali sparsh wo resmi ehsaas
yaad karti unhe phir tadapti rahi
wo dekhna najar bhar kar wo suljhana julfon ka
main un yaadon ki barish me yun hi bhingati rahi
har pal dil najar me rahta hai tu phir bhi
tere tohfe me teri chavi ko mai dhundhati rahi
ye yaadein ye dard ye bechainiyaan ye chubhan
din gujarata raha raat katati rahi
apni yaadon ko bistar ki silwaton me chupaye
main yun hi raat bhar tadapti sisakti rahi

Bahut khoob JJ Usual Smile


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jannatjahan

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Re: ~~~Palkon per tere khwab rakh kar~~~

«Reply #16 on: May 10, 2009, 07:56:04 AM »

Quote from: madhuwesh on May 10, 2009, 07:42:33 AM

VERY VERY NICE JANNAT JI.
TOO GOOD.

Thanks Dear Madhu ji


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pankshivam

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Re: ~~~Palkon per tere khwab rakh kar~~~

«Reply #17 on: May 10, 2009, 07:59:06 AM »

Ur Welcome Jannatji

Palkon pe tere khwab rakh ke, nind me muskurate rahe...
Yaadon ka karva gujarta raha, aur ham ask bahate rahe...
Sath bitaye palon ki aahat satati rahi, gujare sare lamhe yaad aate rahe...
Na mili tere aane ki ummid to kya, ham ummid ki sham teri ummid lekar bitate rahe...
~Pank~


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Re: ~~~Palkon per tere khwab rakh kar~~~

«Reply #18 on: May 10, 2009, 08:00:06 AM »

Quote from: jannatjahan on May 10, 2009, 05:49:34 AM

Thanks Dear Roja

Welcome dear ..

Nice line Pank ji..


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jannatjahan

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Re: ~~~Palkon per tere khwab rakh kar~~~

«Reply #19 on: May 10, 2009, 08:05:10 AM »

Quote from: {Angel} on May 10, 2009, 07:43:55 AM

Bahut khoob JJ Usual Smile

Thanks Dear Angel


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Re: ~~~Palkon per tere khwab rakh kar~~~

«Reply #20 on: May 10, 2009, 08:16:59 AM »

Bahut Bahut Khoob Jannatjahan..


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jannatjahan

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Re: ~~~Palkon per tere khwab rakh kar~~~

«Reply #21 on: May 10, 2009, 08:18:47 AM »

Quote from: pankshivam on May 10, 2009, 07:59:06 AM

Thanks Pank ji....N really very nice addition

Yaadon ki Dhundh ke sath soch ki bistar par karwatein badalte rahe...
baad muddat ke unhe hum hume wo yaad siddat se aate rahe
socha kabhi to kam hoga faasla drmiyaan hamare
par har baar saahil ko chu kar lehar..mil kar phir bichadte rahe....


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pankshivam

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Re: ~~~Palkon per tere khwab rakh kar~~~

«Reply #22 on: May 10, 2009, 08:21:39 AM »

Quote from: Roja on May 10, 2009, 08:00:06 AM

Welcome dear ..

Nice line Pank ji..

Thanks Rojaji


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jannatjahan

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Re: ~~~Palkon per tere khwab rakh kar~~~

«Reply #23 on: May 10, 2009, 08:36:14 AM »

Quote from: khwaish on May 10, 2009, 08:16:59 AM

Bahut Bahut Khoob Jannatjahan..

Thanks a lot Dear khwaish ji


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pankshivam

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Re: ~~~Palkon per tere khwab rakh kar~~~

«Reply #24 on: May 10, 2009, 09:15:10 AM »

Quote from: jannatjahan on May 10, 2009, 08:18:47 AM

Thanks Dear

Faslon ke darmiyan ek dabi si tanhayi thi...
Ashko ki lahar sath apne ek yaad teri laayi thi...
~Pank~


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jannatjahan

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Re: ~~~Palkon per tere khwab rakh kar~~~

«Reply #25 on: May 10, 2009, 09:31:57 AM »

Quote from: pankshivam on May 10, 2009, 09:15:10 AM

Thanks Dear

Faslon ke darmiyan ek dabi si tanhayi thi...
Ashko ki lahar sath apne ek yaad teri laayi thi...
~Pank~

Very nice Dear....

Unki Yaadon ke sang yun hi tanha khoyee thi....
raat bhar royee aankhon ki surkhi unhe khub bhayee thi....


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Re: ~~~Palkon per tere khwab rakh kar~~~

«Reply #26 on: May 10, 2009, 09:41:49 AM »

Great work JJ, bahut nikhri hui aur har shayr men tarap dikh rahi hai, wah..
Kya andaz hai...


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syednaami

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Re: ~~~Palkon per tere khwab rakh kar~~~

«Reply #27 on: May 10, 2009, 09:42:21 AM »

Great work JJ, bahut nikhri hui aur har shayr men tarap dikh rahi hai, wah..
Kya andaz hai...


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jannatjahan

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Re: ~~~Palkon per tere khwab rakh kar~~~

«Reply #28 on: May 10, 2009, 09:53:16 AM »

Quote from: syednaami on May 10, 2009, 09:42:21 AM

Great work JJ, bahut nikhri hui aur har shayr men tarap dikh rahi hai, wah..
Kya andaz hai...

Thanks Dear Syed ji


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pankshivam

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Re: ~~~Palkon per tere khwab rakh kar~~~

«Reply #29 on: May 10, 2009, 09:57:58 AM »

Quote from: jannatjahan on May 10, 2009, 09:31:57 AM

Very nice Dear....

Unki Yaadon ke sang yun hi tanha khoyee thi....
raat bhar royee aankhon ki surkhi unhe khub bhayee thi....

Thanks Nice One Again Dear
Tanhaiyon ki dastan, uski aankho me nazar aati hai...
Jis pal uski yaad aati hai, bs har taraf sanse bikhar jatin hain...
~Pank~


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