PEHLI BARKHA

by smardia on December 22, 2008, 10:17:08 AM
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PEHLI  BARKHA


Deir raat
Bekhaber thye hum soye
Kisi ne khidki dee thap-thapa,
Alsaya sa man, soya soya tan
Fir kuchh chakraya man.

Deir raat khidki ki rah ye kaun aaya
Sajan to hai perdesh, fir
Meethe meethe sapno se kisne jagaya,
Dil bharmaya, ki……..tabhi
Khidki se ek hava ka jhonka aaya
Bhini-bhini, jani-pehchani,
Sondhi-sondhi c mahak pa
Man mayur nach utha……….

Ye to hai sawan ka pehla sandesh
Mansoon ka pravesh,
Tabhi huaa tej prakash
Aur kadki bijlee
Sunai d baadlon ki gad-gadahat
Huaa meghon ka shore
Duur kahin tuhuka more
Man huaa bhav vibhor

Aur fir hone lagi bhor
Duur kahin baj raha tha violin
Koi masti se ga raha tha bhajan
Sunai de raha tha pados ka keertan
Tan man hone laga tha saghan
Aur fir nidra mai kho gaye hum….

Kuchh deir baad fir hui thap-thpahat
Bouchharon se bheega tan
Khuli adh-khuli neend
Sab samaz raha tha man
Chhedne khidki k raaste
Aai hai bakha bahen
Jaise he bheega tan
Shital sparsh bhee………..
Laga gaya agan.

Man hone laga magan
Tabhi fir joor se aai pawan
Fatta jaise gagan
Kamp-kampaya badan
Gud-gudaya tan
Bud-budaya man
Kuchh to daya karo Madan(Cupid)
Abhi perdesh hain sajan
Yu na kheecho Kaam Kaman
Dol jayega imaan
Kyu karte itna abhimaan
Mausam bhi hai beimaan
Kahan ho mere sajan gulfaam………

Indra dev ko bhi hai gumaan
Kar diya hai jaise élan
Raat aur din barsega aasman
Rasta n suuzhe………………
Kaise pure ho armaan……..

Surendra Mardia ''Surya''
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«Reply #1 on: December 22, 2008, 10:29:11 AM »
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Surya ji,

Jaisa aap ke naam mein divya prakash hai..waisi he aap ki yeh rachna hai Applause Applause Applause

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«Reply #2 on: December 22, 2008, 10:59:23 AM »
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PRIYA RAJBIRJI,


PRATIKRIYA K LIYE DHANYAVAD..... happy3
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«Reply #3 on: December 22, 2008, 11:54:18 AM »
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Bahut khoobsurat kavita hai Surya Ji.. Applause
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«Reply #4 on: December 22, 2008, 03:35:12 PM »
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Bahut hi sunder barkha barsayi hai Surya.

Jasbir Singh
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #5 on: December 23, 2008, 12:07:53 AM »
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Ati Sundar Surya Ji
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«Reply #6 on: December 28, 2008, 05:04:24 PM »
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danyavad ji....
Quote from: Mahiya on December 22, 2008, 11:54:18 AM
Bahut khoobsurat kavita hai Surya Ji.. Applause
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«Reply #7 on: December 28, 2008, 05:08:52 PM »
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aap ko pasand aayi....dhanyavad ji
Quote from: jasbirsingh on December 22, 2008, 03:35:12 PM
Bahut hi sunder barkha barsayi hai Surya.

Jasbir Singh
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«Reply #8 on: December 28, 2008, 05:16:13 PM »
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shukriya ji
Quote from: Rajesh Harish on December 23, 2008, 12:07:53 AM
Ati Sundar Surya Ji
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«Reply #9 on: December 31, 2008, 06:06:09 AM »
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Quote from: smardia on December 22, 2008, 10:59:23 AM
PRIYA RAJBIRJI,


PRATIKRIYA K LIYE DHANYAVAD..... happy3

yah PRIYA nahi Priye hai  DOH DOH

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Apki kavita ko kai baar parra, wah kaya kahne... sahi likha hai Ati Sunder.. bahoot achi lagi apki kavita.... asha hai aor bhi aise rachnaye apse padne ko milegi.
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«Reply #10 on: January 02, 2009, 10:49:42 AM »
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BARISH me jab saajan dur ho..... tab....
bahut sunder chitran kiya hai aapne surendraji
Daad kabul kijiye...
Intezaar rehega aapki aur rachnao ka....

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«Reply #11 on: January 02, 2009, 12:52:36 PM »
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aapne mohar laga di to bus kavita safal hui
esi tarah hosla-afzai jaari rakhiye..jald hi nai kavita pesh karunga...
Dhanyavad ji
Quote from: ANAAM on January 02, 2009, 10:49:42 AM
BARISH me jab saajan dur ho..... tab....
bahut sunder chitran kiya hai aapne surendraji
Daad kabul kijiye...
Intezaar rehega aapki aur rachnao ka....

anaam icon_flower tearyeyed
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«Reply #12 on: August 28, 2009, 02:41:22 AM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Smardia ji,wonderful creation icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley.
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«Reply #13 on: August 28, 2009, 11:24:44 AM »
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Dhanyawad.....Madhuji...aap sab ki pratikriya se hamara  likhne ka
prayas aur badh jata hai....shukriya

Quote from: madhuwesh on August 28, 2009, 02:41:22 AM
Wah wah bahut khoob Smardia ji,wonderful creation icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley.
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«Reply #14 on: August 28, 2009, 12:44:30 PM »
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Kya Baat hai Surya ji...Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Likha hai

An Excellent creation ! Good Work Usual Smile
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