PEHLI BARKHA

by smardia on December 22, 2008, 10:17:08 AM
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«Reply #15 on: August 28, 2009, 12:55:46 PM »
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Shukriya..Kaashji aap bhi bahut achha likhte hain...
Quote from: @kaash on August 28, 2009, 12:46:06 PM
bahot khoob likha hai Smardia ji
very nice
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«Reply #16 on: July 02, 2010, 01:34:41 PM »
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Dil baagh-baagh ho gaya aapki ye poem padh ke Surendra-ji.... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Badi adbhut kalpanaa hai aapki.... angel11 angel11 angel11
Varsha ke saath nok-jhok... Winking Winking Winking Winking Winking
mazaa aa gya.... Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you!
 happy9)kavita padh rahi hu aur baahar rim-jhim rim-jhim
Baarish ho rahi hai usska aanand utha rahi hu.... angel8 angel8 angel8 angel8 angel8

Yu tou pardesh beshak tum jaoo piya
Par madhu-maas mai dur jaaya n karo

Yu tou aajaao din mai bhi bejhijhak
Par raat main duur tum jaaya n karo


Quote from: smardia on December 22, 2008, 10:17:08 AM
PEHLI  BARKHA


Deir raat
Bekhaber thye hum soye
Kisi ne khidki dee thap-thapa,
Alsaya sa man, soya soya tan
Fir kuchh chakraya man.

Deir raat khidki ki rah ye kaun aaya
Sajan to hai perdesh, fir
Meethe meethe sapno se kisne jagaya,
Dil bharmaya, ki……..tabhi
Khidki se ek hava ka jhonka aaya
Bhini-bhini, jani-pehchani,
Sondhi-sondhi c mahak pa
Man mayur nach utha……….

Ye to hai sawan ka pehla sandesh
Mansoon ka pravesh,
Tabhi huaa tej prakash
Aur kadki bijlee
Sunai d baadlon ki gad-gadahat
Huaa meghon ka shore
Duur kahin tuhuka more
Man huaa bhav vibhor

Aur fir hone lagi bhor
Duur kahin baj raha tha violin
Koi masti se ga raha tha bhajan
Sunai de raha tha pados ka keertan
Tan man hone laga tha saghan
Aur fir nidra mai kho gaye hum….

Kuchh deir baad fir hui thap-thpahat
Bouchharon se bheega tan
Khuli adh-khuli neend
Sab samaz raha tha man
Chhedne khidki k raaste
Aai hai bakha bahen
Jaise he bheega tan
Shital sparsh bhee………..
Laga gaya agan.

Man hone laga magan
Tabhi fir joor se aai pawan
Fatta jaise gagan
Kamp-kampaya badan
Gud-gudaya tan
Bud-budaya man
Kuchh to daya karo Madan(Cupid)
Abhi perdesh hain sajan
Yu na kheecho Kaam Kaman
Dol jayega imaan
Kyu karte itna abhimaan
Mausam bhi hai beimaan
Kahan ho mere sajan gulfaam………

Indra dev ko bhi hai gumaan
Kar diya hai jaise élan
Raat aur din barsega aasman
Rasta n suuzhe………………
Kaise pure ho armaan……..

Surendra Mardia ''Surya''
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«Reply #17 on: July 03, 2010, 11:36:30 AM »
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Koyalji aapne tou tariff k pul bandh diye...
Shayad kavita se jayada aapko mausam ka mazaa aaraha hoga aur wo saara aapne mere hisse mai daal diya....Anyway aapko meri kavita pasand aayi....meri lekhni safal huyee....Dhanaywaad aapka...

Quote from: KOYAL46 on July 02, 2010, 01:34:41 PM
Dil baagh-baagh ho gaya aapki ye poem padh ke Surendra-ji.... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Badi adbhut kalpanaa hai aapki.... angel11 angel11 angel11
Varsha ke saath nok-jhok... Winking Winking Winking Winking Winking
mazaa aa gya.... Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you!
 happy9)kavita padh rahi hu aur baahar rim-jhim rim-jhim
Baarish ho rahi hai usska aanand utha rahi hu.... angel8 angel8 angel8 angel8 angel8

Yu tou pardesh beshak tum jaoo piya
Par madhu-maas mai dur jaaya n karo

Yu tou aajaao din mai bhi bejhijhak
Par raat main duur tum jaaya n karo
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«Reply #18 on: July 05, 2010, 12:42:26 PM »
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Bada romaantic reply diya hai Koyalji aapne....

Baarish ka ye mausam aur ye tanhaayee
Aye khuda kaisi meri kundali banaayee

Ab aur sahi naa jaaye mujh se judayee
Majurkar meri chhuti,sun meri duhayee

Ghar pe intzaar kare hai meri lugaayee
Ab tou karo hey bhagwaan meri sunwayee


Quote from: KOYAL46 on July 02, 2010, 01:34:41 PM
Dil baagh-baagh ho gaya aapki ye poem padh ke Surendra-ji.... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Badi adbhut kalpanaa hai aapki.... angel11 angel11 angel11
Varsha ke saath nok-jhok... Winking Winking Winking Winking Winking
mazaa aa gya.... Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you!
 happy9)kavita padh rahi hu aur baahar rim-jhim rim-jhim
Baarish ho rahi hai usska aanand utha rahi hu.... angel8 angel8 angel8 angel8 angel8

Yu tou pardesh beshak tum jaoo piya
Par madhu-maas mai dur jaaya n karo

Yu tou aajaao din mai bhi bejhijhak
Par raat main duur tum jaaya n karo
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #19 on: July 06, 2010, 01:53:24 PM »
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Tahe dil se aapka shukriya Anaam-bhai..... icon_flower


Quote from: ANAAM on July 05, 2010, 12:42:26 PM
Bada romaantic reply diya hai Koyalji aapne....

Baarish ka ye mausam aur ye tanhaayee
Aye khuda kaisi meri kundali banaayee

Ab aur sahi naa jaaye mujh se judayee
Majurkar meri chhuti,sun meri duhayee

Ghar pe intzaar kare hai meri lugaayee
Ab tou karo hey bhagwaan meri sunwayee
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