~~~Phir haath nahi aata...~~~

by vitasta on May 19, 2009, 11:08:47 AM
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kho jo jaata hai ik lamha, phir haath nahi aata
raat saath guzaar sapna, phir haath nahi aata

aati hai yaad uski subah bhi, shaam bhi yaar
sochun chookar dekhun, phir haath nahi aata

ek nazm, do nazm, hazaaron hi nazm qurban
dhundha har lafz 'Noor' jo phir haath nahi aata

na jaam, na aaraam, chain kahan paye 'Viti' ab
ulfat ka ek katra bhi kabhi phir haath nahi aata...
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«Reply #1 on: May 19, 2009, 11:41:33 AM »
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Bohot Khoob !!
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«Reply #2 on: May 19, 2009, 11:44:39 AM »
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shukriya Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: May 19, 2009, 06:19:24 PM »
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Bahaut khoob
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«Reply #4 on: May 19, 2009, 06:33:14 PM »
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Quote from: dead heart on May 19, 2009, 06:19:24 PM
Bahaut khoob
shukriya Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: May 19, 2009, 06:41:21 PM »
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wah wah wah VITASTA, wah bahut hi khoob


DEH JAYE ISS DIL KOH KARARAAR, WOH SHAKHS NAHI AATA
LEH JAYE USS PAAR, WOH MAJDHAAR NAHI AATA

KISS SEY GILA KAREY, KOI NAZAR NAHI AATA
BHEED MEH BHI TANHA HAI, APNA NAZAR NAHI AATA



JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #6 on: May 19, 2009, 06:52:01 PM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on May 19, 2009, 06:41:21 PM
wah wah wah VITASTA, wah bahut hi khoob


DEH JAYE ISS DIL KOH KARARAAR, WOH SHAKHS NAHI AATA
LEH JAYE USS PAAR, WOH MAJDHAAR NAHI AATA

KISS SEY GILA KAREY, KOI NAZAR NAHI AATA
BHEED MEH BHI TANHA HAI, APNA NAZAR NAHI AATA



JASBIR SINGH
hira_company@yahoo.com



shukriya jasbir, bahut achcha likha aapne Usual Smile

jaam se bhi kabhi gham nahi jaata
neend mein sapna nazar nahi aata
tu aake de ja kuch to sukun zalim
saaya kya tera ab zikr bhi nahi aata
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«Reply #7 on: May 19, 2009, 07:02:45 PM »
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Thanks Vitasta
and bahut badiya jawaab dia aap neh


MURJHAYE PHOOLOH PAR BHAVRA NAHI AATA
ROSHNI SE TOH ABB YEH DIL BHI GHABRATA
GAIROH SEY GILA KYA KAREY HUM JASBIR
ABB TOH APNA SAYA BHI SAATH NAHI NIBHATA



JASBIR SINGH
hira_company@yahoo.com



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«Reply #8 on: May 19, 2009, 07:10:55 PM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on May 19, 2009, 07:02:45 PM

Thanks Vitasta
and bahut badiya jawaab dia aap neh


MURJHAYE PHOOLOH PAR BHAVRA NAHI AATA
ROSHNI SE TOH ABB YEH DIL BHI GHABRATA
GAIROH SEY GILA KYA KAREY HUM JASBIR
ABB TOH APNA SAYA BHI SAATH NAHI NIBHATA



JASBIR SINGH
hira_company@yahoo.com




wah Usual Smile

shama ke bina main parwaana nahi kehlaata
zakhm khaata hun main, nahi unhe sehlaata
deewangi 'Viti,' hai jaa chuki hadhon ke paar
dil ko apne todta rehta hun, nahi use behlaata
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«Reply #9 on: May 19, 2009, 07:21:37 PM »
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Quote from: vitasta on May 19, 2009, 07:10:55 PM
wah Usual Smile

shama ke bina main parwaana nahi kehlaata
zakhm khaata hun main, nahi unhe sehlaata
deewangi 'Viti,' hai jaa chuki hadhon ke paar
dil ko apne todta rehta hun, nahi use behlaata




ah ha, bahut hi khoob


RAH GUJAR YU MAJBOOR HO CHUKA HU
CHOT KHA KEY BHI ROH NAHI PATA
NA POOCH LEY KOI ISS DARD KI WAJAH
HASTEY HUYE SAB KOH MAIN NAZAR AATA HU



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«Reply #10 on: May 19, 2009, 07:23:48 PM »
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Quote from: vitasta on May 19, 2009, 11:08:47 AM
kho jo jaata hai ik lamha, phir haath nahi aata
raat saath guzaar sapna, phir haath nahi aata

aati hai yaad uski subah bhi, shaam bhi yaar
sochun chookar dekhun, phir haath nahi aata

ek nazm, do nazm, hazaaron hi nazm qurban
dhundha har lafz 'Noor' jo phir haath nahi aata

na jaam, na aaraam, chain kahan paye 'Viti' ab
ulfat ka ek katra bhi kabhi phir haath nahi aata...


Viti Ji....... Kamaal ki Shayara hain aap.. Pahali baar hi aaj aapko padhne ka Mauka Mila.. aur Yakin maaniye padh kar bahut accha laga.. ab to aapki aane wali sabhi Post ka besabri se Intzaar rahega.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

Lafzon ko Behad Khubsoorati se Piroya hai aapne Is Poem me. yehi iski sabse badi Khasiyat hai.. jo is poem ko khubsoorat bana rahi Hai.. Great work.. Bahut Khooooooooooob.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #11 on: May 19, 2009, 07:29:19 PM »
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Jasbir Bhai aapne Bhi Kamaal likha hai.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooob.. ek ke baad ek Khubsoorat Jawab Applause Applause

**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #12 on: May 19, 2009, 07:33:29 PM »
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Vitasta and Jasbir

Nice going Applause Applause

Keep going Thumbs UP

Vicky bro...aap ki kalam mein ink khatam ho gayi kya? tongue3
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«Reply #13 on: May 19, 2009, 07:34:57 PM »
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Quote from: Mann on May 19, 2009, 07:29:19 PM
Jasbir Bhai aapne Bhi Kamaal likha hai.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooob.. ek ke baad ek Khubsoorat Jawab Applause Applause

**~** Mann **~**

tHANKS MANN JI

JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #14 on: May 19, 2009, 07:36:07 PM »
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Quote from: Rajbir on May 19, 2009, 07:33:29 PM
Vitasta and Jasbir

Nice going Applause Applause

Keep going Thumbs UP

Vicky bro...aap ki kalam mein ink khatam ho gayi kya? tongue3

Thanks Rajbir Ji
aap bhi kuch saath nibha detey
apni kalam sey kuch alfaaz bayaan kartey



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